Roshni Rawte case SS: dangerous to know..Chap 6, pg 26

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Note: I wanted to write a scene on Sam's wife but couldn't do it so I dropped that idea. instead I write a scene on Sam's misery. I know, cruel me

Note 2: I have replied everyone (new comments included) on pg 11, do have a look if interested.

Chapter 4: "Realization"

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

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Many of you may have guessed by now so I am announcing it officially. Sameer is the lead character of this story & arni are side characters.

Just two or three chapters more and this SS will come to an end.

Keep guessing about the murderer and don't be hesitant at posting your guess on the thread. I wouldn't mind it.😃

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Res / unres

Yaah me first 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

now coming to update ********

Loved it Laila awesome update

sameers back story was rally impressive 😊

& very touching too 😭

sam has guts to oppose his parents

for sake of his wife & his child bravo 👏

but poo girl 😭

here Arjun is unde treatment

lets see aage kya hota hai

as his memory is yet to come 🤢

Thanks For the PM

Continue soon 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

about the first part...

Sam is wishing for some work which he wants to complete in the little time span before arjun recovers completely...

whats the work?? solve the case?? get the real culprit?? Arjun could help him right??😕
Arjun is in kerela...😃
the doctor is his informer?? well its good that Arjun is getting his memory back slowly...the second half of the update gives a glimpse of that..😳😳

Sam's past...well it was written brilliantly...literally brilliant sketching..🤗

his happiness of becoming a father turned into a nightmare in a spur of few hours of time..🥺
the complications his wife faced due to the sudden pregnancy was justified and natural..
finally sam took a step against his father's so called traditional norms...if only he had taken the step earlier..i dont blame him..just wish...

then came his own daughter...but she couldnt survive...the breakdown was just so much painful...
he could feel his wife's pain so well..it disgusted his own self when he couldnt give her happiness and peace until she died...🥺🥺
the reason he left her dead..she was spared of the torture he had given her...😭

loved reading this part...this story has a lot of different shades to each of the characters...and you being the writer..i compliment you for it...great job done..👏👏👏

then came the last part...a glimpse of the new rosh...my favourite part..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

it was a very matured...yet very well maintained update...

well you dont deserve such a quick and long comment coz you made us wait too much...but ab kar diya hain to chaddo..

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago