Arjun FF : T1 : Enigma Revised (Ch 8 - pg 76) *new*

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: 0913155
Justtt awesome😆 loved it it's actually totally engima😃 plz continue soon

Thanks <3 Sure shall update soon😳

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun is blaming himself for everything...
Karan helped Arjun a lot...😃😃😃
Sikander & Ingrov relation has no words...
Sakshi is alive...😃😃😃
Sakshi wants to help Arjun but dont want to come in front...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Aww thanks a ton Sneha! Yep u got the summary perfectly 😳 Shall continue soon

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Whoa dear, what an update?!!
Thank u so much! Initially I was so upset cause I got no response 😭

Superb! Just wonderful!
Loved it to the end!

😳 😳 😳

new twist! a body double for Sakshi!! Too good!👏 She died in the blast🤢

Yesss... that was the opener number 1! Ab aage dekho hota kya hai 😉

Arjun's state was written perfectly, I almost had tears in my eyes reading his pain!😭 You made the devil cry!😉Arjun didn't do any super-cop activities to save himself! He's just a normal human, who's broken beyond repairs.. His wife, his child, his ETF,Sakshi..How much pain can a man handle in his life??He has got it all!😭 You've penned it wonderfully! 👏

Thank you so much for liking this part... I mean I really felt that he needs this breaking point. 😭 I cried while writing as well 😭 You just grasped it wonderfully... thank you so much!

Karan helped Sakshi n now Arjun too! Karan is Sakshi's lover, hayee, nice twist! It'll be interesting to see his role now!

Not exactly a lover, keh sakte ho ki one sided hai 😉 And then it was long time back when he harboured the feelings.

KV were amazing as usual! Verma defending Arjun,whoa!😉

Iska kaaran bhi pata chalega :D

Sik was an update stealer again! Sik-Ingrov scene were written very nicely! Her naivete was portrayed very well! He has started feeling healed but he keeps on giving her scars! Their relation is portrayed very nicely!

Ah thank you so much! Yeah you guessed it right that it's gonna be a dark relationship. Btw... I actually found Sikandar's face... lol. Haha... and Ingrov's too <3

Roshni's bro,..now I'm guessing him but not too sure about it!

Yikes... kahi aapki thinking cap is twister ko de-twist na karde 😉

Do continue soon
thanks for pm

Love you loads my dear twister,
You know..😉😛

Hai mere line stealer 😉 Seriously thank you for commenting so much you know! When I get comments like yours I really feel the urge to write... however i am sad because I am barely getting any response these days... lagta hai I need to send Enigma updates through PMs only now 😭

Love you too <3

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it to the core
Supperbly Written
Arjun's State is terrible he is blaming himself for everything ohh god he lost his child also the amount of pain he is going through is unimaginable
Roshni's brother n that girl
Loved the new twist...!!
So it was Sakshi's body double who died in the blast
Karan also love Sakshi
Loved Sikander-Ingrov moments Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#535

u know how i love this baby of ur's
so in this version karan is also working for KV
what it abt liza
and now abt sikki u know ur the only person who had made me fall in love with him i mean he is real if he is angry he punished ingrove in worst possible manner just to instill fear in her but when he realized his mistake he tended to her asked for sorry he accepted his feelings for her and said to her so unlike arjun who inspite of having feelings for sakshi and may be even in love with her but is not accepting himself leave telling her
like arjun even sikki lost his wife whom he loved so much but still now that he is feeling something for ingrove he is not hesitant to embrace the truth
and sakshi what ever her reason but what she did right now with arjun is entirely wrong she knew very well what he felt for her and what he will go through still he faked her death
what verma gave sakshi was right advise to go to arjun after all this finishes 😊
thanks for pm

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
u know how i love this baby of ur's
so in this version karan is also working for KV
what it abt liza
and now abt sikki u know ur the only person who had made me fall in love with him i mean he is real if he is angry he punished ingrove in worst possible manner just to instill fear in her but when he realized his mistake he tended to her asked for sorry he accepted his feelings for her and said to her so unlike arjun who inspite of having feelings for sakshi and may be even in love with her but is not accepting himself leave telling her
like arjun even sikki lost his wife whom he loved so much but still now that he is feeling something for ingrove he is not hesitant to embrace the truth
and sakshi what ever her reason but what she did right now with arjun is entirely wrong she knew very well what he felt for her and what he will go through still he faked her death
what verma gave sakshi was right advise to go to arjun after all this finishes 😊
thanks for pm

Shefuuu... yeah this one is my favourite child as well :*

Yep... Liza and others are minor characters this time... in Chapter 5 u realise that KV saved Liza.

He didn't apologise... if you carefully see all that Sik ever said was that he didn't mean it. He isn't sorry for his actions, his actions were right but the person was wrong. He didn't accept his feelings.

He just noticed his surroundings. And he knows he owns her... so he isn't like accepting his feelings and he isn't even thinking about love. He was about to leave when he realised that she probably loves him but then stayed back for he feels something primal and desirous for her.

Now Arjun is a completely different man. He accepts his feelings and knows how much Sakshi feels for him. But he truly feels for her. He knows that in a future along with Sakshi he might not be able to give his best and one day down the line they will break . But he had hoped that a day would come when he would get enough courage to break through his nightmares and accept Sakshi's love.

Now Sakshi wasn't completely aware of wht Arjun felt for her. Point one is that she couldn't live with Arjun because at the moment they are at a very vulnerable position. Anyways she wasn't meant to die. Her body double died in that accident and Sakshi had to continue the act.

Hope you understand. This isn't going to be a cliched love story and Sik Ingrov may seem more in love because sexually they are very intimate, but you see what differentiates between Arjun Sakshi and Sik Ingrov is that the former couple communicate through their hearts and the latter communicates through their bodies.

A huge difference.

Don't expect I love you's, roses and kisses out of nowhere :) Just a warning... hehe

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#538

sweetheart 😃 what u said abt sikki is right but still i loved him more in this one i felt that inspite of what ever he did he is not cheating himself ingrove he knows what he feels for her and it is may be just physical but still he knows that he is at peace when with her and even if he stayed back with her it was coz he knew she loves him and he didn't wanted to be harsh to her
and as far as arjun is concerned i know he do love sakshi but what i wanted for him was that if not to any one else he should have atleast accepted the truth for himself which he did after her supposed death to karan and as far as sakshi is concerned true that she was not to die and it was just her body double but she is intending to continue the charade even after knowing arjun's heart and it does seem bit cruel to me may be she is doing it to save him from getting further hurt but by doing this she is hurting him so many times more
but then i always belive that in the end true love always win and these two will win although i would not want sikki to die just if he could go on path of righteousness coz he was not bad but circumstances made him what he is today
waise i did wanted to ask did rest of the team really die 🤔

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#539

''No power of genius has ever yet had the smallest success in explaining existence.The perfect Enigma remains''...Ralph Emerson.

Each time I go through the update I feel an intimidating fire in it.Every character is scathed.The baggage of past , insecurities of present and terror of future is what I presume as the fundamental psyche of characters.The events and words leave me baffled.Its really a very impressive one.Somewhere I feel like some portions are intense dark and melancholic but thats what is Enigma all about.Do carry on penning down a newer version of Paradise Lost..😊

Thanks for the pm and keep writing with enigmatic spirits..😃

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Shivani P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#540

Awesome Update... Thank you for posting such a long update...hihi... Arjun ka pata nhi but i m falling harder for Siks...God the way he took care of her...said things to her..ohh my my...hihi...On the other hand...mujhe arjun pe gussa v aa raha h or bura bhi lag raha...jb wo nhi h tb ehsaas ho raha h bande ko...saks ki apni problems h...hope wo jaldi laut ke aaye warna ye pagal ho jaega...wese sambhalne ke liye karan toh h...fir bhi... Continue soon