T2: ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA COMPLETED ON PG 91 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear.. Love it.. Ariya's convo.. Their compatibility.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it..ariya was aoo well written
contd soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb dear.. Love it.. Ariya's convo.. Their compatibility.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

Thanks unisha dear
Wait for more
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

loved it..ariya was aoo well written
contd soon
thnx for pm

Thanks Scarlet
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a beautifully written chapter goldie..

sumitra's story was sad but then the mother figure in her helped arjun and riya..she is a motivation for those who does everything for their children and they leave them alone in need...😡
you framed the character well and i loved it..

about riya and her awkwardness..its quite ovious...but arjun took is steps well...
the way he conversed with her and then the walk..it actually helped her feel good after such a vast hearbreak...

overall a lovely designed and awesomely written update..👍🏼
ab kya incident baki hai??😉😉😕
continue soon..thanks for pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..😃
and dont reply of my comment now...
do that later..have to edit it yet..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*
Pura update full on ariya wala tha!!! 😃
Sumitra welcms riya wid full rituals!!!
Uska awkward feel karna is justified!!!
Loved all d ariya chats!!! 👏
Also sumitra-riya chat was emotional!!!
Arjun n uski family ka past riya ko pata laga!!!
N kaka-kaki r d parent figures for both of dem nw!!!
N even for dem ariya r lyk der own children!!!
Riya is embarrassed wen arjun tells her bout her deeds in d past!!! 😳 😆
N arjun is opening up to riya!!! Dats nyc!!!
continue sooonish...
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

it was a beautifully written chapter goldie..

sumitra's story was sad but then the mother figure in her helped arjun and riya..she is a motivation for those who does everything for their children and they leave them alone in need...😡
you framed the character well and i loved it..

about riya and her awkwardness..its quite ovious...but arjun took is steps well...
the way he conversed with her and then the walk..it actually helped her feel good after such a vast hearbreak...

overall a lovely designed and awesomely written update..👍🏼
ab kya incident baki hai??😉😉😕
continue soon..thanks for pm..

Hmm bas tissues leke tayyiyaar raho main bahut rulane waali hoon 😆
Well thats secret dear glad u liked t so much
n yes sumitra is really a strong lady & loving mother
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Grt update dii!!!
Pura update full on ariya wala tha!!! 😃
Sumitra welcms riya wid full rituals!!!
Uska awkward feel karna is justified!!!
Loved all d ariya chats!!! 👏
Also sumitra-riya chat was emotional!!!
Arjun n uski family ka past riya ko pata laga!!!
N kaka-kaki r d parent figures for both of dem nw!!!
N even for dem ariya r lyk der own children!!!
Riya is embarrassed wen arjun tells her bout her deeds in d past!!! 😳 😆
N arjun is opening up to riya!!! Dats nyc!!!
D precap is interesting!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kreya204

Grt update dii!!!
Pura update full on ariya wala tha!!! 😃
Sumitra welcms riya wid full rituals!!!
Uska awkward feel karna is justified!!!
Loved all d ariya chats!!! 👏
Also sumitra-riya chat was emotional!!!
Arjun n uski family ka past riya ko pata laga!!!
N kaka-kaki r d parent figures for both of dem nw!!!
N even for dem ariya r lyk der own children!!!
Riya is embarrassed wen arjun tells her bout her deeds in d past!!! 😳 😆
N arjun is opening up to riya!!! Dats nyc!!!
D precap is interesting!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃

Thanks Kreya
Glad u liked it
More fun coming up dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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