T2: ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA COMPLETED ON PG 91 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
loved it cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
really gr8 update
ARIYA convo r awsm,
feelin sad 4 kaka kaki
i like this ARJUN, perfect gentleman
waiting 4 next, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Super
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
Arjun and riya spending time with each other
Percap looks scary
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
wow sumitra kaki well come riya with all rituals 😃
but riya still feel awkward
all r there to support 🤗
omg arjun knew cooking poor riya got shocked 😆
poor arjun missing roshni 😭
even riya missing her mom 🥺
love the way sumitra kaki comfort riya 🤗
ariya moment was lovly ❤️
are arjun ne toh sab bata diya whatever she did in past 🤣 🤣
poor riya feeling so embarrassed 😳
precape look nice
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
loved it

the character Sumitra...very well portrayed...
it has been seen that parents do a lot for their kids and when they grow old...the kids they leave them
They r old and can't take care of themselves but the kids,they aren't bothered😡😡😡😡
Ofcourse all children are not like that...u have only given an example..the example of Arjun here...
Though there are differences in his and his father's thoughts...he cares for his father...
Also he helped kaka and kaki😊

Now coming to Riya...
I read your reply regarding my comment and I think you are right...anyone in her situation might have reacted the same way

I have a question here...In your story Riya was not in love with Arjun initially,I mean before the accident?

Riya was quite scared and knowing about her mother, was gloomy too...justified
Arjun tried very well to make her comfortable😊
At times...he remembered Roshni too...that was cute...the way he used to cook for her and all...
I even loved the dialog...when Riya asked Arjun about her taking Roshni's place in the house?
Arjun very well gave the answer

The walk in the park...Riya was embarrased when Arjun mentioned about her antics during her illness...ofcourse anyone would be...

Riya wants to join back...owing to the officer in her...Quite impressed with Arjun who already took a step ahead by talking to the higher officials...

Overall lovely update

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

I hope comment padh kr aap irritate na ho jao but as u ask "lamba wala comment" 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautifully written...
Loved Arjun's effort to make Riya feel comfortable...
Loved Ariya convos...
Loved Arjun sharing his feelings with Riya...
WOW! A rjun ko khana banana bi aata hai...
Cont sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow gold n pravalika really owsum update.
u two did a very good work
beautifully written in detail

sumitra kaki welcomed riya with all rituals n blesseed her. arjun.
loved how she talked with riya and arjun
aww so sweet of arjun ke he us doing everything to make riya feel comfortable with him at his place
aww so cute arjun made riya coffee
felt sad on hearing arjun n roshnis story abt coffee n food.

well overall i loved reading it
contiue soon
thanks for pm
and
precap looks interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KReyAS

awsom updt

loved it cont soon
thnx fr pm

thanks kreya
Glad u liked it
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

really gr8 update

ARIYA convo r awsm,
feelin sad 4 kaka kaki
i like this ARJUN, perfect gentleman
waiting 4 next, update soon

Ya shreyanshi he is pure gentlemen
Glad u liked it
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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