Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Ok I got a beautiful heart attacck in every angle yaar!!!

Yeh Sam is... grey...

Bechara Arjun... I truly feel pity for this man...

And Sam... more than Arjun I am intrigued by this Sameer Damsingh Rathore...

His past made me frown and look aside in anger...

Agreed that he was helpless but he could have carved out a way...

BUt then again... helpless...

At least he tried to protest...

But my heart became heavy reading his past...

I hate his father... if I was his son... I would have just run away with my better half...

His wife.. my heart goes out to her...

WHo was his wife?

I am getting a sure feeling that she would be more than a character in his past...

And yes... Sam's attitude towards Arjun...

SOmething is amiss...

Looking forward to read the next part...

Thanks for the pm :)

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

you know what i really wanted to res and run away but i couldnt..the update was superbly intriguing..😊

first Arjun's unknown happiness...then his helpless search for himself...superb...😳

it gave me goosebumps to read the next part...specially the Sameer rathod's life story...it was short yet well described...👏

his misery to see his wife suffer was depicted brilliantly, i could actually feel the pain he was going through along with her..

he is sounding grey but i know, he wont be one...he is barring arjun for a reason..i want that..😳

a big hug for sketching the characters so brilliantly...

take in some punches and kicks too...you know why..🤣

continue soon

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rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

OMG ... i was like .. arjun sweets😲 ... pura padhne ke baad samjh me aagya ... poor sam .😕... continue soon 👍🏼

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

This sweetheart was a suckerpunch!! I have no idea which aspect of it to discuss first? Should I be happy that Arjun got a lease of life in broken frames or that Sameer is the chivalrous gyy still...or should I gape in horror that Sameer was a dad at 17 and that he knows what had happened with Arjun!!

There are definately too many string hanging loose and to tie them all would be one massive pull-push. So Sameer's origin is from a abyss of muck; where he did wrong his friend by forcefuly making her his wife. And add to it he has wiped out Arjun's trace. Is he protecting Aejun or is the entire layout vindictive?? Only time will tell or you will tell!

Geez that revelation was indeed huge! Sameer a dad at 17!! Woah! So who is his wife and what is he hiding by keeping Arjun in the dark! And what possible harm can Arjun evoke given that he is already a memory-less vulnerability. That sweet diatributing part was sweet though! All in all a total entertainer update!

P.S. I like to make a request that please have Aayesha in the story. A woman's perspective always provides a fresh twist in the tale. Also she is a femme fatale, I have this feeling that she can be a wonderful addition. But again you are the master here so lead us your way! Continue soon and Ramdaan Mubarak!!

Edited by Meself - 11 years ago

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ishita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

arjun ki memory chali gyi hai kya??
Achanak usko apne bap banne k bare kse yad aya? n ACP? well... wo Rawte chaddi wala padhke mujhe hassi a gyi 😆

then Sam's backstory... trust me... it shook me to d core! 😲
poor kid ..at first being bullied... then financial problems...then the child marriage...

n uske bad wala was an atom bomb! ...
" Soon his 14 years old wife was
pregnant with his child."
i nearly fainted! seriously.. i dont wanna imagine even...
what might have the girl gone through! that innocent soul was literally abused!

everything is so mysterious! i m loving it...update soon!

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Feeling bad for Arjun

Sam bana "Balika Vadhu" 😳😳

But that as the time when he didn't even know what he was doing ... he was just following his father's instructions ... That is a the typical Indian society set up

He was also not happy at first and now the way he behaves, he is repenting what he did in past 😳

Waiting for more 😊 Arjun's story and Sameer's wife and kid 😊

P.S. - Me and Aisha were planning a Balika Vadhu types story for Sam but couldn't work on it as both of us were busy 😳😳😳