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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear...

It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it..
So rajveer give useful information...
Omg simran was the traitor..
I am shocked..
Actually jo simran hain woh asal main simran hain hi nahi..
I am just going to faint after this relevation...
Awesome twist dear
Hatss off to you..
You are rockstar...
Wow arjun is teasing sam..
And sam was shocked after this relevation...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...

Thanks Megha dear
Glad you liked it
i thought you must have guessed by now 😉😆😆
abhi kuch aur bhi baaki hai
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Mai Bolne hi wali thi ki ab bahut ho gaya... ab to traitor ka naam bata do 😉 aur tumne finally reveal kar diya 😊
Plot thoda dragged lag raha hai ... but now it seems promising and scope of catching speed 😊
BTW ...mera guess sahi tha 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bgargate

Mai Bolne hi wali thi ki ab bahut ho gaya... ab to traitor ka naam bata do 😉 aur tumne finally reveal kar diya 😊

Plot thoda dragged lag raha hai ... but now it seems promising and scope of catching speed 😊
BTW ...mera guess sahi tha 😊

Thanks bhavna dear
glad u liked it
haan haan tumhara guess sahi tha 😆
mujhe bahut logo ne kahah ki main bahut teez bhaagti hon so I tried to keep it subtle & I wanted clues to be bit explainatery shayad isliye aisa laga hoo
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
read part no. 12 and 13th
interesting very interesting...
shaq ek se dusre pe jaate jaate simran pe jaa atka
but simran k pass jo gun hai uss se koi bhi fire nhi hua
interestingly simran k gun pr simran tak k finger printers nhi hai
over smartness ka natija...
aisha ne badi hi chalaki se simran k finger prints hasil kiye
and simran ka jo past saamne aya wo to simran ki harqato se match hi nhi kr rha
simran sabki aankhon k samne Mr. Pratap ko kidnap krke le gyi
arjun se koi back up plan nhi kia tha kya??????
jab wo itna bada risk lekar sabke saamne fake simran ki poll khol rha tha
to use backup plan to rakhna chahiye tha k kuch gadbad huyi to


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

read part no. 12 and 13th

interesting very interesting...
shaq ek se dusre pe jaate jaate simran pe jaa atka
but simran k pass jo gun hai uss se koi bhi fire nhi hua
interestingly simran k gun pr simran tak k finger printers nhi hai
over smartness ka natija...
aisha ne badi hi chalaki se simran k finger prints hasil kiye
and simran ka jo past saamne aya wo to simran ki harqato se match hi nhi kr rha
simran sabki aankhon k samne Mr. Pratap ko kidnap krke le gyi
arjun se koi back up plan nhi kia tha kya??????
jab wo itna bada risk lekar sabke saamne fake simran ki poll khol rha tha
to use backup plan to rakhna chahiye tha k kuch gadbad huyi to


Thanks Anu glad you liked it
yes finally traitor is simaran
well yes arjun ke paas backup plan tha
but he had not tought ki wo pratap ko leja sakti hai
isliye aage pado u will get to know things
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 14 A

As soon as she started the car ETF surrounded her but Simran threaten them to move otherwise she will kill Pratap.

Arjun said, "tum Pratap sir ko nahi maar sakti, kyuki codes ka password to unke paas hai aur yaha se bach ke jana itna aasaan nahi hai"

She started the car with a jerk & zoomed off in huff crashing the gate of academy.

ETF & Sameer started to chase her in SUV but it was not that easy.

She had her ammunations ready & Sameer didn't wanted to risk his father's life as she was a pure fanatic & in impulse she could do anything Sameer couldn't trust her.

Heavy firing started between ETF & Simran.

ETF fired some bullets on the car & to stop her & one bullet hit her tyre.

Simran didn't stop she dragged the car till she could & when it became impossible for her to drive she dashed the car in the tree & took out unconscious Pratap out of it.

She called her gang for help as ETF was bit behind so she hided herself at a safe place.

Here ETF tried to locate the Pratap & Simran but before ETF could locate them Simran's gang arrived & took Pratap & Simran along with them safely to there hide out.

After a while ETF reached there & found the car there empty they scanned the place & found the another car tyre marks which indicated that Simran has already left with her gang.

Sameer banged his fist & said, in frustration "damit! Wo nikal gayi haath se, kitni koshish ki thi hamne pakadne ki, bahut shatir hai ye?"

Arjun said, "wo jaldi hi mil jayegi Sam don't worry, kyuki jab tak usse password nahi mil jaata wo Pratap sir ko kuch nahi karegi"

Sameer & entire ETF reached back at the academy & all were tensed about Partap as he was under the custody of gang.

Sameer seemed to be shattered with all the sudden happenings as now his father was also at stake.

Here Arjun was trying & flowing all the possible leads to track Simran.

He asked Shree to track the number she was using here but she had already destroyed the sim & handset too & moreover now what they could do just wait.

Aisha saw depressed faces of Sameer & Arjun she went to Sameer & said, "Mr Rathod Pratap sir ko kuch nahi hoga, kyuki password sir ke paas hai wo unhe kuch nahi kar sakte"

Sameer said, "mujhe ussi ki fikar hai wo baba ko har tareeke se torture karne ki koshish karenge codes jaanne ke liye, I just wish ki hum sab wahan pehle paunch gaye hote to baba ko bacha sakte the"

Aisha said, "Yaha hum sab try kar rahe hai na, kuch na kuch pata zarror chalega aur abhi to Arshad Khan baaki hai yadi unhe Arshad Khan chahiye to unhe sir ko chodna hi padega"

Sameer said, "Miss Kapoor ye sab aasaan nahi hai, unke liye password jitna maayne rakhta hai utna Arshad Khan nahi, wo to waise hi jail main hai aur ab to unhone baba ko bhi utha liya hai"

Aisha said, "To kya aap Pratap sir ko kamzoor samjhte hai? nahi na to fir iss waqt aapko bhi kamzoor nahi padna chahiye aur hum sab aapke saath hai, sir ko kuch nahi hoga "

Sameer nodded & smiled .

Here Simran reached her hide out with her all her men & Pratap.

Her men shifted Pratap in the safe cell of the hide out & one of the men said, "Kya hua bi achanak ye sab kaise ho gaya?"

Shehnaaz grinted her teeth & said, "wo ACP Rawte ne shayad Simran ki poori kundali nikaal lee aur usse uske kisi dost ka pata chal gaya aur usne usse laa ke mere saamne khada kar diya aur mere saare raaste bandh kar diye, ye loog bahut shatir hai maine kaha tha na us Pratap pe sab aata dekhkar Sameer aur Arjun dono chup nahi baithenge"

Man said, "aap fikar mat kariye bi, waise to sab hai hi hamare paas accha hua aap Pratap ko saath le aayi password yahi batayega ab"

Shehnaaz said, "tum is buddhe ko kam mat samjho bahut sakth jaan hai ye aur bahut dheet hai, itni aasani se mooh nahi kholga ye"

Man said, "mooh kulwaane ke aur bhi tareeke hai bi, Buddha bhale hi sakth jaan hoo, aaj nahi to kal sab ugal hi dega"

Shehnaaz said, "Haan wo sab theek hai par ab academy ki khabar hame nahi mil paayegi, ab waha pe ye loog kya kar rahe honge kaash hame pata chal jaata ek galti ki vajah se sab bikhar gaya, khair ab uski khaas ehmiyat nahi kyuki ab wo chaah kar bhi hame dhoond nahi paayenge tum loog us buddhe ka khayal rakho hosh main aata hoga abhi seedhe tarha se na mane to behoshi ke dava sungha dena, waise bhi josh kuch zayada hi hai in baap bete main"

Man asked, "aap kahin jaa rahi hai kya bi?"

She said, "nahi maine kisi ko milne bulaya hai yahan, tum loog nazar rakho uspar aur pooch taach jaari rakho jitna jaldi batayega utna kam dard jhelna hoga use " with that she moved out of the room & started waiting for the guest.


















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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




PART 14 B

She came to the room & after a while 2 people came in & Shehnaaz welcomed them & made tem seated & odered his men for some refreshments.

They chatted around for a while & then the guest left the hide out.

Till the time they were here no one was suppose to intrude in between.

After a while when her men entered, man asked, "Bi ye the kaun?"

She replied, "Ye Arshad bhai ke khaas dost the jo hamari madat karenge ye dono bhi technical's main bahut acche hai, maine inhe file ka password pata lagane ka kaam diya hai, main us Pratap pe yakeen nahi kar sakti, wo har mumkin koshish karega ki hame password na mile aur hum uske sahare apna maksad nahi chod sakte"

Man nodded & said, "par bi aapne iske liye kitni mehnat ki hai, aap in par poora yakeen kar sakti hai?"

She said, "Haan bilkul, tumhe pata hai sabse badi dikkat thi academy main jana aur theek do mahine pehle mujhe Simran Bhargav ghayal mili hubhu meri shakal ki, Simran koh meine thikane laga diya aur academy main apply kiya aur main select bhi ho gayi, wahan koi Simran ko nahi jaanta tha, isliye maine hoshiyaari se kaam karna shuru kiya, freshers ball party ke dauran couple change dance main maine iss buddhe ke gale se access chip nikaal li aur waha ke guards ko behosh karke maar dala, par jaise hi data copy karke bahar aane lagi cadet Singh ne guards ko mara hua dekhkar cheekhna shuru kar diya party main aur darr ke behosh ho gayi, khuda ka shukra hai ki usne mujhe nahi dekha or ussi chakkar main mujhse asli floppy wahi gir gayi mujhe laga codes to gaye"

Man said, "par aapne wo file bheji kaise?"

Shehnaaz said, "maine Shree ko restriction lagate sun liya tha, main soch hi rahi thi ki kya karo fir 2 di baad cadet Beg ka naya tab aaya tha, wo jama karne aaya to maine jaldi se uski email id se hamare par bhej diya, par 15 minute ke ander hi poori ETF wahan khadi ho gayi tab sab saath the warna main pehle hi pakdi jaati "

Man asked, "haan waise maanna padega bahut teez hai ye loog, koi takkar ka mila hai isliye maza aaya"

Man said, "par ab kya unhe sab pata to chal gaya hai"

Shehnaaz said, "to pata chalne do, ab to waise aar ya paar ki jung hai, ye khel bahut dino tak chup ke nahi khel sakte the, kabhi na kabhi to unhe pata chalna tha, kair wo buddha jaaga ya nahi"

Mman said, "nahi bi abhi nahi lagta hai bechare ko kuch zayada zoor se khuraaq de di aapne abhi tak hosh nahi aaya hai" & started to laugh evily

Shehnaaz said, "kahir chodo ye sab uska khayaal rakho kahin sach main kuch ho gaya to bahut nuksaan ho jaayega, codes ka password bhi nahi milega aur iski maut ke baad iska beta Sameer aur wo Arjun hamare peeche haath dho ke pad jaayenge, Pratap ki vajah se abhi tak khaamoosh hai unlogo ko hum zayada der nahi rook paayenge "

Suddenly a man comes who was guarding Pratap & said, "Bi us Pratab ko hosh aagaya hai bahut zayada uchal raha tha, maine use neend ki dava deke sula diya hai ab 3-4 ghante tak sota rahega"

Shehnaaz nodded & then resumed her work.

Here when Dhara came to know of all this she came running to the academy & said to Sameer, "Sameer ye sab kaise hua, koi tumhare baba ko is tarha leke gaya aur tum dekhte reh gaye, tumhe tumhare baba ka zara bhi khayaal nahi hai?"

Arjun said, "aunty please aap shant ho jaayiye sir ko..."

Cutting him short & nearly yelling on him said, "itna kuch ho gaya Arjun aur tum mujhe shanti rakhne ke liye keh rahe hoo unhe aise khatre main dekte hue main shant kaise reh sakti hoon?" & turning to Sameer said "Sameer mujhe tumse ye umeed nahi thi, tumne ek baar bhi apne baba ko bachane ki ek baar bhi koshish nahi k,i tum to apne baba se bahut pyar karte hoo na yahi hai tumhara pyar" all knew that Dhara was in a big shock after all this & no one was able to pacify her.

Aisha holded her hand & made sit & said politely, "aunty aap please meri baat gaur se suniye aapko apne pati par aur uss sipahi par bharosa hai na jo itne saalo se is desh ki seva kar rahe hai"

Dhara nodded with teary eyes & Aisha said, "to fir aap aise kyu react kar rahi hai unpar bharosa hai to, yehi bharosa rakhiye ki unhe kuch nahi hoga aur main aapko bata doon wo loog Pratap sir ko leke is liye gaye hai ki unke paas password hai aur wo tab tak unhe kuch nahi karenge jab tak sir unhe password nahi de dete aur aap to jaanti hai na ki sir unhe password nahi denge"

Dhara hugged Aisha & asked, "unhe kuch nahi hoga na?"

Aisha said, "nahi aunty nahi hoga"

Dhara calmed a bit & Sakshi attended her.

Sameer saw her mother like this for the first time he went to Aisha & said, "Miss Kapoor thanks a lot"

Aisha said with a smile, "uski koi zarrorat nahi hai Mr rathod, jab koi apna chod ke chala jata hai to kaisa mehsoos hota hai main samajh sakti hoon main guzar chuki hoon in sab se" saying this a lone tear escaped from her eyes & she quickly wiped it.
















P-RECAP: Pratap interrogated by shahnaaz & Arjun & sameer execute their trum card in this Master pan & much more 😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Sneha 😊 Good work dear 😃

Regards Goldie & Rimi 😊😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
IMPORTANT NOTIFICATION : Guys this is to inform you that this might be the last update which I am pasting here & I will be shifting it to a blog because of a simple observation that comments & views are just triple in number so Those who are interested in my stories will only get the link of my blog I wanted to mention it before but I couldn't & it really hurts that If I am putting in so much effort & getting no response.😭 even some of regular commentates have stopped commenting so now its high time for action probably I will see by this weekend & from now my all stories will be on blog. Those who are interested I will leave a note for them when to send their EMAIL ID
Thanks a lot
With Love
Goldie 😊




Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
nice update di
Shehnaaz ne ETF n Sam ko chakma de kar Pratap ko leke chali gayi
Ye kya?? Shehnaaz brought substitutes for Arshad Don't they need him now??
Simran n Shehnaaz ka face same thaShe killed simran
Pratap ko pata nahi kitna touture sehna padega But he won't sucumb to the terrorists
Thank God,Aayesha ne sambhal liya...
Precap is amazing...
Ab Arjun apna turup ka ikka phekega...
Ab ayega maza...
Kitna kuch plan kia par kuch nahi hua..
poor Shehnaz
loved it
thanx for the pm

Edited by atharin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome amez super update
loveitt
thanks for pm
cont soon

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