Ariya FF : Sirf Mera.......Part 8 on page 39 APRIL 05 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
woww
It's awesome update...👏 👏
loved it...
waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
All reach in that place...


Chotu start to look here & there..


"Maaaiii nhi aau... tooo?" Chotu ask in stumbling tone...


" Hmm , tum yahi raho..." Sameer says with sighs..


while others goes to Morgue to claim body...

Rathod sees body & Dr check body again... & Rathod claim body...


Sakshi just looking at all dead bodies...

all silently goes outside expevt Sakshi , she does not notice her collgues already goes outside... Sakshi strat to walks around 7 reading nameplate of deadbodies... that tie around their feet... Sakshi goes forward & suudenly she hears voice...


" Dur raho useee... apni jaan ki fikr karna sikho... dur raho..."


Sakshi immeadtly turn


"Koun bolo?????Koun hai yaha?????? Chotuuu , Shreee... ye aawaz nikal kar baat karna band karo... " Sakshi says loudly , but one one answers... she look around & find no one is there & then she undersatnds that she is alone there & she runs out...



In Corridor..


Arjun & LIza walking through corridor..

Liza looks surroundings... Corridor fill with Mirror ..

( Mirror and side Pillar then again mirror...)


like this..




Suddenly her gaze fell on mirror on which Arjun walk ... & she shocked to see one girl like her age, also walikng with them... her hair are losse only left side of her hair tied by red clip , she wears red shirt , with dark blue jeans... with diary in her hand.. she walk confidently with Arjun... her face is straight , suddenely Liza turn her face & other side ... but in that glass shows only Arjun & LIza...


" Shyad chali gyi ho..." Liza thinks & accidently turn her face on Arjun's side & agin shocks to see that girl still walking besides Arjun... Liza shockingly look other side glass , but there is only Arjun & Liza's images... not that girll Liza's head immeadtly turn other side & sees that girl...


" Ye... ye kaise ho sakta hai????" Liza thinks & look at that girl...


Suddenly Arjun stops in his tracks & that girl also...


" Mere face pe kuch laga hai kya????? nhi baar baar dekh rahi ho, isiliye pucha..."


"Nhiii.. nooo.. mai to... " Liza's voice fades when she sees that girl give her dimple smile...

" kitni pyari smile hai na iski..." Liza says & again look that side , but now that girl is not there



Precap :


Team standing in Main Corridor...


Suddenely Boy runs to Arjun & hug his legs...


" Tum Riya ke Arjun ho na?" that boy ask & all team are baffled.. suddenely that boy look to Sakshi ...


" Aap dar gyi thi na???? tab usne aapko warn kiya tha???" that boy ask Sakshi , who now turn into sweaty..


" Peerrr tumhe kaise pata?????" Sakshi ask


"Ofo mai bhi vahi tha na us ke saath..." boy answers


" Kis ke saath???" sameer ask


" Riya ke saath... " boy easily answers


All team just look at him shockingly... Suddenely Nurse comes & take that boy with her..

Boy's hand touch Liza's hand & boy smile to her..


" Vo aapke saath bhi thi na Didi??????? uski smile bahut pyari hai na, yahi aap soch rahi thi na???" That boy says & Liza shockingly look at him...


Now Nurse drage that boy


Team just look at them... Dr. comes & says sorry..

Team turns to leave , but suddenely Stops when that boys yells loudly...


" Arjun Riya miss u so much... " all rooted at their place...

Dr inform them something & that shook all.


Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Wow...
Amazing update.
Loved it a lot...
Case finally solved...
That person only took his wofe's life only to ease her from all the pains.
Arjun ke aas paas Riya hai aur Liza ko dikhayi derahi hai.. Sakshi was scared...
Precap is interesting...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
SUPERBBB
SUPERBBB
CONT LOVE IT
PRECAP BHI SUPERB HAI DEAR PLZZZ CONT AND PM
THANKKS FOR PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Awesome fab update
loveittt
cont soon api
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
wow liza see riya and Riya also see liza and show her dimples
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
So riya is present between then😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Yaar tune sach mein dara diya yaar...seriously

Aisa laga koi horror movie dekh rahi hoon...

I m actually scared dear...just awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
aww lovely updates
ariya married in that situation wow
what's the mystery behind riya???
is she alive???
riya is very possessive of arjun
even on photos...
but how did she blush on photo???
loved the way arjun share everything with riya
why that boy said like that at the end???
precap looks very interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
pyaar marne ke baad bhi kam nahi hogi

theme was fantastic

thank u somuch for updating

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