Ariya FF : Sirf Mera.......Part 8 on page 39 APRIL 05 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 3


Rathod take Custody of Body & send body with two Police person's in Ambulance...

All sighs , while Arjun just look at Ambulance & wear his glares..


" Team ... ofc mai milte hai..." Rathod announce...


" Yaar case ke baad rathod sir aise kyu nhi kehete... ki ab ghar jaao , sab thak gye honge..." Chotu whispers to Shree..


Shree give force smile to him " Vo kya hia na , Priniciple ko hamehs aisa hi lagta hai , ki baccho ko aur study deni chayie... to vo sab kuch jaldi seekh jaynge, hamare Rathod Sir ke saath kuch aise hi hai... "


Chotu imagine , he write down something in Notebook , from blackboard hurridly & Rathod stading there looking at him proudly & saying..." Chotu jaldi likho , mujhe aur Home work dena hai..."


"Nhiii Nako Rathod Sir... plz... aur Homework mat do..." Chotu yells & all look at him...


Rathod & Arjun look at Shree , who just shrug his shoulders then angrily look at Chotu...


suudenely one boy comes to them somewhere & hug Arjun's leg...


All look at Arjun .. & Arjun look at all.. Arjun somehow manages to broke hug... & pick him up...


" Aap mujhe jante ho?"


Boy nods in yes...


Arjun observe that boy,, he is about 8 yrs old , wearing Hospital Gown... he is blad... he is looking like any normal patient,,, but his eyes glows differently...



suddenly that boy ask him that shock him...


" Tum Riya ke Arjun ho na???"


Shrre tu just look at him...


while others look at him confusdely..

Arjun abt to nods in yes , but Suddenely boy again ask, but this Sakshi..


" Aap dar gyi thi na???? tab usne aapko warn kiya tha???" Sakshi now looking all sweaty & pale...


"T...ttt.umhe.. kaise pata ha...???" Sakshi first stammers but then gather herself & ask


" Ofo tab mia bhi tha na uske saath..." boy eaisly answers..


" kis ke saath?" Rathod ask him in soft tone..


" Riya ke saath... "


Now all team just look at him shockgily... they just look at him like he is any mad one..


" To tum yaha hai????? aur ham tumhe vaha dekh raha tha... chalo..." one Nurse comes there...

Boy look at her& smiles... & forward his hand.. Nurse takes him ...


" Naam kya hia tumhara?" Arjun ask...

" Rahul..." boy answers while streching his hands...


"Oh sry..." he sees his hands hit someone..


" Its k.. Rahul..." that person answers


" Vo aapke saath bhi thi na Didi??????? uski smile bahut pyari hai na, yahi aap soch rahi thi na???" That boy says & Liza shockingly look at him...


boy confusdely look at all..


"Liza..." Shree says

" Oh Liza Di..." Boy says with smile...


Liza give him fake smile & nods..

" Ab bas... chalo... " Nurse warns , but Rahul forcefully climb down from her arm.. but Nurse start to pull him... holding his hand...

" Nhi... mujhe.. nahi jana... nhi..."


Suddenely Dr. comes.. "Maria.. kaha tha ye?"


"Dr. in logo ke paas... " Maria ponits out team..

Dr. recognies them..

"Oh , I am extremly sory Sir... "


" Its ok... " Rathod answers , while Arjun's gaze fix on that Rahul who now goes enough long from them...


Dr leaves & team also turn to leave... but suddenely all hears..


" Arjjjunnn Riya miss u so much... "


all rooted at their place... all turn to see to who yells


Rahul again yells


" Arjuuunnn she misss u so much... " & with that Nurse take Rahul in under lift...


all sighs... all are in shock... they dn't understand... But Rathod first recovers from shock... & he look at Arjun... Arjun stand like any statue.. but fill with emotion... his eyes become watery... & without waiting he immeadtly goes inside Hospital again... Rathod orders team goes to Office & he follows Arjun...


Rathod sees Arjun enquires abt something...

Arjun thanks them & turn to see Rathod...


"Chale?" Arjun ask him taking long breath..


Rathod blinks his eyes..


Arjun take deep braeth & knock on door..


" come in.."

Both goes inside..


" Oh Mr. Rawte & Mr. Rathod.. from ETF... are aaj aap yaha ka rasta kaise bhul gye???? ya phir koi gungegaar hai yaha aapka???" Dr ask them..


" Ji nhi , kuchkaam tha..." rathod says

Dr signals them to seat..


Dr close file & keep it on side..


" Ab boilye... "


" Hme Rahul ke bare mai jaan na tha.." Arjun says


" Rahul?????? oh vo baccha jo abhi aap ke saath tha..." Dr ask


" Ha..." Rathod says..

" Agar usne kuch ajjeb sa kaha hai to bhul jayie aap..." Dr says


"Matlab???" Samjun ask


" Dekhiye aise patients aksar aise kuch baate karte hai , per hum dhyan nhi us per...plz ignore it..."


" Matlab???"



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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Omg sach mein ek pal ke liye dar lag raha hai...


Aisa lag raha hai.ke urmila ki naina movie dekh rahi hoon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Very interesting concept yar
Thanx fr d pm
Continue soon pls

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Continue Part 3


" Medical Term mai ise Near Death Experiance naam se jana jata hai... ye ek beemari hia , ya Pateint ka koi Dream ... is per aaj tak Research ho rahi hai... lekin jo log is mai se gujar rahe hai... unka ye daava hai ki is duniya se alag bhi koi duniya hai... koi aise duniya .. jis mai aatma ka niwas hota hai... kuch aise log,,, jinse ye log milte hai , baate karte hai , unke saath wqut bitate hai... ... ye sab sach hai ya unka sapna koi nhi jaanta... lekin jab vo log in sab se bahar aate hai... tab vo apne anubhav hame bata dete hai... aur sach kahu to aap un per bharosa mat kiyije... "



Samjun just look at Dr...


After sometime they leave Cabin...


Samjun starts to walk .. they reach to their car...

" Sameer... " Arjun says


" Nhi Arjun aise sochna bhi mat... ye sab bakwaas hai... " Sameer says immeadtly after understanding what is gng between Arjun's mind...


In ETF


Liza still in shock , she knows actually a girl stading there & walikng & also give her smile... As A Dr. she never believe sach things but today after experiance & Rahul's confession scares her most...


"Hmmm... Coffee??/" Shree comes there & ask her..

But Liza is so lost in her thoughts..


"Heyyy... " Shree shakes her & calls her loudly...


" Ahhnnggg " Liza scares...


" Shree... are mai hue Shree..." Shree cal her down...


Liza give him faint smile...

" Kuxh share karn aho to kar sakti ho..." Shree says causally..


Liza look outside from window... & Shree hands her Coffee Mug... Liza takes sip... & look at Shree..


"Promise Nhi hasunga..." Shree says


Liza close her eyes & recalls all moments..


"Shree kya abhi aise ho sakte hai,,, ko hum jo dekhte hai , zhuth ho?????? maltab hamre eyes ke saamne sab kuch dikh raha hai , per nhi bhi... "


" Liza... ... "


Suddenely LIza place Mug on Near Table & turn to look at Shree..


" Kya mai pagal hue Shree????? ya phir vo sach tha???" Liza panickly says


Shree holds her hands "Liza... tum to ekdum hoshiyar ladki ho... aur agar tumhe lagta hai ki koi baat tumhe samaz nhi aa rahi hai,, to mujhse share karo.. agar mere bas mai hoga to mai jarur help karunga... "


Liza sighs...


"Shree.. vo... vo Hospital... Vo..."


"Ek minute... kahi tum us Rahul ki baat se to pareshan nhi ho na... " Shree ask

Liza just lowers her eyes..


Shree rolls his eyes , "Liza hum sab jante hai ki aise kuch nhi hota.. kuch nhi... vo sirf uski baate thi... aur vaise bhi... Ri ab vaips nhi aa sakti... agar aati bhi ... to vo yaha nhi rehegi... ye uski duniya nhi hai ab... Liza... ... "


"Nhi Shree ... vo Riya thi ya koi aur nhi jaanti... per uska smile.. vo dimples.. uski innocence... aur vo red... red clip... aur diary... uska confidence... " liza says & Shree look at her... like he is getting her point...


" Ek... ek minute... " Shree holds Liza's hand & take her on his workstation...


" Shree hum yaha????? yaha per..." Liza says & look surroundings...


Shree types something 7 opens one file...

"Hmmm dekho..." Shree shows her some pics on large screen.. Shree shows her slideshow.


Liza sees pics... One beautufully girl with Shree , Chotu, Rathod.. & sometimes Arjun... all her pics are very beautifull... Liza looks at all pics & scares.. Shree just reads her face expressions..


"Dn't tel me ki vo ladki ye thi... " Shree ask Liza & points towards Riya's pic...


Liza just look at Shree with scarey eyes & nods in yes...


Shree just shockingly look at Riya's pics...


"Tumm... tum... nhi ye nhi... Riya kaise?????? aur sab???? no... "Shree yells


Liza close her eyes & control herself...

"Hmmm Shree ye .. ye ho sakta hai... "

"Maltab????? tum kya bolna chathi ho???"

" Yahi ki Riya yahi hai... yahi hamre aas paas... shayd vo hame dekh sakti hia , sun sakti hai... per hum use sun nhi sakte , dekh nhi sakte... "


" To phir vo tumhe kaise ???"Shree ask

" Pata nhi... per Shree agar aise hai to ye baat thik nhi hai... uska aise hamare saath rehena thik nhi hai... ye uski duniya nhi hai... "


" Kya fark padta hai Liza... vo yaha hai aur tumhe dikh bui gyi... aur hum... huhh shayd usne hame is kabil bhi nhi samza..." Shree says sadly...


Liza just slowly rubs her palms on his soulder...


" Shree per vo yaha kyu hai???? uska last ritulas to thik se????"


" Ha sab ritirivaj se hua tha... "


" Per Shree koi karan hai jarur jise vo yahi hai.. yahi... hamare beech... "


" Kya hia uska karan pata nhi... "


" Shree uske bahut se karan hote hai... Medical terms nhi maanti , per kuch baate hai jise abhi tak medical terms mai koi solution nhi mila... Shree jab human being ki death hoti hai... vo kis situation mai hoti hai... shayd ... koi accidental death , unexpected death, karan koi bhi ho... per ... " Liza look at Shree...


" Sun raha hue..." Shree says in slow tone...


"Kai baar unki wishes poori nhi ho paate.. tum jaante ho Shree Father bolte hai ki jab kisi inssn ki wish poori nhi hoti , uski unexpected death hoti hai, tab uski aatma ko shanti nhi milti... ya phir koi aisa inssan jis ke bandhan se vo mukt nhi ho sakte.. jis ke pyar ke karan , ye kisi chhse ke karan , vo us hi juda reheti hai... "


Shree smiles sadly looking at Riya's smiling pic...


Suddenly Some Kaki Desai's case pics start.. & Shree smils at himself... suddenely he sees one Ariya pic... Arjun irritatigly look around , while Riya just look at him with so much love... so much concern... her feelings clearly visible for on her face , her eyes... Shree's hand suddenly press "pause " button..


He knows her love , her care & concern for him.. slowly her love getting in shape... Arjun also beheaves soft with her... he slowly start to come out from his shell.. she always talk abt Arjun... Arjun is her fav topic... that she talks on 24/7... she never likes Shreetu tease him , irritate him... she always scold them... Shree knows her love reaches at extent level that only Arjun handle her & her feelings... Shreetu also fears if Arjun reject her , then?????? but in Bak robbery case they see Arjun take care of their friend... and after Riya told them how Arjun jump from that vechile only to save her...


Liza also sees pic...


"Hummmhhh ... Arjun Sir... ( Shree sighs & smile...) Arjun Sir kamjori the uski... har time bas ek hi jaap karti thi Arjun Sir ye Arjun Sir.. vo... Arjun Sir ase,, unhone ye kiya.. vo kitne ache... jo hum nhi dekh paate the , vo samaj jaati unhe dekh kar... bas ek baar unhone daata tha use... tab bhaut royi thi... lekin jab shant ho gya tab Riya ne maafi maang li , aur Sir ne maaf bhi kiya.. tab se pata nhi kaise , per dono hamesha saath rehete... Case ki Investigation ho, ya ghar jana ho... dono saath jate... jaise kuch rishta tha unke beech ek un kaha rishta.. jo un ke beech saans lene laga tha ... lekin Ri ki achnak mauth se ... "



"Bahut pyar karti thi Riya ... Arjun Sir se????" Liza ask..


"Bahut pyar????? nhi pata , kyu ki uska pyar kabhi naap tola ( Mesureament ) nhi.. kisine bhi... lekin jab Riya ne vo bactria kha liya tha , tab Arjun Sir hi the jo use utha kar Hospital lekar aaye the... yah tak to uske last moments Ri Arjun Sir ke saath Room mai hi thi... uski aawaz sunkar hi hum anadr gye the... kuch ajjeb si si shout ki thi vo... "


"Matlab????


"Liza pata nhi per uski us shout mai mujhe sirf uski pain & helpness nazar aayi,, uski bevasi... "


" Aise kya shout kiya tha usne Shree??" Liza ask..


"Arjun... "


Liza rolls her eyes..


" Shree maine pucha Riya kya boli thi last time... "


" Uski juba per sirf Arjun Sir ka naam tha... per ... per ..."


" per kya Shree????"


"Usne sirf aur sirf Arjun kaha tha... Sir nhi... "




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its such a lovely story
Riya is always there with Arjun
Sakshi was very scared after listing Riya's voice
Liza saw Riya
Whose d boy in precap n how did he know??
Can u Pm me Ur stories

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" Aur... aur uski .. uski... Forehead kuch tha,,,, pata nhi kya??? shayad khoon... .. pata nhi vaho vo kiase aaya??? lekin Arjun Sir... "


" Arjun Sir...?" Liza ask


" Ha unki halat to... ekdum ajjeb si thi... sirf Ri ke haath pakad kar baithe the,,, use hi dekh rehe the... jaise koi bada shock laga ho... jaanti ho.. Ri ke last rituals ke time bhi Ri ke Dad ke saath Arjun Sir ne bhi uski Chita ko aag di thi... "


" Per miane to suna hia ki... ye haq Relatives ka hota hia?"

" Ha..." per Arjun Sir khud gye.. aur Ri ke Dad bhi kuch nhi bole... lekin uske baad vo badal gye... thoda bahut unka stritness , rudness jo kam hua tha Ri ke karan vo aur bad gya... vo Ruthless bhi ban gye... Kai baar maine aur Chotu ne unko Riya ki desk per dekha hai.. vaha baithe hue , ya phir uski Chair ki aur dekhte hue... ya kabhi kabhi.. to uski Diary padete hue... "


Liza look at Ariya's snaps & goes towards screen...


Closley she observes Riya,, & her face...


" Kya dekh rahi ho???"


" Shree kahi Arjun Sir to karan nhi na????"


" Maltab????? "


"Kahi Riya ke yaha hone ke karan Arjun Sir to..." Liza says


Shree look at pic & look at Riya's pic...


"Kya ye... ye sach hi Ri????? Arjun Sir... karan... tumhare yaha hone ka...?"



Precap :


" Ye sab.. sab aap ke karan hua hai.. sirf aap... aap hi... "


" Shut up Shree..."


" Aaj mai chup nhi rehnuga Sir..."


" Shreee.."

" Aapki isi ghusse ne meri dost ko hamesha aap se dur rakha... use hamesha aapne..."


" Jo baat tum nhi jaante , uske ke liye bolna bhi mat... "

" Aaj ye din hum dekh rahe hai , sirf aap ke karan.. ..."


" Apne ne hi use ... use mara hai , uski feelings ke saath..."


" Shut uppp... shut uppp Shree... mai meri hi Patni ke chale jane ke baad khush kaise reh sakta hue... tumne to sirf apna dost khoya hai Shree,, apna sab sa acha dost... per maine apne jinda rehene ki baja kho di... apni Patni ko kho diya,,, apni khushi yo ko apne aakho ke saamne marte hue dekha hai... "


" Rawte?????"


" Ha... Riya... vo sirf Riya nhi thi Sameer... sirf Riya nhi thi... meri Riya thi... meri Jinda rehne ki baja... vo sirf Riya nhi... Mrs. Riya Arjun Rawte thi... Mrs Rawte... ... " with that he broke down & goes outside... Sameer also follows him... while others in shock... LIza goes outside totake water ... Chotu Console Shree , Sakshi is in big shock...


Suddenely Liza enters...


" Tumse ye ummed nhi thi Shree... ... tumne to mujhe bhi hurt kiya... sawal bana diya un per... bahut dukhi hai vo... ( then she smiles slowly...) Tumhe malum hai na Arjun ko koi kuch kahe mujhe pasand nhi????? dekh li tumhari dosti Shree, dekh li... with that LIza goes...


Shree just sighs & lowers his head.. Suddedenly Liza & Smjun entered..


"Thanks Liza , tumne mujhe samjhaya... varna mai..." Shree says


"Maine???? miane kab?? kya???"


" Are abhi abhi to nhi... tum aayi aur tumne kaha... " Chotu says


" Abhi??? per mia to Ratod Sir aur Arjun Sir ke saath thi... " Liza says


" what????kuch bhi... per .. tumne to mujhse bola na ki... ek minute..." Shree says & shows them last 15 minutes Footage of Conferance room...


All sees that , Shree & Arjun fight... Arjun goes out , Rathod follows him... Liza talk to Shree... & then door gets open , but one one sees , only Shree & Chotu looking at door &talking... and Dorr gets close & after 3 minutes Liza enters with Samjun...


"Per aise???? to phir vo ladki????? Liza?????" Chotu confusedly ask..


" Riya... vo Riya thi... apne Arjun ke liye aayi thi vo..." Liza says


Sakshi faints , Ayesha look shockgily , and Arjun just look at door...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Part 3 is superb Liza shared it with agree
Arjun not ready to believe what that doc said

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab fantastic awesome update
loveitt
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