T2: ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA COMPLETED ON PG 91 - Page 58

Awesome
superb
loved it

Poor Riya...she got so scared seeing her Arjun with the bomb
And Arjun...he didn't even realise that
ofcourse they r officers
and they have the responsibility to protect people
but they can't just forget their own families
Well I can't say anything regarding this because both Ariya were correct on their part
We have many soldiers fighting and guarding our borders to keep us safe
A Salute to all of them

Very well shown the condition of family when a soldier fights without caring for his life
👏👏👏

Riya brought gift for kaki...
In this world,some people only demand respect and nothing else
very good example shown through your characters kaka and kaki

truely written...sahi kehte hai jahan pyar ki ummed hoti hai wahah pyar nahin milta aur jahah umeed na hoon waha itna mil jaata hai ki aap sambhal nahin paate

Riya and Aayesha both kept fast...
So well depicted the karvachauth
And at last Arjun feeding Riya😉

Precap sounds quite scary

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
~Anjali

Originally posted by: angelarya

Awesome
superb
loved it

Poor Riya...she got so scared seeing her Arjun with the bomb
And Arjun...he didn't even realise that
ofcourse they r officers
and they have the responsibility to protect people
but they can't just forget their own families
Well I can't say anything regarding this because both Ariya were correct on their part
We have many soldiers fighting and guarding our borders to keep us safe
A Salute to all of them

Very well shown the condition of family when a soldier fights without caring for his life
👏👏👏

Riya brought gift for kaki...
In this world,some people only demand respect and nothing else
very good example shown through your characters kaka and kaki

truely written...sahi kehte hai jahan pyar ki ummed hoti hai wahah pyar nahin milta aur jahah umeed na hoon waha itna mil jaata hai ki aap sambhal nahin paate

Riya and Aayesha both kept fast...
So well depicted the karvachauth
And at last Arjun feeding Riya😉

Precap sounds quite scary

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

nice update arjun save from bomb blast
and riya keep karvachawt precap is
nice update soon

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update arjun save from bomb blast
and riya keep karvachawt precap is
nice update soon

It was awsm superb lovely update

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

Sorry~sorry~sorry
I just now realised that my comment for part14 never got posted😡
due to poor net😡😡😡
I hope u don't mind me posting a late comment😳


Part 14:
Awesome
superb
lovely
just loved it

Riya ne Arjun ko kaha party mein muh bana kr na baithne ko😆😆
Arjun was dumbstruck to see Riya in saree😉 afterall humari Riya hain hi itni beautiful😃
And then the lovely scene of the husband filling wife's partition and tying mangalsutra😊
Riya wanted to dance but Arjun didn't like parties...
Poor Riya,couldn't voice out her wish
But finally they danced with each other😃

That inspector😡😡😡
Why do people drink so much that they r out of their own control?
Whatever he said about Ariya,wished to beat him upto death😡
Very good reply from Riya👏
The way she took her husband's side...lovely...truely betterhalf

The bathroom scene reminded me of the scene from episode
What a lovely scene👏
The way u depicted that scene
loved it😃

Thanks for the pm
And sorry for the late comment,I had no idea that the previous comment never got posted
Hope u nderstand
~Anjali

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Thanks Angali dear

abhi bahut kuch baaki hai

Glad u are liking it

Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

Do read my comment for Part 14
posted later on this page
~Anjali

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

It was awsm superb lovely update

just amazing

loved it

Eagerly waiting for next part

Continue soon

Sorry for short comments

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm