Originally posted by: Shamsad1607
Again...You nailed it...too good Armadillo!
The Factory scene...oh my yeh chase toh avi vi jaari hain...& Saakshi..the present is recalling of same past...but this time is it a trap?? Again?
Liza is at home..& Sik's messenger went to her...Again V-K got to know what that shady villain upto...& I'm exited. Plz..do continue...but thora aaramse plz! I can't run that fast na!!
And comment for Ch 20 :
Arre waah!! Are you started eating noodles & jelebi with your veg wrap!! Full on chapter.& yup..I loved it!
Starting with the cute Sam moment...you blend a mystery with cuteness...yaar..it was superb...
V-Ks emotional convo...They had a personal connection with Anands! Really?? That's a fabulous twist...& the emotions you sketched..simply wow!..and the sudden jump to working mode...again superb!
Arjun-Sakshi...yeh accha chasing hain..Sakshi running away from Arjun but Arjun is going to her...reverse psychology!!
And Sik...when reading this part..I felt pity initially for him..bechara...had no information about KV, or that officer's family...our amazing duo brought him into a dead end..but that cunning thing..he found his way na!! and now a destructive planning... My God!! Hat's off dear lady...you nailed it!
Aage ki dhamaka...I'm ready for it with a helmet...
Thanks for PM.
P.S. posted it last night..but Today found it hadn't been posted...sorry for that.(this is not my fault at all it's our IF technical glich!!)
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Well ur super duper awesome comments often give me the best hammer to nail it!
Chase se zyaada this factory will trigger many memories...
Hope you will love the flashback!
KV se kuch bhi nahi chupta!
I myself am so excited ki shayaad aaj teen chaar chapter post kardoon! :P
Aur haan reply for ch 20:
Yummy... jelebi... amar favorite! Noodles - hakka noodles?
Lol 🤣
But yippee u luvd my update
Hehe... loved the way u described mystery + cuteness :)
Ya.. they had a connection with the Anands... the emotion part was damn tough...
Really happy that I could convey it...
Haan... ab situation is reversed...
You see when you let go...
That's the perfect time the person runs back to u!
The only side effect being that he ends up being a little passionate ;)
Pity for Sikki! Ha ha keep pitying..
Uska haalat aisa hoga that other than pity there would be nothing else for him...
Sikki bhi koi aam chor nahi...
I too believe that villains should come in style - what say?
Thank you so much more!!!!!!!!
Ya... have a fire extinguisher too! Well am so glad u luvd this!
(technical prob - Verma ko bhejoon?) 🤣
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