Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

Laila...tumne kise dekha 4th FB me? ab bta v do...

Dekha nahi. Kia.

Mene Apne college friend k sath kia tha😆😆

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Hi Laila,

Was busy and out attending a conference hence missed out on commenting on your update.

It was amazing as usual... but I really missed the case part...

You know the clockwork that you have drawn so far was truly amazing... I expected that in these flashbacks you would show some glimpse of Roshni's character... you know that tiny clue that would provide food for thought...

I guess it was a filler update of ArNi's memories... it was nicely shown... not the exact romantic story... even though am not a great fan of the pair I liked the way you described it... and it kept me hooked to the story :)

Now I don't understand Sameer... I know he has this huge mega plan going... that suspense is great but his direction of thoughts seems confusing... at one point he doesn't want Arjun to know anything... at another he himself wants Arjun to know 😕

But keeping all this aside I really liked what you wrote... am not thinking or wracking my brains on what you wrote... cause every creation of yours has this beautiful personal touch to it... and it deserves it's amount of appraises...

The fb's managed to make me smile in my hectic and stressful life and I am grateful to u for that :)

Good going girl... keep it up...

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

The following 13 member(s) liked the above post:

savali, rajeeviansonai, My_loveis_gone Armagadon, jia03, NainaSM, Godly_Affection,

rinku95, _Nikita_, Snehajain, rimi_invisible, skrafty, chulbuliannu,

Thankyou guyz for liking it😃

Sorry I am not replying everyone individually this time 😳

@Sneha, Annu, Naina, Jia, Sonai, Rinku, Gold, Godly, Skrafty, Atisha, Savali, Nikita, Ishi & Shree: Thank you very much guyz, I am glad you liked it. Means alot to me.🤗

@Shivani, Bhavna, & vamp, Thankyou for your honest comments. I know this update was not upto the mark. it was cheezy & a bit illogical, I didn't realize it while writing but after reading your comments I read the update again & even I didn't like it

About sameer's character: I know I haven't shown much about him yet that is the reason I announced him as a main lead in chapter 4 and not before that. There is more to his character which will be shown in coming updates.

Bhavna di you didn't hurt me at all but I can't clear your doubt without revealing the main part of my story so I would just say, Just wait & read.

And thank you for giving me the wild idea😆

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Note1: Guyz according to my estimation (which is always wrong 🤪) this SS will end in two or three updates but if it won't I will not rush it & will write as many updates as it takes to give it a satisfactory ending.😊

Note2: I am really buzy with classes & some personal work so I won't be able to give an update before feb. I am really sorry guyz.😒

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago