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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

superrr duperrr update..
loved it
sakshi is soo intelligent...
samesha ka chota sa part but very cite...
choree also did a great job
thnx for pm

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Awesome story
It's true jo badal jaye wo sakshi kaha
Sasha was too good
Loved it

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

naaahhhiii 😭
yeh kiya kar diya annu di aap ne
humne socha bhi nahu tha ke app hamari itni si sweet riya ko villian bana do gi.

thanks for pm
ending was shocking i mean really jhatka de diya yar tuune
but amaxing tha
riya ne aisa sab kiya

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

gr8 update annu...dis TS is cmplty diff...loved it 😊
nd u ri8 it's just a story...so no one is gng to bash u 😃
Ria as negetive character 😭 bt intrestng tha 😊
choreee vs 😃
Sam aisha k leeche peeche 😆
Arju. shakshi part vs nyc 😊
really loved dis ts 😃

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

wow!! A totally Sakshi-ous thriller!!

this was really a game of two brains..Ri vs Sakkshi, one to make plans for success.. another to save her love...

Loved it..( actually I love thrillers)...& it had everything, mystery, fun, teamwork...loved the way you've waived it.

Thanks a lot for this awesome TS...Keep writing.

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Princess_Pataka

@Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

nice udate

great cocept

riya haters ko zyada acchi lgi gi

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

nice one di👏

loved it

beautifully written👍🏼

kuch alag..hatke padh kar maza aaya😉

thankx for pm

continu with a new one soon😊

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Shocking end...

Riya villain...😆😆😆

Sach mein agar Riya ne itna dima sahi jagah lagaya hota toh sayad yeh sab karne ki jaroorat nahi padti...😡😡😡

Loved the last section...Sameer Aisha ke peeche...🤣🤣🤣

Poor Arjun...Sakshi se use koi nahi bacha sakta...🤣🤣🤣

Naina Thanks for PM...

Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago

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Ananya

@anuraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

nyc story

bt riya riya's character 🥺

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Neha

@smneha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Awesome yarrr this is the best one ...👏... superb story ... first part i thought sakshi was culprit.. second part change scenario ...👍🏼 superb riyaa never like her dump character in show ..😛.. sakshi played all cards really well .😎.. riya ka character strong tha ... but i think shakshi is better ... becoz strong character ki 12 bajane wali ka character jayada strong hua naa 😉.. Anyways ... loved this OS .... the way whole thing handled superb ... 🤗