Arakshi OS: Wada Raha

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Hey Guys. This wonderful OS is written by my sweet little sis Gausiya (User ID- Arakshya_58). She was scared to post it. So, on her behalf I am posting this. Please read and left ur precious comment for her as it's her first creation. Thank you..


Shakshi's POV


Today is my birthday...But I am upset because I expected him to at least wish me...he THE ACP Arjun Rawte...all office members, security guard and watch men wished me...but he doesn't even care...because yesterday we fought on my silly talks...and since morning he didn't talk to me...

Two months before he get his revenge...after sometime we became friends...yes me and ACP are friends now ...at morning he wishes first...during case time...he took care of me...every night drop me...even he heard my silly jokes and laughed too...after all this things I expected this...but no... oh god!!! I don't want to think about this...I decided to go back to home and sleep...as I didnt sleep whole night waiting for his massage or call...I know crazy me...Sameer give me permission...as today there is no case..and now I m going to home ...

GOOD BYE ACP ARJUN RAWTE...

In Arjun's Cabin:
He is sitting with closed eyes... his expression saying that he is lost in something very important...suddenly Sameer enter and shouted...
Sameer: ARJUN!!!
He opened his eyes and replied angrily...
Arjun: Kya hai Sam??? itna gusse me kyu ho??? achcha khasa planning kar raha tha...disturb kar diya...

Sameer: Saale kis cheez pe tu itna concentrate kar raha tha...ke distureb ho gaya...aur waise bhi aaj to koi case bhi nahi hai..bata..
Arjun: Woh...woh...me tujhe kyu batau??? tu bata kyu aya tha???
Sameer: Ye batane aaya tha ke tune aaj phir Shakshi ko upset kar diya...sudharja saaley..aur kitna satayega apne pyaar ko...(Arjun accept his feelings infront of Sameer...)
Arjun: Kya ...Wo upset thi per kyu???
Sameer: Kyunki tune usse subah se baat nahi ki...
Arjun: Arrey yaar...kal fight ke baad "don't even dare to talk to me"...(he act like her)...aur ab upset hogayi...kya hoga mera?? tu ruk me aaya usse milke...(he stands upto go ...)
Sameer: Koi fayeda nahi chali gayi wo apne ghar...
Arjun: What!!! tune permission kyu di? ek kaam to aisa kiya kar jisse mujhe khusi ho...sari planning ki band baja di...
Now Sameer undrstand the reason behind his planning.
Sameer: Mujhe kya office me bathe sapne aate hai ki ACP Arjun Rawte apne lady love ko surprise dena chahte hai...aur tujhe to birthday parties pasand nahi he na!!
Arjun: Yehi expected hai tujse...chal ja yahase aur mujhe akela chod..
Sameer :Sorry yaar..chal main teri help karta hu...bata mjhe kya karna hoga...
Arjun agreed with him...and tell him what he has to do..

Then Sameer went to his cabin... Arjun made some calls ...and discussed something...After somethime he came out and go straight to Aisha's side who was in conference room with Shree, Chotu and liza...He sat on his chair with file in his hand...
After sometime someone's phone buzzed...Without looking up he spoke up.

Arjun: Ayesha tumhara mobile baj raha hai ..Check it...
Every stared at him and he ingored them...Ayesha checked her phone and look at Arjun with confused expression...beacause it's massage from Arjun...She quickly open it and get shocked...After that Arjun left from there...Ayesha told team that she have to go and stood upto go...When her phone buzzed again...Its again his massage...

Please Ayesha do this for me please...

She came out from there where Arjun already stood with questioning look...She saw him and nodded her head with agreement...
Arjun's face lit up...He gave him a smile and left from there...This day is one of the shocking day for Ayesha...First he asked her for help and said please then gave her smile...After sometime she also left as working hours were over...

At Sakshi's Flat:
She was tossing on her bed...thinking about something ...After fifteen years she wish to celebrate her birthday with her new friends or should say her only family...before fifteen years she lost her family...After that she never celebrated her birthday as she had no one...She was lost in her thought when her doorbell ring...She quickly run towards the door thinking that it's ARJUN...

As she opene the door her all exitement faded away because it was Ayesha...She quickly composed herself...She ask her to come in...Ayesha entered in her house and she closed the door...As she turn to face her Ayesha hugged her tightly...Someone can say this easily that she is too happy...Shakshi hugged her back...After sometime they parted...
Sakshi:Hey Ayesha itni kush kyu ho?? Kahi sameer ne prepose to nahi kar diya?? tell me tell me...
Ayesha: Oh God!!! Shakshi tum kitne sawal karti ho..chup raho aur meri baat suno...(She handed her one bag) ye lo aur jaake ready ho jao...
Sakshi: Per kyu???
Ayesha: Phir sawal...birthday hai na tumhara to I brought this for you...
Shakshi: Woh to mujhe bhi pata hai...and thanx for this...per ready kyu ho???
Ayesha:wo mere bhai ki engagement hai..aur puri team aa rahi hai...so don't even dare to argue with me...mana mat karna...go and get ready fast...
Shakshi thought for a while...

Sakshi (in mind): Agar gharme rahunga to aur upset ho javuunga. Aur rehke karo bhi kya? Mujhe nehi lagta Arjun ko mera birthday yaad bhi hai. Better main Aisha ke saath chali jati hoom.
Shakshi (voicing): Okay..jo hukum...
Ayesha:Tum ready hoke aao...isme sab hai I hope you will like it...
Sakshi open it and hugged Ayesha with joy...It's beautifull red saari with golden dot. It has deep back red colored blouse. Beautifull red jumke...with golden pedent with chain. Golden and red bangles..
Sakshi: I love it Ayesha me abhi change kar ke aati hu...

Sakshi got ready fast beacause Ayesha told her that they have to reach there at 8:30 and its almost 7:00. While getting ready she couldn't help but thought about Arjun. She had kept her hair down. What would he do if he see her in this attire. Yes, she loved him But never could voice it out. What if he denied her. What if he started loath her. She didn't want to ruin the beautiful friendship they have...After sometime they both sat in Ayesha's car and left for their destination...

In Car:

Ayesha was driving and Sakshi was listening songs...Suddenly something clicked her and she looked at Ayesha...
Ayesha: Kya hai ab?? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho??
Sakshi: Ayesha me ye soch rahi thi ke tumhara to koi bhai hi nahi tha...abhi kuch din pehle to tum ne kaha tha ke u have no brother-sister...to ye kiski engagement hai?
Ayesha thought for sometime what to say..then she answered...
Ayesha: Jaise tum Sameer ko bhai manti ho...aur unke engagement me tum jaogi na...to waise hi ye mere bhai hai...
Shakshi: Par...(but before she say somthing Ayesha cut her short)...
Ayesha: No more question...dekho hum pohoch gaye...tum chalo waha garden me sab honge...me gaadi park kar ke aati hu...
Shakshi nodded and walk towards the direction which Ayesha pointed..
Sakshi reach there and freezed on her step...She amaze to see the scene infront of her eyes...
There is a big stage with red carpet on it...Stage 's whole boundery is covered with red and white heart shape bloones and each baloon has her name...there are three stairs to come on stage and its also has balloones boundery...
Besides that four little girls wearing a beautifull pink frock and singing birthday song...Thy were her tution students...She happily ran towards and give them hug...
Girls(in chorus): Happy birthday didi...
Sakshi: Thank u so much my angles...
After that they all give hr red roses in return she give them kisses and ask.

Sakshi: Per yeh batao tum logo ko yaha laya koun?

A voice came from the stage.

Voice: Main.

Sakshi looked up. It was Arjun. He was wearing a black denim pants with white shirt. He was looking devilishly handsome. Seeing him kids ran away.

Arjun asked her to take first step...Sakshi tooke first step ...As she stand on first step boundery sides balloons bursted out...And white flower Patels which were inside balloons shower on sakshi...She got amazeed by this...She close her eyes to feel that moment...Arjun take step and stand besides her..Then slowly take her hand into his...Sakshi open her eyes as she feel gentle hold on her hand...Both look in each other's eyes...

Arjun: The white flowers...thanks hai meri life me aane ke liye ...

Sakshi lost in his words and doesn't say anything or move to other step..So Arjun scooped up in his arms and smilingly took other step..As they step on there again same thing happens...Both sides balloons burst out and flowers shower start again..But this time it's yellow flower Patels...Sakshi notice that and look at Arjun...

Arjun: Yeh humari dosti me liye...thanks ek aise insaan ko dost banane ke liye jis per se sabka yakeen uth chuka tha..Thanks for trusting me BESTIE...

With this he give her gentle kiss on her forehead..And take third step..With this again shower start on her with all colours flower Patel...She again closed her eyes to feel that most precious moment of her life..

Arjun: yeh thanks meri life ko in colouring flowers ki tarah rangeen banane ke liye...Meri life ko khushiyoon se bhar ne ke liye...Mujhe hasane ke liye...Thanks.

Then she put down her and ask her to last step and come on stage... She happily took the last step and come on the stage..With that flowers shower start with red rose petals ...Sometimes she stand there enjoy the moment ..After enjoying this moment she turned around to see Arjun as he didn't say anything this time...As she turned around she saw Arjun was kneel down in front of her.

Arjun: Yeh mujhe pyaar me diwaana banane ke liye..

She saw him with wide eyes as she didn't expected this..

Arjun smiled to see her state and continued...

Arjun : Sahi keh raha hu aise kya dekh rahi ho? I LOVE YOU SAKSHI..I LOVE YOU...(he take out one beautiful ring and asked) Will you marry me? Wada raha kabhi dard ka saya bhi tumpar padne nehi dunga. Wada raha hamesha tumhe khush rakhunga. Wada raha hamesha tumhare saath rahunga.

It was too much for her. She nodded her head with tears in her eyes..Arjun happily slided ring in her finger and gently kissed on that...Then he stands up Sakshi was going to hug him but he didn't allow her...She looked at him enquiringly...

Arjun: Kya Sakshi kab se me hi bol raha hu...tumne to much haha hi nahi...Miss Bakbak Queen atleast ek reply to banta hai itni mehnat me baad...phir hug to kya jo chaho wo milega..

Saying that Arjun winked...She blushed hard..

Sakshi: I LOVE YOU TOO ARJUN..yes I will marry you.. (after a little pause) Now can I ??

Arjun smile to see her desperate state and spread her arms... She quickly went to his arms...Both hugged each other tightly with a promise ...Promise that they will always live with each other and will always stand by each others side no matter what. Promise that they will keep trust on each other no matter what. Promise of a happy and peaceful future.

Arjun parted away frm her and took her by the table. It had a beautiful cake on it. Sakshi squelled in happiness. She loved chocolate cake. Arjun was about to handed her the knife when she stopped him.

Sakshi: Ek minute. Mera ek question hai. Main kal ratse tumhare wish ke lye intejar kar rahi thi. Tumne wish kiyu nehi kya? Aur yeh Aisha..

Arjun: Agar wish kar deta to surprise kaise deta? Aisha office chali gyi. Usne meri bohot madad ki.

Sakshi nodded. She cut the cake and fed Arjun. Arjun took a peace and fed her. Little chocolate spread on her lips. Arjun couldn't hold back anymore. He pulled Sakshi to him by waist and claimed her chocolaty lips. It was Sakshi's first kiss so she stood there like statue. But she enjoyed the kiss too. Slowly she started responding. It ignited Arjun so he parted away from her.

Arjun: No Skashi. It's too open.

Sakshi understood and lowered her gaze. Arjun smiled and took her hand.

Arjun: Chalo office chalte hai. Sabko yeh news bh to dena hai.

Sakshi smiled and started walking with him side by side. May God keep the couple side by side till death..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Awesome OS...
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hey guys its not only my creation...
its our creation...
thanx to eashu appi who help me so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's so beautiful. Why did you not post it earlier? Anyways happy writing! Looking forward to more stories from you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

hey guys its not only my creation...
its our creation...
thanx to eashu appi who help me so much...

It's urs.
I just gave it a finishing touch.
So, don't join my name.
U did all the thinking and hard work.
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Originally posted by: skrafty

Beautiful OS
Loved it


thanks for liking it... 😊
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Originally posted by: Devangana

It's so beautiful. Why did you not post it earlier? Anyways happy writing! Looking forward to more stories from you.


i m little bit scared...so didnt post it earlier...
thanx for liking my crazy attemp... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear... Awesome os
very beautifuly written
arjun's confesion was unique one
loved your way of writting

Thank you easha dear for posting this os
I realy loved it
arakshiya... please write more... We are waiting for your next creation
you realy a good writer, so don't affraid
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Amazing OS
Arjun proposal was awesome
Love arakshi scene
Loved it
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Cont soon
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Originally posted by: Harsha111

Hi dear... Awesome os
very beautifuly written
arjun's confesion was unique one
loved your way of writting

Thank you easha dear for posting this os
I realy loved it
arakshiya... please write more... We are waiting for your next creation
you realy a good writer, so don't affraid


i deffinetly write more...
thanx dear for liking it... 😊

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