Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26

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rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superb
Continue soon
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#22

Originally posted by: bgargate

Sam villain to nahi hai?

agar aisa hua to mai bahut roungi 😭

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Originally posted by: laila1994

Just wait & read. you'll know😉

bhavna di...laila ka bharosa maat karo...i doubt ki ye larki sam ko gay na bana de...she has loved watching PTKK🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

bhavna di...laila ka bharosa maat karo...i doubt ki ye larki sam ko gay na bana de...she has loved watching PTKK🤣

You Vampi😡

Sam is more manly in my story than anyone else. YOu'll see.

PTKK mai Sha gay tha Sam ni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: laila1994

Just wait & read. you'll know😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ek toh I'm online through my phone and secondly those damn like buttons wouldn't work! You know Laila there is definately something between the two of us. We both sahre mutual hate for each other. Never for once do those damn buttons work; even after I abuse it as much as I can!! Huh...dekh loongi tereko 'like button'!!

Secondly what a mystery drenched prologue. These days I am craving for psychological thrillers and here you are providing me with one! Dil ki tamana hui poori! That was an excellant opening remark. So for the past one and half years our hero is swirling in the oblivion and has no concrete clue that would get him to the end of tunnel! Of course there is this Roshini and a faint memory of his child, about whom he is blissfully ignorant...but then again not a concrete ground to firm your stand.

I must say Laila darling you are turning out to be a gripping writer with characters under you walking a tight leash! I'd love to read more and know the whats, whens and hows!! Continue soon-ish!!

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

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So first of all...

Expected ki tum aise type ki hi likhogi!

NO Arakshi *sniff* ... *dramatic waala faint*

Kidding!

So a pure thrill and suspense waala story I guess eh?

Cool cuz I am all in for it!

Oh - so the story starts with his memory loss...

Ouch that is bad... :( (mean for him)

I guess he was found the day Rosh was attached - cuz that is something that has left a deep impact on him...

Bechara.. he's know in nursing home...

His life has turned into a pure blank canvas...

Wow - he's a father! Par...

kkahi his child didn't die with Rosh na?

Ya phir is the kid alive!

Well at least he has something to be happy!

AM really waiting for what comes up next :D :D

NO wonder u're a mystery lover!

It shows through the prologue itself!

Must say that I am damned intrigued by this update...

ANd what about Arjun's friends and family...

Or is he a loner?

Awesome prologue... Continue soon :)

~ SHree

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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laila

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Posted: 11 years ago

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The following 16 member(s) liked the above post:

Asha03, minamma, Armagadon, My_loveis_gone, jia03, anant90, rinku95, Shamsad1607,

NainaSM, Godly_Affection, greensakthi, rimi_invisible, skrafty, halima_zaka,

chulbuliannu, GOLD.A,

Thank you for liking the update.😃

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
unres

tum apna devilapan kab chorogi?

ye kaisa prologue hai??😕😕

i am hell confused what you planning to do with the characters? kahi chicken taandoori to nehi banaogi un dono ka??😆😆

agar banayi bhi,..invite me for the meal..😆😆

Arjun's memory loss was written well, though not specified directly but is it related to rosh's death scene?😕

arjun is a father..who is the child?? 😉

well i loved the suspense you have built in the prologue itself..do continue..😳

nd i hate you too..😆😆😆

Devilpana to abi shuru kiya hai age age dekho hota hai kia😈

Thank you for liking the prologue

I have already told you the childs name. 😡

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu
res
sorry agar bich me aayi hu to 😆

itna haq to banta hai mwb ka 😆😆😆

and u hate us...but still we love u

unres

now me to hates u laila...

ye kya tha 😡😡😡 shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho gya

nice start...arjun ki memory loss...

bs use roshni aur apna naam yaad hai...
okay roshni to mar chuki hai... bacche ka kya hua

arjun to khus ho rha hai k uska bachcha hai...pr agar hai to kahan hai

Sorry for short update But it was just a prologue

Are you sure Rosh is dead???😆

Originally posted by: GOLD.A
But we all love u Laila
Haan shuru kiya bhi to ab ?😡

nice intro & waiting for the parts & plot 😊

Edited after plot :
Interesting laila
awesome plot
want to read the chapters soon

Thank you Goldie. I am glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
unres!
awesome!!👏👏
very interesting n intriguing!!
waiting to know more!!
so many questions!!😉😆 [but i won't ask them hopefully they'll be solved in the coming updates😉]
continu soon!!
thankx for pm😃

You will have to read to know the answer of your questions😆

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome start
interesting plot
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: NainaSM
nice ...👏... Arni my fav ...😉... nice start continue soon 👍🏼

Just to be clear it's not Arni...Though their will be some glimpse of Arjun's life with Roshni😳

Originally posted by: minamma
Is this ariya or arakshi or anythng else
Well updt soon
N pm me wen u updt

It's not a love story so no Ariya or Arakshi.

Will sure do😊

Originally posted by: anant90
interesting!!...looking forward for story..

Thank you very much Anant. I am glad you liked it😃

Originally posted by: jia03
Amazing start!👏

Thanks Jia😊

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
laila ki jai ho!
u finally wrote...
aur hume hate karne k liye thnx... d feeling is mutual 😆

okay...dat was a small part..yet impactful..
arjun in hospital..visualising roshni..dn d baby part...
loads of confusions!

update soon!

Thank you Ishi.

More confusions to come in next update😆

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
is it the plot!! oh dear certified Res-er!!
Rosh is dead & Arjun is blank now!! & his flashes of memories...nice start!

And Ri-Sakshi...you know I care a damm about those names...just write on darling.

Do continue...& I'm not that bad..you know I don't res. :P

hehehe.

Thank you Atisha.

& especial thank you for not taking your revenge like Vamp😃

Originally posted by: halima_zaka
nyc

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: bgargate
Interesting... but sad

My question ... Sameer Rathod ka role hai kya story mein? 😉
If yes, then I will comment ... else only silent reading ... I m very bad 😈 ... I love my Sam and agar wo nahi hai to mai dukhi zyada dukhi ho jati hoon 😉

Next update is exclusively on Sam...I am sure you will not like it but do give your review.😳

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Continue soon
Thank for pm

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: Meself
Ek toh I'm online through my phone and secondly those damn like buttons wouldn't work! You know Laila there is definately something between the two of us. We both sahre mutual hate for each other. Never for once do those damn buttons work; even after I abuse it as much as I can!! Huh...dekh loongi tereko 'like button'!!
Secondly what a mystery drenched prologue. These days I am craving for psychological thrillers and here you are providing me with one! Dil ki tamana hui poori! That was an excellant opening remark. So for the past one and half years our hero is swirling in the oblivion and has no concrete clue that would get him to the end of tunnel! Of course there is this Roshini and a faint memory of his child, about whom he is blissfully ignorant...but then again not a concrete ground to firm your stand.

I must say Laila darling you are turning out to be a gripping writer with characters under you walking a tight leash! I'd love to read more and know the whats, whens and hows!! Continue soon-ish!!

YOur hatred for like 'button' is damn funny😆

You have no idea how happy I am by reading your comment.

Thank you very much for such a lovely comment But don't expect much from me. It's more of a experimental SS😳

I just hope I don't disappoint you all

Originally posted by: Armagadon
So first of all...

Expected ki tum aise type ki hi likhogi!

NO Arakshi *sniff* ... *dramatic waala faint*

Kidding!

So a pure thrill and suspense waala story I guess eh?

Cool cuz I am all in for it!

Oh - so the story starts with his memory loss...

Ouch that is bad... :( (mean for him)

I guess he was found the day Rosh was attached - cuz that is something that has left a deep impact on him...

Bechara.. he's know in nursing home...

His life has turned into a pure blank canvas...

Wow - he's a father! Par...

kkahi his child didn't die with Rosh na?

Ya phir is the kid alive!

Well at least he has something to be happy!

AM really waiting for what comes up next :D :D

NO wonder u're a mystery lover!

It shows through the prologue itself!

Must say that I am damned intrigued by this update...

ANd what about Arjun's friends and family...

Or is he a loner?

Awesome prologue... Continue soon :)

~ SHree