Arakshi 'Aisa koi Zindagi main aaye ' Ch.10@P.33 (14.08.15) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Sorry dear for being late in comment...

I truly loved it...

It's fabulous...

Short though... but I get it that you have had a shortage of time...

Hehe... Arjun yaha pe to paidaishi akdu hai!

Aur Sakshi baidashi Chulbuli!

Superb!

Am looking forward to your new update...

ANd yeah... I can't thank you enough for being the first one to ask me to continue Aye Khuda...

Thanks yaar :)

CHalo.. next time se I will be more regular...

Sorry mat bol yaar. Your comment means a lot for me. Tum sab ki stories ke wajah se hi inspiration mili hai mujhe. Don't thank me dear. Aye khuda ko itna pasand karne lagi thi main ki usse khatam hote huwe nahi dek paayi. Waise bhi mujhe love stories ke happy ending pasand hain tragedy ending nahi.

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Hmm arakshi
superb awesome
hey add me in ur pm list

Thanks dear. Ya Arakshi. I'm a die hard fan of Arakshi. Ye I have sent u buddy request. Do add me.

Hi

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Hi

sry yaar i had my exams so i couldnt comment

an awesome update it was 👏

arjun & sakshi's convo was too gud 🤣

thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thanks Aadhya for taking time & reading my story.

awesome update

Chapter 3

Both shared an eyelock. Dono ek doosre ke aankhon mein khudko dekh rahe the. Nobody was ready to break the trance.

Sound of some animal brought them out of it.

Arjun: Ab utengi yaa mein godh mein utaake lejaavoo

Sakshi: Haa ha very funny. Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein khud utoongi. Sakshi tried to stand but she could not. Sakshi's dress & Arjun's chain atak gaye the.

Arjun: Ab kya huwa?

Sakshi: Dikhaayi nahi de raha hai aapka chain mujhse I mean mere dress se atak gaya hai. She tries to detach but could not succeed.

Arjun was having difficulty as Sakshi's face was very close to his face. He could not move also. He smiled seeing Sakshi struggling with chain.

Arjun held her hands. Sakshi looked at him. Warm tingles ran down their spine. Rehne deejiye. Arjun apne gale se chain utaarke Sakshi ke gale mein daal detha hai. Jab utarjaaye tho de deejiye mujhe. Ab hume chalna chaahiye. Sab doond rahe honge humhe.

Sakshi got up. She tried to stand up but fell down holding her leg. Arjun meri pair mein moch aahi hai. Bahut dard ho raha hai. I can't stand or walk.

Arjun ko uski aasoon bardaasht nahi huwa. He helped her to get up by holding her waist from back & put her hands on his shoulder & started walking. Aaraam se chaliye nahi tho dard aur badjaayega.

Dono tent tak pahunch gaye.

Abhi : Arre yaar kaha the tum dono. Hum sab pareshaan ho rahe the.

Arjun: Ye madam gadde mein ghir gayi thi aur inki pair mein moch bhi aagayi thi tho yaha pahuchne mein dher hogayi

Abhi notices Arjun's chain in Sakshi's neck.

Abhi(in mind) Arjun ki chain Sakshi ke ghale mein. Ye ho kya raha hai.

Arjun to Sakshi: Aap yaha tent mein aaraam keejiya mein abhi aathahoon. He came with medicine in his hand.

Arjun: Ye medicine bahut effective hai jald hi aapka dard chala jaayega. He sits down taking her feet on his lap.

Sakshi: Arre ye tum kyaa kar rahe ho. Mere pair ko kyu choo rahe ho. Aise nahi choothe

Arjun: Aap galat dialogue bol rahi hai. Ye dialogue ek patni apne pati se kehti hai. Na mein aapka pati hoon aur naa aap meri patni. Kyu sahi kaha na maine?

Sakshi was shocked. (in mind - Ye ladka bhi naa) smiles. Haa sahi kaha tumne

Arjun felt good seeing her smiling. Ab aaraam se so jaahiye. Mein baad mein khaana lekar aajaavonga. Teek hai

Sakshi: Ok

After some time Sakshi went outside the tent as her feet was ok now.

Arjun: Arre aap kyu baahar aayi. Maine mana kiya tha naa

Sakshi: I'm ok Arjun. Ye leejiye aapka chain. Ab khaana kaaye bahut zor ki bhook lagi hai

Arjun (smiles ) and said Ok chaliye

Sakshi: Aap hasthe huwe bahut cute lagtha hai. Mann kartha hai ki... Arjun turns to her side

Arjun: Kya kartha hai aapka mann

Sakshi: Kuch nahi. Chalo.

Arjun sleeping his tent. Ye chain pehenneka mann nahi kar raha hai. Sakshi ke ghale mein kitna fit lag raha tha. Aisa laga ki unke liye hi ye banaya gaya hai.

Abhi : Ye dono ab pehle ki tarah nahi ladthe. I mean dono ko ek doosre ka saath accha lagtha. Dono ek doosre ko dekhkar muskuraathe hai, ek doosre ki parwah karthe hai, ek doosre ka khayaal rakthe hai. Laghta hai un dono ko dost banaane ka mera mission kaamyaab hogaya hai. Thank you God.

Such a sweet and sensuous update.

Awesome update the chain scene was too cute n when he support her to get up please make them informal soon I mean when arakshi said aap .,,... U know what I mean

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Such a sweet and sensuous update.

The chain incident was really very sweet.

Thank God they came out from the gadda.

Let's see what happened next.

Plishhh con soonz..

Thanks a lot Eashu. Tum itni pyaari tarah se bologi thu agli chapter jald hi update karna padega.

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Awesome update the chain scene was too cute n when he support her to get up please make them informal soon I mean when arakshi said aap .,,... U know what I mean

Awwesome blosam update cont soon

Thanks Shivani. Ya i know what u mean. But Sakshi tho tum kehti par Arjun vo itni jaldi sudarne nahi waala😉