Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26

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Hi guyz, I am starting a new story here.
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Just to be clear, It is not a love story.
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Dedication note: I am dedicating my story to MWBs who pressurized me to write a story. I hate you guyz🤢
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For plot scroll down😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index:

PM List: pg 11

Chapter 1: above

Chapter 2: pg 5

Chapter 3: pg 8

Chapter 4: pg 16

Chapter 5: pg 21

Chapter 6: pg 26

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres

tum apna devilapan kab chorogi?

ye kaisa prologue hai??😕😕

i am hell confused what you planning to do with the characters? kahi chicken taandoori to nehi banaogi un dono ka??😆😆

agar banayi bhi,..invite me for the meal..😆😆

Arjun's memory loss was written well, though not specified directly but is it related to rosh's death scene?😕

arjun is a father..who is the child?? 😉

well i loved the suspense you have built in the prologue itself..do continue..😳

nd i hate you too..😆😆😆
Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
sorry agar bich me aayi hu to 😆

itna haq to banta hai mwb ka 😆😆😆

and u hate us...but still we love u


unres

now me to hates u laila...

ye kya tha 😡😡😡 shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gya

nice start...arjun ki memory loss...

bs use roshni aur apna naam yaad hai...
okay roshni to mar chuki hai... bacche ka kya hua

arjun to khus ho rha hai k uska bachcha hai...pr agar hai to kahan hai
Edited by chulbuliannu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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But we all love u Laila
Haan shuru kiya bhi to ab ?😡

nice intro & waiting for the parts & plot 😊

Edited after plot :
Interesting laila
awesome plot
want to read the chapters soon
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will post the plot in evening. 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: laila1994

Will post the plot in evening. 😆😆



ye hui na devil wali baat..now i can say..i hate you too..😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimi_invisible



ye hui na devil wali baat..now i can say..i hate you too..😆


7 mins mai light jayegi post ni kar paongi🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres!
awesome!!👏👏
very interesting n intriguing!!
waiting to know more!!
so many questions!!😉😆 [but i won't ask them hopefully they'll be solved in the coming updates😉 ]
continu soon!!
thankx for pm😃
Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
interesting plot
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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