Arjun FF : T1 : Enigma Revised (Ch 8 - pg 76) *new* - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Filhal itna gussa raha hai ki hath kap rahe hai..
Baki ka comments bad mein..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

unres...

Honestly, I didn't like the interrogation part. It was so out of Arjun's character.
They way he described kissing I felt like vomiting. I will definitely kill anyone who would want Arakshi to be together after reading this Arjun's disgusting behaviour with Sakshi.😡
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I am still not sure what was the need of stretching Mahabharat here. I think you are aiming for something & it will be clear in future episodes. Do correct me if I am wrong.
.
About sakshi's out burst I don't think I have to tell you again but still It was what-I-wanted-to-read since a very long time. It was remarkable👏👏
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My dearest Sikender. His star must be a cancer. They fear of being trusted. 😆
On a serious note: It was a glimpse of his character that came out very well. I loved it.

PS. It is my last comment on this story, From now on I will follow it silently.😊




*deleted chapter*
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Shree awesome update
baap re rjun ka interrogation
he has eally lost it
Saakshi ko maar peet raha hai
GRR I feel like slapping him too
FB was really nice
it was really cute
siki part was interesting
P recap too is nice sam n danger
Lets see kya hota hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Loved it Shree awesome update
Thanks dear

baap re rjun ka interrogation

Yup... he is a policeman after all... toh yeh kuch bhi nahi... all he did was tie her hands so as to woh koi utt patang harkat na kar beithi...

he has eally lost it
Saakshi ko maar peet raha hai

Josh main... phir woh khud shocked tha... ki ussne kya kiya...

GRR I feel like slapping him too
FB was really nice
it was really cute

Glad u liked it

siki part was interesting
P recap too is nice sam n danger
Lets see kya hota hai
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Woohoo!! me first!! 🥳

Awesome update dear
loved it

Thanks dear

Sakshi wanted to go n meet Kapoor but Arjun was adamant to not let he go!
here comes the most awaited😉
Interrogation😉😆

He... surprising that this didn't scare you off...

Arjun ke dimag me kya chal raha he sirf wo hi bata sakta he.. kahani-kahani khelni he.. MB ke baad Shravan kumar.. raat baaki baat baaki.. then tied her hands 😲 has he gone mad??

Not mad... the basics of interrogation - tie the hands so as to the person does not run away... and she has a good skill of running away... 😆 kidding... he was desperate for answers...

😲😡 The interrogation was very beautifully written.. par Sakshi ne kuch nahi bola😆 Arjun ki mehnat bekar ho gayi😉 Arjun using Samrat's methods on Sakshi.. usi ki behan he..saare tariqe jaanti he.. 😉

He he... behen yeh hai toh socho Samrat kya tha!

ah.. he slapped her😲 not expected this sakshi is really strong! live slicing of skin😲 it was during the organ trafficking na? Sakshi's outburst on knowing that he knew it was her..

Yes! Organ Trafficking! Well he slapped her in an impulse... and then he too was shocked 😲

beautifully written!👏she gave him the much needed treatment😡 his state was also wonderfully written👏

OMG... finally someone who noticed his state! I thought you too would go into I hate Arjun mode 🤢

ArNi.. really sweet.. SamJun fattu🤣 their first kiss..😳
Arjun is still confused

It's not easy to move on... haha... both bffs so both r fattu!

Sikander.. Ingrov.. their convo's r really wonderful.. she trusts him.. he doesn't want that.. it reminds him of her.. eagerly waiting to know who is this girl😳 the good guy wants to come out but the bad one overpowers him he knows Arjun is alive.. he is waiting for their meet.. I too😉😆

Their meet will mark the end of the story dear!

Sakshi was back.. she cares for him so much!

She always did
she left😲 the chit.. heart touching!

Oh yay... cool... you again noticed the chit part! 😊

Precap seems damn interesting!
Verma n the person.. guessing who that might be😉

Oh wow... who who... kidding... don't say aloud!

Sam 1 - Samrat n Sam 2 Sameer.. right? that means Sameer in danger😲 hope Arjun will Save him😉😃

Righto!

do continu soon
Thanks for pm😊
p.s. - my longest comment till date.. 😃

Thanks dear... means a lot!



Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

What was the doubt Sakshi was having???😕😕😕

Sakshi had a doubt on DIG

Arjun didn't let go off her...
He asked her questions & She gave only required answers...😃😃😃

Sakshi is smart

Arjun slapped Sakshi...😲😲😲
Sakshi came to know that Arjun was knowing about that kiss...
"kiss is just the slamming of lips for momentary pleasure..."...😡😡😡 😡😡😡
FB was nice...😆😆😆

Glad u liked it!

Ingrov trust Sikander & Sikander dont like it...
Precap...Who is the informer...Sam1 is Samrat & Sam2 is Sameer...now Sameer is in danger...

Yep u got it right...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



Originally posted by: laila1994

unres...

Honestly, I didn't like the interrogation part. It was so out of Arjun's character.
They way he described kissing I felt like vomiting. I will definitely kill anyone who would want Arakshi to be together after reading this Arjun's disgusting behaviour with Sakshi.😡
.
I am still not sure what was the need of stretching Mahabharat here. I think you are aiming for something & it will be clear in future episodes. Do correct me if I am wrong.
.
About sakshi's out burst I don't think I have to tell you again but still It was what-I-wanted-to-read since a very long time. It was remarkable👏👏
.
My dearest Sikender. His star must be a cancer. They fear of being trusted. 😆
On a serious note: It was a glimpse of his character that came out very well. I loved it.

PS. It is my last comment on this story, From now on I will follow it silently.😊

Answered in before comment - do check



Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Filhal itna gussa raha hai ki hath kap rahe hai..

Baki ka comments bad mein..

Okie


I would thank each and every one of u personally... as of now 1 thing... I have deleted that ch 🤢
Guess what I expected and what turned out is different... 🤢

So yeah... just scrapped that chapter out... don't ask me when is the next chapter... I can barely keep my readers happy now...🤢
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mujhe na update kuch samajme nahi aya.haphazard lag rahi hay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Update

Saakshi's emotions were beautifully written

Why did you delete the 41st part

Continue Soon
Edited by yams.s - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yams.s

Nice Update

Saakshi's emotions were beautifully written

Why did you delete the 41st part

Continue Soon


Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

mujhe na update kuch samajme nahi aya.haphazard lag rahi hay.


Hi dears... pls don't bother about this chapter... deleted it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon


Hmm... Interrogation... well he didn't do anything apart from tying her hands.. and all he asked was the basic information... ab isme kya ghalat laga... 🤢

It is impossible to create a man who would calmly interrogate Sakshi... after knowing that she might be knowing stuffs of SIkandar... like... I dunno... *confused* 🤢

As I already said, " It was so out of Arjun's character." What was confusing in my comment??😕


And ya... I think Arjun got his deserved shove, slap and reply for what he said.. but I thought that you would pick up from the later lines that he never meant what he said... perhaps that is why he himself was silent...

Though I never realize why people fail to understand the unsaid words... wait... let me edit this para... like in the story and write out the hidden words said... 🤢

Hehehe. Are you telling me that a woman should forgive someone who slapped her just coz he regret it silently.😲
My answer is big no. Even after taking the revenge & making his life worst my answer will always stay NO
not only that I would ask every single woman To fight against this barbarian thinking. for crying out loud show some sensibility on crime against woman rather than promoting it as "Love & possessiveness"
Well statistically speaking most man who raise their hands or indulge in domestic violence on woman do regret it later & not only that some research also shows that they actually love their wife whom they beat almost everyday, so just coz " They love her & silently regret it" we should forgive them. Does that sound right to you.
I know you are not saying the point mention above I know you are better than this, than show that better side.😊

But alas... I guess I have to pen that as well.. 🤢

Yup... once u read the future episodes u would understand...

Well glad there was something in the update that u liked - as in her outburst...

Glad u liked SIkandar's part... I was afraid u wld hv had something to point out over there...

OH last comment... wow... drove off my first reader I guess... cool...

*deleted chapter*


Just to be clear, I am the only one who is not happy with this update. At least that's what comments indicate. I have told you before & I am saying it again "You should not take my words more seriously than needed. Like anyother person I have my own view & It can differ from yours that does not mean one of us's view has to be right or wrong. 😊


Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Please dear... b4 u type anything... see... I just understood that I wrote a sh*t chapter... hence deleted... will think of smthing then re-write
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon


Please dear... b4 u type anything... see... I just understood that I wrote a sh*t chapter... hence deleted... will think of smthing then re-write


Oops. I saw your comment just now.
anyway, Commented above ignore it if not interested in reading.😊

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