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Posted: 11 years ago

The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:

ponnuz, savali, meera851, My_loveis_gone, Meself, NainaSM, jia03, Godly_Affection,
Thanks guyz for liking the update.

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Res / unres

Yaah me first

now coming to update ********

Loved it Laila awesome update
sameers back story was rally impressive 😊
& very touching too 😭
sam has guts to oppose his parents
for sake of his wife & his child bravo πŸ‘
but poo girl 😭
here Arjun is unde treatment
lets see aage kya hota hai
as his memory is yet to come 🀒
Thanks For the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thanks goldie.
I am glad you liked Sam's story😊

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
What happen to Sameer daughter and his wife
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks Rinku

Originally posted by: kunchu

So Sam's baby couldn't survive n he rejected the life support for his wife? Meabs they are no more? Thats really sad

He indeed suffered a lot
But Arjun's condition
What is Sam dreading? Who is this mysterious Roshni?
Too excited
Waiting for next part

Yes, Helna di they are no more
You are excited about my story that means a lot to me.πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: jia03

Awesome update!

It was sad to read about sameer's past.
So sameer is the lead charachter... and he does want Arjun's memory to be back...

thanks jia.😊

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

What are the task that Sameer wanted to do before Arjun's memory came back???πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
But he is trying to make him normal...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Sameer's father is so insensible...😑😑😑 ...wanted to kill him...@%#!@&&#^...😑😑😑
Glad that Sameer opposed his father's decision but it was too late...😑😑😑
Sameer's wife give birth to a daughter but she was so weak that she died & Sameer choose not to put his wife on life support system...😭😭😭 😭😭😭
LOL...Arni first meet was πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I guess Arjun was investing a rape case...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks sneha.
I too wanna kill sam's father, Don't worry he got what he deserved. His story will be revealed soon
Yes, Arjun was investigating rape case & it wasn't meant to be confusing.

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
Sam's past is really painful
He opposed his parents to save his wife
but poor Girl
Arjun is undergoing treatment
what next????
waiting for the next part
continue soon

thanks...

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

sam bhi chahta hai k arjun thik ho jaye uske memory wapas aa jaye

but sam ko koi jaldi nhi hai
and sam's past
sam k father 😑😑😑 jab child marriage ki thi tab hosh nhi aaya...ab hospital le jaane se ghabra rhe the
sam ka baby nhi rha aur sam ne life support system k liye mana kr dia
it means sam ki wife bhi nhi rhi...
aur sam issi guilt me jee rha tha arzoo k aane se pehle
ek aur roshni πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
but ye roshni randhawa hai...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• ab ye kaun si roshni iss story pr kya roshni daalne aayi hai thoda jaldi clear krna πŸ˜†

Thanks Annu.
Yes, Sam ki family nahi rahi
Ye wohin Rosh hai bas shadi se pehle surname Rawte ni tha.

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

awesome...
sam also wants arjun to regain his memory .. g8..
sam's past was terrible .. he lost his child but now he has arzoo...
roshni ka kissa abhi tak samaj me nahi aaya...
may b in the next updates everything will become clear..
so plz update soon
thnx for pm

Thanks...
Roshi's character will remain a mystery till the end...

Originally posted by: NainaSM

Nice update

Sam arjun Ki yadasht wapas Lana chahta he
Sam ka past crying
Really very sad rajpoot me hotta he Aisha
Sam arzu ki care and love her
Arjun remembered Arni meet
Continue soon

Thanks naina..

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome update dear

loved it
Sam wants Arjun's memory to come back slowly n gradually!
Sameer's pain is very well described..he lost his wife n child too!n decided not to move on as a punishment!
Arzoo..the little angel gave peace to him!
loved their bonding! very special one!
Arni convo was nice..interesting!
do continu soon
thankx for pm

Thanks goldy.
Yes, Arzoo gave sameer peace which he was searching from so many years.

Originally posted by: savali

Res/unres
sry fr late cmt
ch 3
sam-com convo confused me,sam didnt told anything abt arj to team.
Is he protecting him frm smone? Roshni she is mysty and was killed after delvery.
Arzoo is so cute and she is nw sams responsibility.
Ch 4
so arj case is now handed to other team.
So sam is helping arj to rdgain his mem step by step.
Poor sam he lost his wife as well as daughter and after ages he got relief in form of arzoo.
So arj is responding to trtnt well n last thanks for pm.

Thanks savali.

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

lailaaa...meri jaan... Finally an update from you ...

Well i must say... this was a truly emotional update...

the start... wat is the 'task' to be done by sameer b4 Arjun is back?
then sam's past life.. it was so painful 😭
The little girl went through a lot...
Sam's father is so damn insensetive... Heir ki itni jaldi thi??

The child died...as well as the girl...

And that was why sameer loved arzoo more than anything...because he had lost his own daughter...

Arjun is slowly responding to the treatment and gaining his memory back...
hehe..rosh-arjun flashback was funny..

update soon..


Thanks Ishi,
I am glad you liked it😊


Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible


about the first part...

Sam is wishing for some work which he wants to complete in the little time span before arjun recovers completely...


whats the work?? solve the case?? get the real culprit?? Arjun could help him right??πŸ˜•

You know what that task isπŸ˜†

Arjun is in kerela...πŸ˜ƒ
the doctor is his informer?? well its good that Arjun is getting his memory back slowly...the second half of the update gives a glimpse of that..😳😳

Nope. Doctor is not the informer.
Yes, he is getting some glimpse of his past but he will not get his memory back.


Sam's past...well it was written brilliantly...literally brilliant sketching..πŸ€—

ThankyouπŸ€—

his happiness of becoming a father turned into a nightmare in a spur of few hours of time..πŸ₯Ί
the complications his wife faced due to the sudden pregnancy was justified and natural..
finally sam took a step against his father's so called traditional norms...if only he had taken the step earlier..i dont blame him..just wish...

But this time I blame him. He was a kid & immature when all of this started but he wasn't that immature kid when it ended

then came his own daughter...but she couldnt survive...the breakdown was just so much painful...
he could feel his wife's pain so well..it disgusted his own self when he couldnt give her happiness and peace until she died...πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί
the reason he left her dead..she was spared of the torture he had given her...😭

loved reading this part...this story has a lot of different shades to each of the characters...and you being the writer..i compliment you for it...great job done..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I am learning from you my Vamp. I must say you are a great teacherπŸ˜ƒ

then came the last part...a glimpse of the new rosh...my favourite part..🀣

You are the only person who didn't get confuse with that FB.πŸ˜•
& also the only person who liked that part
Thanks a lot for liking it.πŸ€—

it was a very matured...yet very well maintained update...

well you dont deserve such a quick and long comment coz you made us wait too much...but ab kar diya hain to chaddo..

I do deserve it😑
Thanks for a lovely & long comment.πŸ€—

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon

First of all after reading the update.. am happy you didn't write a scene on Sam's wife... I can't even imagine what the poor girl went through...


Whenever I think about what went through her my insides literally crunch together and I just hug a pillow...

I am glad too😊

Now coming to your update...

Hmm... even Sameer wants Arjun to recover his memory... but slowly... hmm... now what is Sameer upto? (As if u wld say!) Well.. somewhere I have a random inkling of things but would like to know how the updates reveal themselves to be...

My lips are sealed.πŸ˜†

Now coming to Sam's flashback... sh*t man... I just so wanna thrash his father to dead.. blo*dy he has all the guts to coax his son to **** the poor girl... his wife... his love... his best friend... but damn it... when the poor thing needs medical attention... no... he suddenly remembers every damned law in the constitution of India against child marriage!

Don't worry his father got what he deserved.😊


At least the man in Sameer rose and he took his beloved to the hospital...

He always wanted to see love for him in her eyes but now he realized he never did anything to earn that love.

This is my favorite line out here... it just brought me into a highly sentimental mode that I felt pity for this boy... he did understand what he wanted to do... what he could have done... rather what he should have done... and are you successful in evoking a mixed emotion towards the lost guy Sameer...

Thank God somebody did notice that dialogue.πŸ˜ƒ
I loved that dialogue too.
Thank you I have now realized that writing emotions is my forte.


Sheesh.. his wife and child... both died... it's painful...

I knowπŸ₯Ί

Arzoo was his way to peace... true.. nothing but a deja vu gives solace to the heart... My heart feels heavy after reading this update...

I believe that too...

Arjun's memory now... hmm.. I guess a girl had been violated and Roshni was the one looking after her and Arjun had been assigned the victim's case...

You are right.πŸ‘πŸΌ
But it was not meant to be confusing. It was just a glimpse of Rosh's character

Let's see how the case proceeds...

Good going girl!

Thank youπŸ˜›

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Amazing...
Sam want Arjun's memory to come back but slowly...
Flashback was very painful.. Poor girl she went through sooo much...
Sam lost his wife n daughter...
Roshni was a doctor...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm update
Loved it
Amazing...
Sam want Arjun's memory to come back but slowly...
Flashback was very painful.. Poor girl she went through sooo much...
Sam lost his wife n daughter...
Roshni was a doctor...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for next part...


Thanks Nikita😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.
what a sad past of sammy.
Arjun ko dhire dhire kuch kuch yaad araha hay
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

awesome update.
what a sad past of sammy.
Arjun ko dhire dhire kuch kuch yaad araha hay


Thanks...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi guyz. I am back and this time with a very long update.
From many days I was feeling I am doing 'Sutelapan' with Arni so to compensate this chapter is exclusively on them.
For the first time I actually enjoyed writing an update I hope you will like it. *Finger crossed*.


There will be many grammatical mistakes as I didn't bother to proofread😳

Warning: this update is really cheezy which is not my forte, don't expect much
Note: Flashback 4 is inspired by a real life incident...

Flashbacks are in italic..


Chapter 5: Memories

Arjun was packing his beg, He had finally decided to leave the hospital to find his past life. He knew it is not going to be easy, there are many hurdles to pass before he reaches his final destination and now, he is ready to face those hurdles. It has been two weeks since doctor started his sessions, since then he has got so many flashbacks which gave him the lead to follow which will guide him to right direction.

At first he was afraid of looking back but then after doctor's consistent encouragement he finally indulged himself in retrospection. Doctor told him it's was not the blunt force trauma that stopped his brain from accessing the memories it was his very own brain that did it willingly. May be something happened in his past that his brain does not want to remember. At first Arjun was confused, later he realized it must be related to his wife, the love of his life, the girl in white dress. By now he had realized he had lost her long back, she is no more. The night mare he sees almost every day is not just a bad dream but the cruellest reality of his life. Yet not everything is lost. He has something to cling on. Someone, who can give him a sense of belonging. His daughter.

With the hope that she will be alive, He finally said the final goodbye to the hospital staff and headed his way to the train station. All the way from the hospital to station & then kerela to Mumbai all he did was remember her..

Arjun was thinking about her, he didn't realize when he went down the memory lane;

Flashback 1: how dare you question my manhood Doctor randhawa? I didn't say anything yesterday coz I didn't want to create a scene but it was out of the limit.

With every word he was taking out of his mouth, he could feel the fire in her eyes increasing due to the rage.

He took a step forward and she moved back but he didn't stop he kept coming closer and she kept moving backward until her back hit the wall then he trapped her by placing his both muscular hands on the wall on her each side. She was looking scared, he smirked at his victory.

Just when he was about to give her his famous SYS she looked directly into his eyes, the fear was already replaced with confidence & with all her strength she coldly said:

Stop right there ACP Rawte unless you wanna get kicked in between your leg, after that only me but you will start questing your manhood too.

He was shocked by her words, He thought she would get afraid of his fury instead she wass challenging him with so much confidence . Before he could recover from the shock, she pushed him & ran away from there as fast as she could.


He was surprised how their relationship changed with every meeting, from hatred to aversion to gentleness to finally friendship and then love.

It was a long journey but it was worth walking with her. She taught him the real meaning of living. She wasn't like other girls, she was not polite, she had no feminine attribute, and she definitely was not selfless. She had a weird way of making his life miserable. Her sneaky remarks would always overstate his witty taunts. If he was known for his present of mind then she was one step ahead.

Flashback 2: Arjun was lying on the bed of the same hospital where he met Roshni. He was injured, his both hands were fractured. He was chasing some criminal just when he was about to catch him someone pushed him from behind & he fall so to support himself he took the help of his hands in the process he sprained his both hands. And now he was lying there.

A full time nurse was appointed to take care of him but more than looking after him she was interested in looking under his shirt. If it would have been any other day he would have already given her a piece of mind but it was not his lucky day. He needed help & only she was there to do so. But when thing really got out of his tolerating limits he became cranky. He did every possible thing to make her get out. But to his ill luck she complained to the in charge of his ward doctor Roshni Randhawa. It was definitely not his day.

ACP Rawte do you have any problem? She asked with clear indifference

Yes Doctor. Actually I am not feeling comfortable here... Though he only wanted to complain about the nurse what when he was Roshni's annoyed face he decided to stretch it so he started his list of complaints. From a dustbin to the management he complained about almost everything.

She patiently wrote all complains on her notepad and turned to leave just when she was about to open the door to leave she turned back & with a cheaky smile she said:

ACP Rawte I think you should stop ranting like a sixteen years old girl & complaining like a 4 years old baby. It does not suit your macho personality. I mean to say you are grown up kindly behave like one.

Before Arjun could reply she moved out of the room without sparing him another look.



Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago

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