ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete) - Page 3

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

awesome update...
lemme remind u um a arni freak so dont forget to pm me
coming to the update
arjun life has always been full of lonliness 😭
loved samjun part 👏
sam's dead 😭
contd soon thnx for pm laila

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
Poor arjun😭😭
Sam dead😭😭
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Do PM me

Originally posted by: laila1994

Finally 😃

Thank you

Thank you

Thanks Baji for writing it. I had been waiting so long for it

You know, you are my favourite baji. I love you ❤️

kya karu laila is after my life.. Mene kiya kia???

you were suppose to write it...you banged it on my head...

About the tittle: I loved it. don't change it.👍🏼

thanku😃

MWB: Sneha & Ishi, this is for you

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Chapter 1:

Many people found Arjun's dialogue funny but I didn't coz I already knew Sam would not be there😳

😆

Arjun's family😡

I have seen Children became agitated after their Parent's separation But counselling and little extra love by loved ones can make them cope up with it.

But Arjun's father was far from doing it for him😡

He threw his only son at the mercy of his servant.

Kaka was proven a better guardian than Arjun's parents. He earned my respect.

So-called love: this caught my attention.😆

glad you liked it...thats the word..😆

Sam-Arjun: They always make me fall for their friendship. Sam was a true companion. Though there relationship started as competitors but it eventually turned into strong friendship.

I can imagine the daily battle Arjun must be fighting with his own self after Kaka's death But Sameer was so caring that despite knowing that he will have to lock horns with him he kept on pushing Arjun for better life.

Sameer was not just Arjun's friend he was also a family.

Sameer had shifted to his lodge room. Now you are making me feel guilty for asking you to kill this guy😳

😳

Arjun had even humiliated him a number of times, calling him , 'chipku' in front of his team mates but Sameer was as adamant in his decision as Arjun was. I am just loving this Sameer. He is a true friend. as they say, " A friend in need is a friend indeed"

Sam was his life, his reason to smile and enjoy: Arjun didn't just lose his friend in the blast. He lost the hope of light in his otherwise dark life.

A big huge by me for writing Sam's character so beautifully🤗

He stole my heart. (Mai bohut dil phek hoon yaar, patani apna dil kitno ko de chuki)

i should send this part to london..🤣

PS. It was much better than my expectations. I love you❤️

Originally posted by: ponnuz

A refreshing take on the story...luved it..👏...i liked the way u started..Arjun unconsciously calling for Sam not realizing that he is no more... ..expecting more diallouges in coming updates...

a very good attempt ..

Originally posted by: anant90

Its a great start but sameer ko mar dala..and that too in 1st update..

this is not fair...😭😭

I was thinking that now you write many sam-arjun scenes, when i read first post and that its about three characters..but yahan par to sam ko invisible kar diya.

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

REEE!! you again started a new one!! ki khushi re!!!🥳

beautiful start with Arjun's past and sam-jun friendship...just loved it...

& you've already killed Sam!! Really!!!😲 oh my!!

but I've already sticked to it...

& REE..don't even think about discontinue/delete any story...or laving forum...agar yeh galti tune ki toh...main vi...SYS😉

Do continue...

@Laila-thanks for PM.