FF: ASTITVA - STRUGGLE FOR EXISTENCE PT. 9 PG. 101

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sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

hab story fan fiction pe nai hoti hai

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: saritak
hab story fan fiction pe nai hoti hai

Haan Di it started about a month back 😊

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sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Haan Di it started about a month back 😊

thanks dear

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Goldie di..i know I m super late ...
U can punish me for ds ...
Kya karu..xams u c..
Really nice update...
The sam aisha kabir anwesha miments..
A cute family time..
Kabir's Innocence...thanking sameer..love for his mom... It was really beautiful...

Those guys ... 😡
Then about liza..what happened to her?
How did she get injured ?

Update soon

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Rumpa Majumder (tani)

@tani.m

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

Read both the parts together

awwwesome

thanxxx 4 d pm

update next prt sooon

im eagerly waiting

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
Goldie di..i know I m super late ...
U can punish me for ds ...
Kya karu..xams u c..
Really nice update...
The sam aisha kabir anwesha miments..
A cute family time..
Kabir's Innocence...thanking sameer..love for his mom... It was really beautiful...

Those guys ... 😡
Then about liza..what happened to her?
How did she get injured ?

Update soon

Thanks Ishi dear

not an issue dear

well yes they deserve it

& liza part will update soon 😊😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: tani.m
Read both the parts together
awwwesome
thanxxx 4 d pm
update next prt sooon
im eagerly waiting

Thanks Tani dear

Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#788

comment for 9

sorry for being late..

arjun is angry..

love his concern for riya..

sam offer aayesha lift..aur dinner kar liya usake ghar..not bad..

kabir is cute..

what happened to liza..

hope who shree se sab share kare..

thanks 4 pm

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#789

read 1 to 3 chapter

nice story...starting me lga k tum bhi aisha ko abla nari dikhane me lgi ho aur sath me darpok bhi...jaise hi use dhamki aayi wo off lekar chali gyi but aage k parts me tumne clear kr dia tha k wo kahaan gyi thi

but agge k parts padh kr thoda relief lga...k aisha is not abla nari...

aisha ka 6 saal ka baccha 😲 baccha kuch zyda bada nhi hai...

now comes to riya ek abla ko sabla kia...to fir dusri abla...riya ka bhi past hai...aur wo itni zyda shocked kyun hai...😲😲😲 mujhe aage k parts padhne do

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#790

read 3 to 6 part

okay to baccha aisha ka nhi hai...but uski karan se shadi huyi naa...

waise case koi bhi ho police sabke byan leti hai...to police ne aisha ki sister k neighbours k bayan kyun nhi liye

aisha ko pta chal gya k uske jija ne hi uski behan ko mara tha...aur aisha ne apne jija ko jail pahucha dia...👏👏👏 for her...but wo ek officer hai use chupne ki kya zarurat...aise chupa chupana 😲😲😲

now comes to riya...uska baap ajeeb hi hai...agar use izzat ki itni hi chinta hai to wo sadak pe tamasha kr hi kyun rha hai...chup chap bhi jaa skta tha...aur ye riya khud to boli nhi aur arjun ko bolne nhi dia...riya ki family ko ek sys to banta hai

then comes to the case...ab kaun takra gya riya se case k time...aur ye har baar itni numb kyun ho jati hai...past kuch bhi ho insan ko aage badhna chahiye past me reh kr koi khush nhi reh skta

team ka POV accha hai...but aisa samaj sochta to behtar rehta...

hamesha galti ladki ki nikali jati hai

and the final part...riya k sath misbehave 😲 kiski itni himmat etf officer ko to normal ladki bana dia k koi darr hi nhi hai