Arjun FF : T1 : Enigma Revised (Ch 8 - pg 76) *new*

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

My heart is beating so fast it feels like a bullet train..

Superb duperb update..

I am at loss of words..

Please do update soon..

Can't wait to read more..

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rimi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Chapter 48

lovely chapter...though i felt it a bit short...but progressive..
sakshi is saved from siki's men by verma...but what does a fight indicate?? i didnt get what aisha tried to convey...nways ill wait for you to clear out siki's plan..
then comes siki and ingrov..
kaal's death was awesomely written...
ingrov should have faced such states earlier too...i felt it a bit over reacted by her..and the screams..were they neccessary??😕😕
nways siki is feeling guilty now...he cant trust his own men now..
ingrov dies?? if yes RIP dear...its much better than your own life..
i really sometimes think what these people have to go through each moment of their life..i know i cant even imagine..

nways i am off for the next..will comment tomo...😊😊😊

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
Chapter 48

lovely chapter...though i felt it a bit short...but progressive..
sakshi is saved from siki's men by verma...but what does a fight indicate?? i didnt get what aisha tried to convey...nways ill wait for you to clear out siki's plan..
then comes siki and ingrov..
kaal's death was awesomely written...
ingrov should have faced such states earlier too...i felt it a bit over reacted by her..and the screams..were they neccessary??😕😕
nways siki is feeling guilty now...he cant trust his own men now..
ingrov dies?? if yes RIP dear...its much better than your own life..
i really sometimes think what these people have to go through each moment of their life..i know i cant even imagine..

nways i am off for the next..will comment tomo...😊😊😊

Glad you loved it... hihi... yeah... it was short indeed.

What that fight meant? Aha, let me tell you... little bit... that fight was more like a trigger to the other people... Sikandar's men. The fight was like a little distraction to SV, once the fight took place, from back the rest of the ppl who needed to come - came.

What Ayesha tried to indicate.

Aha, well she pretty much understood that Sikandar had suspected something, but finding him leaving the premises without keeping anyone to check the Club kept her confused... cause Sikandar never leaves anything without investigating it thoroughly.

So by her informer she asked that at such a time at night if there is any off aadmi - people who are actually not supposed to be there - in short Sikandar's men out there. So she called up Sakshi and asked her to get away from the place without making any sort of ruckus or things that can cause a suspicion - else she is into a trap :)

Aah Ingrov's feelings... I had read a little work by one of the prostitutes... about getting raped. The police didn't file a complaint because she was "used" to it and would have faced similar situations many a time!

Over there she had confessed that every single time she knew it, she sat on the bed knowing what is to come, every time she knew what's going to happen to her.

But then that didn't kill the woman in her... and when she was dragged forcefully... she almost died within... it concluded that even a prostitute can get raped... it can hurt her, it can kill her.

Based on that I had written Ingrov's situations, she knew who her client was... she knew what's to happen that night... however... sleeping as a prostitute and getting raped has a huge difference. So that's why she screamed and yelled.

I hope I answered your questions :D :D :D

P.S : I just hope you like the next chapter too...

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laila

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

reswa...I have no idea how many chaps I missed

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: laila1994
reswa...I have no idea how many chaps I missed

not more than 7-8 chapters 😃

btw... pehle se hi sorry if u feel any part is out of line... haha *hide face in palms*

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rimi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#496

read it finally..though got late with comment...😳

ingrov's outburst was brilliant...she finally evoked the broken man from the facade of sikander...i am feeling sympathy for siki now...though i dont want to..😛

then comes sameer and ayesha,...ayesha is double crossing?? is it?? but why??

then arakshi...they always compliment the other...but by now..shouldnt have arjun accepted his feelings for her??

he does everything with her..strip her naked, loved her, show concern, kiss her but he doesnt yet love her?? what rubbish...then at least term it to be his pure lust...but he wont..

i am offended with this hopeless arjun..🤢🤢

nways...all your questions just increased my curiosity...continue soon..😊

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
read it finally..though got late with comment...😳

ingrov's outburst was brilliant...she finally evoked the broken man from the facade of sikander...i am feeling sympathy for siki now...though i dont want to..😛

then comes sameer and ayesha,...ayesha is double crossing?? is it?? but why??

then arakshi...they always compliment the other...but by now..shouldnt have arjun accepted his feelings for her??

he does everything with her..strip her naked, loved her, show concern, kiss her but he doesnt yet love her?? what rubbish...then at least term it to be his pure lust...but he wont..

i am offended with this hopeless arjun..🤢🤢

nways...all your questions just increased my curiosity...continue soon..😊

Oh I just love your comment... no issues for being late reee...

Hihi... yeshhh I love Ingrov and Sikandar... for reasons that... I don't know I just love them...

What all Ayesha is and was doing would be more clear by the next update!

Hihi... Arakshi... yeah... OMG... When did Arjun strip her naked *faint* And wait... when did they make love??? *double faint* Someone hacked my account! 😡

And as for Arjun being hopeless, yeah.. wait first lemme quote this part from my update

" He didn't want her involved in all this. If only he had no chains attached to him then he would have taken her into his arms and accept her as a part of his own. He wasn't a fool to be oblivious of what they felt."

So perhaps this gives you a food for thought as to what would happen the next morning. Perhaps he needed to know a side of what she went through to come in terms of what all his heart is going through.

Arrey na na... DDLJ hobe na re... LOL...

But perhaps... your question might be answered 😳 So stay tuned for the next chapter - btw... needed your help ; will PM :)

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#498

@ Asyalover : Thanks for comment, whose the girl... hehehe...

@ Maha : Thanks for comment dear

@ Skrafty : Thanks for comment dear! Aage kya hoga - yeh next ya next to next update main zaroor milega 😉 Stay tuned for more

@ Rajeeviansonai : Thanks for update, khatam ho gaye... socha tha ek break reqd hai.

@ Shurtiekta : Thanks for comment dear.

@ Princy : Glad you loved the update dear!

@ Shefu : Thanks for the biiig comment! Haan... koi insaan khush hoke nahi badalta na. Dono kyun itne filmy hai, yeh toh waqt hi batayega. Ingrov ke liye u gotto stay tuned :) And yeap, Arakshi paas aa rahe hai... magar chupke chupke... stay tuned for more.

@ Gold : First of all dear am so sorry for having not commented at ur story! Truly... once I get time I swear I will... and thanks you so much for the lovely comment - replied on pg 65

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#499

just read ur update in blog yaar it was awesome 👏👏 👍🏼 there was no arakshi but then i did'nt even missed them sikki and ingrove ki story was so ingrossing ki arakshi ki yaad hi nahi aai
these two battered and shattered souls got connected and may be found love and respect
what ingrove went through was heart shattering but now sikki's love and care can bring that innocent girl back
and what sikki lost with the time and murder of his love will find back with ingrove but then as he said time is always a spoilsport when he had time he didn't had ingrove and now when he found love he does not have time
his and arjun's situation is so similar life is giving them second chance in form of ingove and sakshi but these two pig heads want to continue with their fight instead of following their heart
thanks for pm for the blog 😃