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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: greensakthi

nice dr!

one more sad past?
oh no plz!

so ri 's going to know abt aish's love toward sam, at last?

do plz con soon!

and give us a fb to ar too, he..he..(Seriously)
but a happy one plz.
he 's the next, in the row right?


Thanks Shakti dear
glad u liked it
past sab hi hoga na 😉
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow dear...
Mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
I loved sasha convo and there moments..
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update .
waiting for next part .
continue soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow dear...

Mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
I loved sasha convo and there moments..
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm..

Thanks Megha dear
glad u liked it
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dinazz

Nice update .

waiting for next part .
continue soon.😊

Thanks Dnaaz
glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry Note : Guys I am really sorry that I am not able to Edit the parts properly u all must be reading it in a big messy paragraphs but what to do as Sneha is moving out of town & will be back after 1 st jul so please bear with me & if someone can help me in edits than I will be highly thankful 😊




Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 12 A

Sameer smiled at her & said "Nahin aisha aise koi baat nahin hai aur tum sahi keh rahi hoo akela insaan apni kushi se nahin rehta par shayad akelapan aapko bahut kuch sikhata bhi hai par mere akela rehne ki vajah thodi alag hai majboori bhi hai aur iska ek fayda bhi hai" Aisha looked at him quizzically & sameer continued with a smile "wo kya hai na hum jaise logo pe koi dhamki asar nahin karti aage peeche koi nahin fir koi dhamki kisko dega"Aisha replied "aur majboori kya hai sir?" Sameer said "kuch nahin bas jab tak maa baba zinda the mere peeche pade rehte the ki shadi kar loo main hamesha sochta tha ki jo rasta maine chuna hai wo khatro ka hai mujhe shayad kisi aur ki zindgi apne saath jodne se pehle kai baar sochna hoga aur isi vajah se main hamesha taal jata fir finally unke bahut kehne par main tayyiyaaar to gaya maa aur baba ne ek acchi ladki bhi dekhi thi jo paas ke ilake se hi thi ye baat 7 saal pehle ki hai maa baba meri shadi ko leke bahut kush the par jab baarat ladki waalo ke yaha gayi to pata chala ki ladki kisi aur ke saath pyar karti thi aur wo usi ke saath apna ghar chod kar chali gayi main use galat nahin samajhta use poora haqq tha apni zindigi kis ke saath bitani hai ye chunne ka par use mere ghar ki beizzati karne ha haqq nahin tha" Sameer stops there & after a deep sigh continues "par shayad usme wo himmat nahin hogi ki wo apne maa baba se keh sake ki wo ye rishta tod de usse maa baba ko bahut dhakka pauncha par unhon ne umeed nahin chodi thi par uske baad shadi se mera mann uth gaya us haadse ke 6 mahine baad hi maa baba ki accident main maut ho gayi aur uske baad maine faisla kiya ki apni zindigi main yadi kisi ko shamil karronga to parakhne ke baad"

Aisha looked at him with surprise she couldn't believe that this man had hidden so much pain her trance was broken by sameers voice wa asking her "Kya hua aisha khah kho gayi" aisha looked at him & nodded in negative sameer said "I am sorry Aisha maine khamkha tumhe apni sad story suna ke pareshaan kiya" Aisha said "Kyu sir aapne bhi to meri sad story suni thi" & smilies back at him sameer says "waise aisha main bhi tumse ek personal baat poochu?" she looks at him & nods in yes sameer says "Mera to theek hai par tumne dubara shadi kyu nahin ki jo hua tumhare saath wo bahut painful tha par zindigi to nahin rukti don't mind me saying par shayad kabir ki kushiyo ka khayal karte hue tum apni kushi kahin na kahin nazar andaaz kar rahi hoo aur shayad ye baat kabir ko bhi feel hoti hai" Aisha with a weak smile said "Sir aisa nahin hai meri kushi to meri family main hai aur rahi baat shadi ki to mujhpar kabir ki aur maa ki zimmedaari hai aur jis din koi mujhe aisa mile jo meri zimmedari share kar sake main zarror karrongi aur main kabir ki kushiyo se koi compromise nahi kar sakti " Samper said "haan main jaanta hoon aisha chalo bahut late ho gaya hai main chod doon tumhe " She smiled & walked along with sameer to the parking area but cought by riya who was coming from back to take some important details from Aisha. Riya wanted to call her but when she saw she is leaving with sameer she didn't called her back & smiled at them she turned to her cabin & saw arjun standing there with a sly smile as he too noticed them going along.

Riya looked at him & asked "Kya hua sir?" Arjun nodded in negative & said "kuch nahin riya tumhe aisha se kaam tha kya?" she nodded in positive & said "haan sir wo case details leni thi par wo rathore sir ke saath jaa chuki hai" Arjun said "Hana maine dekha hai tum bhi jao raat zayada ho gayi hai" Riya move towards her cabin but thought of something & asked arjun "Sir aapne kahah tha aisha ke baare main ke uska ek beta hai par aisa kaise ho sakta hai maine khud poochne ki koshish kithi usse par wo samar ki vajah se mera dimaag hi kaam karna bandh ho gaya isliye nahin pooch paayi usse kya aapko kuch pata chala hai?" arjun said "Haan riya hame sab pata chal gaya hai kuch din pehle rathod aisha ko chodne gaya tha wahah use sab maloom hua " arjun tells her the whole story & riya went numb after what she heard she said Kya ! par sir aisha ne kisi ko bhi nahin bataya aur usdin itefaaq se rathore sir wahah paunch gaye the to wo bach gayi warna to ye karan aisha ko maar hi daalta " Arjun nodded in positive & said Haan riya par uske paas koi chara nahin thaw o karan ko koi clue nahin dena chhati thi appne aur kabir ke baare main warna wo kabir ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta tha" Riya nodded & said haan sir pita hokebhi apne bete ki garden pe chaku rakhte hue use zara bhi darr nahin laga" Arjun said "Jab insaan par koi junoonsawar hota hai riya to wo saare rishte bhool jata hai aur karan jaisa jaanwar wo kya jaane rishto ko?" Riya said "Haan sir par aisha bahut bahadur hai bahut kuch jhela hai usne kabir ke liye" Arjun nodded & said "haan main batana chahta tha pehle par rathod ne mana kardiya kyuki uski personal life hai aur shayad ye sab use theek na lage" riya nodded & said "par accha hua Sir ne sab theek se handle kar liya par wo karan.." cutting her short Arjun said "wo hamari custody main hai riya aur uska case rathod ne khud apne cell main transfer kardiya hai to karan ab chah kar bhi kuch nahin kar paayega" Riya said with a smile "ye to sir ne bahut accha kiya hai wo aisha ko bahut support karte hai aur kitna khayaal rakthe hai aisha ke bole bina hi unhone uske ghar pe security arrange kara di" Arjun said "haan use samajhne main waqt nahin lagta khair ye chodo us samar ne tumhe dubara pareshaan to nahin kiya na?" Riya said "abhi tak to nahin aur mujhe nahin lagta ki wo dubara aise galti karega" Arjun said "Shayad tumhara kehna theek ho riya par insaan apni aadat badal sakta hai fitrat nahin tum bas alert rehna chalo main tumhe chod deta hoon "








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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 12 B

Riya nodded & left along with arjun to her place here at t he same time Sasha to were on the way to aishas home. After a small drive they reached there & Anwesha opens the door & let them in with a soft smile. Aisha & sameer get in kabir was playing with anwesha in the main hall seeing his Mom back he hugged aisha & she to hugged him back & said "kabir aap abhi tak jaag rahe hoo sooye kyu nahin?" Kabir said "maa aapke bina main kabhi sota hoon kya aap jaao jaa ke fresh ho jao" She smiled at kabir & went inside to fresh up & change in something comfortable & anwesha went into the kitchen to make some coffee for sameer & Aisha. Now kabir & Sameer were alone in the room. Kabir was stairing at sameer as if wanted to say something to him. Sameer in a polite way called kabir near him & said "kabir kya baat hai beta kuch kehna chahte ho aap?" kabir looked at him once & said "Haan main aapse kuch poochna chahta tha" sameer smiled & said "to fir poocho na beta kya poochna hai aapko?" Kabir said "aap mummy ke friend ho unke saath kaam karte hoo isliye aapse keh raha hoon mummy mujhe baccha samajhti hai aur kuch nahin batati jis tarha 1 hafte pehle mujhe wo yaha leke aayi aur fir mere school ki yaha waali brach main mera transfer kara diya aur fir wo jo mummy, nani aur mujhe maarne aaya tha kya mummy use jaanti thi aur mummy ko pata tha ki wo yaha aake hamper attack karne waale hai?" sameer looked at the kabir with surprise he was indeed intelligent enough to guess his mother actions. Seeing sameer in thoughts he called once again & said "aap bolte kyu nahin batayiye na"

Sameer jeaked back from his thoughts & said smiling at him "kyu aapko dar lagta hai" kabir nodded in negative & said "Main nahin darta kisi se mai to mummy ke liye pooch raha tha kyuki jab main yaha aaya tha mummy bahut preshaan thi main jaanta hoon mummy ko wo apna dukh apni pareshani nahin kehti hai kissi se unhe ye bhi lagta hai ki main kuch nahin jaanta par main sab samajhta hoon aaplo kuch pata hai is baare main mummy to mujhe batayegi nahin" Samper looked at him with smile & said "Haan aapki mummuy use jaanti thi waise wo ab police ki custody main hai aur aapki mummy to bahut bahadur hai na ab koi unhe pareshaan nahin karega" kabir said "Par wo hame kyu maarna chahta tha mummy ne aisa kya kiya tha?" sameer said "aap to jaante ho na aapki mummy police main hai aur bure loog hamesha unse darte hai isliye usne aappar aur mummy par attack kiya tha aura b aap apni mummy ke liye pareshaan mat hoo aapki mummy bilkul safe rahegi I promise main kuch nahin hone doonga unhe" Kabir gave a sweet smile & said "Haan mujhe pata hai aap bahut acche hoo tabhi us din aapne hume bachaya" & hugs sameer. Sameer puts his hand on his head & said "aurab tum apni mummy ko pareshaan mat karna jo poochna ho mujhse poochna theek hai" their chat was broken by anwesha & she said "Kabir chalo beta uncle ko pareshaan mat karo" Kabir says with a smile "main to unse baat kar raha tha hai na bye " & went back to his room. Anwesha says "I am sorry beta bahut pareshaan kiya na usne" sameer said "Nahin aunty aisa kuch nahin hai kabir bahut samajhdaar bachha hai" Aisha to came after changing they had coffee & after a while sameer leaves the house.

Bit later when anwesha was arranging bed & found aisha in lost state she says "aisha kya sooch rahi ho beta?" aisha came out of her thoughts & said "kuch nahin maa rathore sir ke baare main sooch rahi thi mujhe nahin maloom tha ki unke saath itna kuch hua hai" anwesha said with surprise "sameer ke saath kya hua hai?"Aisha told her everything about sameer & anwesha said "pata nahin bhagwaan acche logo ke saath aisa kyu karta hai pata nahin kaun badnaseeb hogi jisne sameer jaise here ko thukra diya" Aisha said "Maa wo ladki kisi aur se pyar karti thi isliye wo chali gayi aur sir ne bhi kabhi us ladki ko dosh nahin dete shayad uski himmat hi nahui hoo par sir ko isse bahut chot paunchi shayad apne liye nahin par apne maa baba ke liye isliye to shayad abhi tak shadi nahin ki ab pata nahin wo kab kisi pe bharosa karenge ? aaj shyam ko jab unhone mujhe bataya to mujhe vishwaas nahin hua tha ki sir ke saath aisa ho sakta hai" anwesha nodded & said "haan usne kabhi zahir hi nahin hone diya par ab wo kab tak akela rah ega kaun sambhalega use aur koi apna bhi to nahin hai jo use samjha sake ki ye galat hai" Aisha said "Haan maa baat to app theek keh rahe hoo pa r unhe bhi to koi aisa milna chahiye jo unhe samajh sake warna samjhaute ki shaadi main kya hota hai aap jaante hi hoo jitna main sir ko samajh paayi hoon wo apne kaam apne relations ko leke bahut serious aur sensitive hai tabhi to unhone abhi tak apne past se shayad nahin nikal paaye hai" anwesha said "accha tu to aise keh rahi hai jaise sab kuch chod ke aage bad chuki hai tune ghar main aur kaam main khud ko itna uljha liya hai kitere paas khud ke liye bhi samay nahin hai kuch soocha hai apni zindigi ke baare main ya aise hi saari zindigi kaat degi" Aisha makes a face & says "Maa please tum ye sab fir se shuru mat karo tum jaanti hoo na meri vajah kuch aur hai aur main kabir ke bhavishya se nahin khel sakti hoon aapko ye sab itna aasan lagta hai kya?" anwesha said "haan main jaanti hoon beta ye sab aasan nahin hai par yadi koshish bhi nahin karegi to kya hoga kabhi apne ghar aur kaam se aage tu soochti hi nahin hai aur na kisi ka kaha sunti hai" Aisha said in irritated tone "Maa please is waqt meri priority kabir ka future hai uski acchi education hai main selfish hoke koi faisla nahin kar sakti aur please baar baar ye sab mat kahah kariye wo bhi kabir ke saamne mujhe neend aa rahi hai main jaa rahi hoon sone" with that she went to sleep leaving irritated anwesha behind.






P-RECAP: ETF fun moments of all the team mates & ETF gets a high profile case in which arjun gets injured & much more 😉😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

Regards Goldie & Rimi 😊😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Awsm update
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