ariya raesha shriza cho---- ss: love has its own way :last part updted - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomely written ... marvelous.
am speechless
lovely.
fairyshah thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kiya yar socha ajj suspense khulega but tum bhi yar
hahaha acha 1200 words khair kuch toh unaati huwi lol

amazing update tha
Riyas parents ne aisa kaha ke arjun wants to suprise her toh ehy did arjun slap her kuch samaj nahi aya boss
if riyas parents talked to arjun then y did he said so many hurtful words to her? ?????

Thnks for pm
cont soon
SATRISHI thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful

but ithana chota ??

man nahi bharrahi hai yaar

ok ok jaldi next part do wo bhi lamba wala ha

suspense ko jaane ke liye besabar intazar hai

and SORRY SORRY for late comments ha

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SATRISHI

wonderful

but ithana chota ??

man nahi bharrahi hai yaar

ok ok jaldi next part do wo bhi lamba wala ha

suspense ko jaane ke liye besabar intazar hai

and SORRY SORRY for late comments ha

thanks for pm


ye bhii chota nikla🤢
thik hai try to give lamba...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chap 6 (shriya!! oh no)

Scene to a wedding house

SM: Plz come ACP rathore... plz

Rathore came inside house wearing white shirt, blue-black coat and matching pant... but with his arms [are yaar apne team member cum mooh boli sis ki shaadi me bhi guns ke saath aaya hai.. inka kya hoga]... but instead of angry looks he came with a smile on his face - a charming smile.

Ra: thank u... sab taiyaarain ho gayi n where is my sis?

Sm: she is in her room

" sir if u dun mind can I ask u something" said rahore

"yes . plz"

"Party is grand... everything is awesome ... but y so less no. of guests... I hope everything is fine"

"Thanks for ur concern... n yes everything is alr8...

Doesn't u know the reason (with strange look)... they haven't told u anything?

"no I don't have any idea.. They..."

"Ya just 3 days ago riya & shree came to us (he n suboy) then they said that their marriage to b done in the simplest way possible and dey want many relatives..."

"Y?"

"ha unhone bataya ki aaj kal woo ek bahut complicated & dangerous case mein phase hue hai.. tesion hai ... Yahi nahi criminals crowd ka phayda uthakar hamla bhi kar sakte hai... they said that it's a high profile case... hamne bahut samjhaya par wo nahi maane.. Khair humne bhi to 4 din mein hi marriage fix kar di... Khair aapko to bataya hi hoga na "

" ha!" ( in an unsatisfied tone..)

" unhone to itna serious bataya ki hamare relatives ko inform tak karne se mana kar diya... not even our close relatives.. bas jinhe already inform kiya kar diya tha unhe hi bulao. They requested ki jo relatives hume acchhe se samajhte hai unhe hi invite karoo and ofcourse ETF!... Finally humne unki baat manni hi padi

Ra (in mind) ria aur shree ne aisa kyun kaha... may b they wanted a simple marriage... lekin unhone relatives ko inform tak karne se mana kar diya.. I doubt

Fb

Riya's phone rang... it's shree

Sh: hello ri

Ri : yes

"I want to meet u in CCD"

Shree aisa kyun kar raha hai... "ok"

In CCD

Ri enters in ccd... when she came she saw shree was biding some1. She couldn't see his face... also the table was very far so only a small , black, hazy figure was visible..

" hi shree.."

" ha kya wooa wo" he was baffled at her sudden appearance... shree didn't saw when riya entered

" y r u so baffled (she sat on opp chair) n whom u was talking"

" wo no1 .. an old frnd"

" ok bolo kyun bulaya yaha?"

"wo ri kya hai na mein chahta hoon ki hamare shaadi mein koi na aaye.. only etf. & relatives ko inform tak na kiya jaaye"

" par kyun .. shree if u don't want to marry the plz.. Im fine tumpe koi pressure (force *area * ROFL* ) nahi hai.."

"nahi ri aisi koi baat nahi hai.. bas tum jaanti ho na hamari shaadi kaisi ho rahi hai... just for that reason and really nothing else.."

" r u sure ( expecting him to reject) "

" yes.. then letz go .. parents se baat karte hai"

" ok lets go"

Fb ends

And that's y they lied to their parents about the high profile case to convince them.

Rathore n sayan were talking.

Am (running actually sprinting) (baffled n gasping): (2 sayan) ri darja kholche na ( ri is not opening the door) (to rathore) sir.. beta... ri door nahi khol rahi hai... mein use kabse awazz de rahi hoo,... use dekhne ke liye gayi thi... Par wo kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai

Every1 sprinted in front of riya's door

Ra: riya open the door now! It's an order ( what the... wah shaadi mein bride ko hi order inka kuch nahi ho sakta.😆.)

But no sound came from inside

" dammit"

Rahore dialed chtu's no...

Chotu : yes sir! Hum sab pahuch hi rahe hai... mein aur aisha bas riya ke ghar...

"kya aisha tumhare saath hai.. par kyon? When I asked her she told me that she will come with her friends... dammit"

" sir plz don't get hyper actually.."

Ra: ( shouting) what me & hyper han? ( seeing that riya's parent are giving him strange looks.. he stopped 7 then said in a calm voice ) wo jaldi aau yaha problem hai..

" yes sir... just 10 mins more"

"10 mins! Dammit! Come soon!"

" yes.."

But rathore already cut tha call

seeing chotu tensed aisha asked him " kya hua chotu "

" kuch nahi sir jaldi boola rahe hai.. wo bol rahe hai kuch prob hai.."

Aisha mv: mein chotu ke saath hu sayad yahi prob hai.. good job aisha... yes mission jealous successful "successful"

Chotu: tune kuch kaha kya?

" wo nahi kuch bhi to nahi.. " aisha said

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Rathore calling liza.. tring.. tring tring

Liza : yes sir , any problem?!

" come quick" rahore after thinking for few sec

" sir u know na. I m in shimla.. I took holidays 2 days ago.."

" ya but come quick... its emergency related to riya"

" ok sir... I will catch the next fl8 and will be there In 3 hrs"

Here chotu drove fastly coz of rathores DAMMIT and reached there soon in 5 mins...

Rahore explained chotu & Aisha everything

Chotu thumped on the door n broke it.

Every1 came inside & was still

Chotu: sir I thik we call shree... he must

Ra: oh shut up chotu... today is his marriage &..

Ai: I think chotu is r8... he may help us using his tech knowledge

Ra: (calmly) hmm I think u r r8 aisha... good job

Ai(smiling a bit): thanks sir

Chotu (MV): Meine bola to shut up🤢 n aisha ne bola to good job... not fair😭

Ra(realizing what he said to ch): aa chotu.. good & aisha..

"yes sir"

" nothing"

When every1 was going downsairs... sam Slowly came near aisha n whispered in her ear "u r looking beautiful 2day" and went past smiling. She gave a shy smile to herself.

Rahore had already called shree in mokh. Mansion

In hall

Ra: sir firstly inform every 1 that the marriage is postponed

Am: kintu( but..)

Sm: he is r8 apo*na... ye to achha hua ki hamne sirf close relatives ko hi invite kiya//

Ra: mam when did u last saw riya

" just 35 min ago"

Ai: did u saw her?

"no her dor was locked (crying) I thought she wants to b alone for sometime

Ch: aunty.. dun worry.. very soon we will find riya

Ra: uske room mein koi gaya tha or anything else..

Am: ya only makeup girl"

Ai: when

Am: almost 1 hr

Ai: (suspiciously) kya??

Am: no .. she took her fees rs 1000 and went nearly 30 mins.. before

Ai: she went?

Am: ya we tr8 to stop her... butshe said that she had other appointments too..

Ai( to herself) 1000rs.. n in this season

Chotu asked her what she is thinking, she replied that "in this wedding season at fees shuld b min. rs 3000.. (mindlessly) I think I should appoint her only for my marriage

Ra (coghing) uuhh uhu .. (seriously) guys lets b serious

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Sorry no ariya... but I thought to enter sasha.. that's y..

Precap: y every1 was still ehrn dey entered riya's room.

Pm only 2 those who leae a like

1200+ words so big cmmnt

Edited by TINASINGHPS - 11 years ago
FLOREY thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairyshah

Kiya yar socha ajj suspense khulega but tum bhi yar
hahaha acha 1200 words khair kuch toh unaati huwi lol

amazing update tha
Riyas parents ne aisa kaha ke arjun wants to suprise her toh ehy did arjun slap her kuch samaj nahi aya boss
if riyas parents talked to arjun then y did he said so many hurtful words to her? ?????

Thnks for pm
cont soon

well half suspence khula hai... half abhi baaki hai...
n if u read comments bahut infat sabhi ne sahi guess kiya hai😆
n ri parents never said HE want to srprse u
unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting.. Riya missing.. Sam jealous.. Sam's convo with ri's parents.. All tensed.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
SATRISHI thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
sREE AUR rIYA MARRAIGE??

KISKO NAHI BULAYA ??

YE THO KUCH THO CHOOT RAH HAI.

oK rIYA MISSED YE THO PATAHCHALA .

HMM IS TIME BHI ROMANCE NOT BAD rATHORE SIR .
CHOTU KA THO DANT AUR AYESHA KO THO GOOD

CONT SOON THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting
to arjun ne hi ri ko kidnap kiya
jaldi update doo
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update!!!
I thot ki iss baar mystery clear hogi!!!
Bt esa ku6 nahi hua!!
Sasha part was nyc!
Poor chotu! 😆
Aisha absentmindedly said that she'll hire that make-up lady for her own wedding!! Making sam cough!!! 😆
Bt has arjun kidnapped riya???
N y did shree n riya agree to the marriage?
N who was shree talking to??
So many Qs!!!
Continue soon!!!

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