Arjun FF : T1 : Enigma Revised (Ch 8 - pg 76) *new*

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prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Ch-39
Lolzzz...nhi re shock mein nhi hospital mein thi...heh
well loved updat
Arjun nd shakshi both r gng through tough tym
feelng bad for both
Arjun knew she vs shakshi...well his actionz cn not b justified bt ya v cn understand he vs under influence of drugs...also he hs feelngs for shakshi whtr he accept it or nt.
Luvd d Arni part...thanku for writnv Arni part...chot hi zhi bt mila to 😳
poor shakshi...feelng helpless nd vulnrble nx can't even shRe it.
Luvd shree nd Arjun convo.
Nd ya hw cld I forget karan .Arjun milap vs too gud 😊
Ya I agree vd u it's nt easy for a widower to move on...dats too vn his wife vs brutualky killed infront of his eyes...he vll definTely need tym.

Ch-40
Amazng update
Sanjna shKshi k beech sab thik ho gya
nw everyone is cmng in mum.
Arjun ko pta chL gya dat shKzhi knw KV...well KV kitne bhi zmart ho...rhenge to juniour hi na :-D
luvd d way u write situTion by tKng mHbharath examples...Arjun krizhna dhronCharya...dis pRt iz too gud
Zo DIG ia d prsn who is gvng all info to sikander... 😡
nw Arjun set trap to bring KV out...hehe
wait...mana baba Arjun jhoot nhi bolskte bt zhakahi ko abhi btane ki kya zroort thi dat knew it vs her...inprecap u write na.
Nd wait...Arjun ne sach mein koi mistake ki thi...devil m.elwarng u jo bhi mistake ho wo choti hi nhoni chaiye...dn't write ny such grave mistake by my Arjun...SYS
mere Arjun se crime y koi bdi glti mtkrwana past mein...plssshhh

ye sikandr ka chaakar kya h...ye grls traffickng bhi jrta h...nd khin na khin respect nhi jrta h...bt wtever d resn he hv6didn't ri8 yo play vd other lyf... 😡

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sairam175

@sairam175

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Chapter 40

awesome part

sanjana and sakshi reunion is nice

bechari sakshi wo thodi sochamgi sanjana ki jaga arjun ayaga

arjun and sakshi are maintaing distance for each other

wow karan sri krishna

sik part is confused he respected woman then how could he kill women

omg dig and sakshi explanation is wow

con soon

and

thanks for pm

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Devi maiyya

i just am awestruck...such an awesome update 👏

hw come sanjana end up in the garage without arjun & karan's knowledge 😕

bt i luved sakshi & sanjana's convo...poor sakshi she had suffered more 😭

i am totally impressed with the way u brought mahabharat here 👏

karan ban gaye krishna ji...bt then he does guide his shera lyk shri krishna jo arjun ko guide karthe the jab woh bhatak jata tha 😃

i just am confused ki hw sam could be karn???? eventhough karn was gud at heart & somewhere he too wanted dharm to win but sam is no way connected to sikki... 😕 i thought karn would be aisha 😆

DIG is dronacharya..i mean he is in sikki's side 😲

if arjun is my mahanayak then i would prefer sakshi to be subhadra 😃

thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Edited by AadhyaAashutosh - 11 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Hey guys... me after a break!

Well readers... a big hug to all of you!

ptuc, k.riya, AamnaKhalid, Sukhi35, sony1990, angelicdeepti,

prachi90, rajeeviansonai, angle1shanu, AadhyaAashutosh,

misakiscarlet, EashaYousufzai, Arakshiya_58, sisodia_shefali,

Areesha566, NainaSM, laila1994, Asyalover, Godly_Affection,

Rehana25, skrafty, _Nikita_, Snehajain, GOLD.A,

@ Chotiammi : Hmm... should I take the first line to be humorous, sarcastic or ainvayi 😆 Don't worry dear... the faces of the husbands over here doesn't change in every 2 years... nor do I exploit in NRI emotions... Yup... from the next to next chapter Arjun starts going behind KV! Oh no... no triangle out here... I just let her mandrao a little bit here and there... even I kind of get pissed of in luv triangles! Glad u luvd that line! the other questions are answered in the upcoming ch! Watch out for SIkki...

@ Shefu dear : Hanji... Glad u loved the entire update so so so much! True... we often fit ourselves in various aspects of our lives that we don't know... What Arjun implies it would be shown here soon... Don't worry... Sakku knows what to do... SIkandar hai hi bada smart!

@ Eeshu Doll : Sakku said that she is Arjun too... Hastinapur ki Raja Pandu ki beta Arjun... (no sorry... too long I guess!) Glad u luvd it sooo much dear! Don't worry abt killing Arjun... Sakshi herself would do the honors!

@ Golide : Thank you dear... I am glad you like the parallelism I drew between the epic and this story... ab Duryodhan... aka Sikandar.. gadha toh ban nahi sakta na!

@ Shivi : Han ji Karan is very very smart! Glad u liked the convo dear... stay tuned!

@ Princy : Glad u liked everything so much dear!

@ Skrafty : Thank you dear so so so much! yup they do get affected...

@ Sneha : Arrey wait for SIkandar's true colors to come out... Shree too is very smart - aakhir mera jo naam hai 😉

@ Nikita : Thanks dear! 😃 😃 😃

@ Neha : Oh wow... I am so touched that you liked my update so so so much!!! Dont' worry dear... interrogation ke liye wait karo! Arakshi confused na ho yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta 😆 Karan hai hi awesome banda! Glad u luvd everything else! Glad u loved the first card of mine! aka Thapar!

@Rajeeviansonai : Thank you dear... stay tuned!

@ Rehana : Yup... don't worry... shayad Sikki utna bhi bura na ho... :)

@ Prachi : Deva... such a huge comment! First of all I hope u r better now! You will get more Arni... but just in this chapter... next chapter se back to jhatka! Glad u luvd the parallelism... Aur Arjun ka past... wait karo dear! don't worry... Sikandar will get his just desserts!

@ Sairam : Thank dear... glad u loved it soo much! Dont' worry for Sakku dear... she is a fighter!

@ Bhakt ji : Oh ji thank you for awesome comment! Don't worry too much in Mahabharata... ab bas wait karo for what is to come dear! Aha... Subhadra... beta woh waqt zaroor ayega! 😉

Ch 41 later :)

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Armagadon

@ Chotiammi : Hmm... should I take the first line to be humorous, sarcastic or ainvayi 😆

Na, neither it is was humour nor sarcastic. It was a plain question😕

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: laila1994

Na, neither it is was humour nor sarcastic. It was a plain question😕

Arrey yaar... I know it na... simply asked!

Don't worry dear... the faces of the husbands over here doesn't change in every 2 years... nor do I exploit in NRI emotions

So yeah - that answers your q na... in short... inspired by none of them...

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Woohoo!! me first!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Awesome update dear

loved it

Sakshi wanted to go n meet Kapoor but Arjun was adamant to not let he go!

here comes the most awaited😉

Interrogation😉😆

Arjun ke dimag me kya chal raha he sirf wo hi bata sakta he.. kahani-kahani khelni he.. MB ke baad Shravan kumar.. raat baaki baat baaki.. then tied her hands 😲 has he gone mad??😲😡 The interrogation was very beautifully written.. par Sakshi ne kuch nahi bola😆 Arjun ki mehnat bekar ho gayi😉 Arjun using Samrat's methods on Sakshi.. usi ki behan he..saare tariqe jaanti he.. 😉 ah.. he slapped her😲 not expected this sakshi is really strong! live slicing of skin😲 it was during the organ trafficking na? Sakshi's outburst on knowing that he knew it was her.. beautifully written!👏she gave him the much needed treatment😡 his state was also wonderfully written👏

ArNi.. really sweet.. SamJun fattu🤣 their first kiss..😳

Arjun is still confused

Sikander.. Ingrov.. their convo's r really wonderful.. she trusts him.. he doesn't want that.. it reminds him of her.. eagerly waiting to know who is this girl😳 the good guy wants to come out but the bad one overpowers him he knows Arjun is alive.. he is waiting for their meet.. I too😉😆

Sakshi was back.. she cares for him so much! she left😲 the chit.. heart touching!

Precap seems damn interesting!

Verma n the person.. guessing who that might be😉

Sam 1 - Samrat n Sam 2 Sameer.. right? that means Sameer in danger😲 hope Arjun will Save him😉😃

do continu soon

Thanks for pm😊

p.s. - my longest comment till date.. 😃

Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

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pls ignore this post

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

unres...

Honestly, I didn't like the interrogation part. It was so out of Arjun's character.

They way he described kissing I felt like vomiting. I will definitely kill anyone who would want Arakshi to be together after reading this Arjun's disgusting behaviour with Sakshi.😡

I am still not sure what was the need of stretching Mahabharat here. I think you are aiming for something & it will be clear in future episodes. Do correct me if I am wrong.

About sakshi's out burst I don't think I have to tell you again but still It was what-I-wanted-to-read since a very long time. It was remarkable👏👏

My dearest Sikender. His star must be a cancer. They fear of being trusted. 😆

On a serious note: It was a glimpse of his character that came out very well. I loved it.

PS. It is my last comment on this story, From now on I will follow it silently.😊

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago