OS: Romeo and Juliet ~ Part 3: Pg 24 {Last part}

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Superb yar. ...

Arhhh but why riya had to delete that video... ariya dono eksath dekhte to kitna mazza aata

Anyways ye na sai.. confession to hua atleast. .. omg arjun was so adorable. ... loved the way he confessed. ... seeing his proposal anyone would have been tongue tied...

Aww finally tadpane ke bad even rii confessed. .. that kiss n song was perfect. .. like an icing on the cake...

Loved it...

Awesome perfect ending. ...

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Sakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Live-life

Cause all of me loves all of you!
All you curves and all your edges
all your perfect imperfections

not fair!

even here you to mention that we r still holding the imperfections?

second line is ok!😃

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: greensakthi

not fair!
even here you to mention that we r still holding the imperfections?
second line is ok!😃

Well that's because no one's perfect

that's why I chose the song in the first place remember!

😆

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Arhazy Najaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

thanks for the wonderfull concept.

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: devildiva21
Superb yar. ...
Arhhh but why riya had to delete that video... ariya dono eksath dekhte to kitna mazza aata
Anyways ye na sai.. confession to hua atleast. .. omg arjun was so adorable. ... loved the way he confessed. ... seeing his proposal anyone would have been tongue tied...
Aww finally tadpane ke bad even rii confessed. .. that kiss n song was perfect. .. like an icing on the cake...
Loved it...
Awesome perfect ending. ...

Lol...wo video...😆 Well I was too busy writing their confession to focus on the video! hayeee!

Hahaah glad you liked the confession! I am glad you liked you loved it zoo much Divi!

😳

Thank you for staying with this till the end!

hehe!

Love you!

😃

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN
thanks for the wonderfull concept.

Your welcome! 😳

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Sakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Live-life

Lol...wo video...😆 Well I was too busy writing their confession to focus on the video! hayeee!

Hahaah glad you liked the confession! I am glad you liked you loved it zoo much Divi!
😳
Thank you for staying with this till the end!
hehe!
Love you!
😃

let me here say a lil dr, just when we imagine that after all it was before the confession, it'll give us always an itching in the heart, but now they confessed, ready to dance for a thousand times in front of a thousand pair of eyes and even gorgeously.. Ahaa! wow!

isn't it?

hope made up at least for the author!

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: greensakthi

let me here say a lil dr, just when we imagine that after all it was before the confession, it'll give us always an itching in the heart, but now they confessed, ready to dance for a thousand times in front of a thousand pair of eyes and even gorgeously.. Ahaa! wow!
isn't it?

hope made up at least for the author!

Well video ek bahan tha un dono ko milane ka...see if shree wo vieo leke garden mein nahi bhaag ta to Riya usi piche nahi aati aur agar Riya uski piche nahi aati to...confession aise nahi hota jaise meine likha! 😉 So technically...vo video ek zariya tha! Muhahaha!

waise bhi jab pyaar kiya to darna kya! 😳

Thanks for the this reply sakthi!

😃

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Annet and Janet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Part 1

HELLOOO NABI JAAAN!!! You are back at it againn!!!!! First and foremost, kaan pakadke maafi mangoing for joining the party so late, but thank you ji for writing again and for sharing with us! WE love reading about these characters and seeing the bond that they all share, and you write about their relationship so perfectly that it is so palpable!

LOVEDDD Riya's nervous, anxious energy while she kept hoping that Arjun would notice her, or just acknowledge her. That must be such a tough position to be in...to love someone who constantly pushes you away. But from the way you write about Riya, she seems like quite a selfless girl who is willing to love without expecting much in return... we love that we can learn about these characters just from your stories...

Awww! Shree and Liza are super cute!!!! Their dance was beautiful, and your choice of song was perfect too, Nabi jaan! The lyrics are perfect for this couple who are going through a range of emotions; from unsuraty, to acceptance, to a silent admission of their love for each other!

Sigh!!!! It just makes me sigh when we read about the friendship all these people share! What a blessing to be able to find true friends like that! we LOVE that Riya played cupid for Shree and Liza; how super sweet!!!!

Part 2

Ooo! Loved how you started the part!! Arjun's burning, glaring gaze! UFF!!!!

Awww! THe conversation between Riya and Ayesah is uber cute, and full of masti!!! I love how hasmukh these characters are despite the internal turmoil most of them are going through. That is exactly how you should live-live (Whadupp user-name reference!!!!!!! :P :P)

""Excuse me sir. I don't create scenes. I am not an actress neither am I a scriptwriter. So you better watch your words." --- Wohooo!!! Swooon!! What a mooh-thod jawab!!!! I love a fiesty Riya!!

Awww!!! Arjun and Riya dance sequence was superb!!! HAYE! The choice of song is just brilliant! we played the song in the background as we read that part...it was fantastic!!!

Part 3 -

Awww! I loved Riya's roller caoster of emotions while she was watching the video of her dance with Arjun...I bet she noticed a lot of things she had not when she was physically present in that moment. it must be awesome for her to actually see that Arjun does love her, he is just too afraid to admit it.

Oh no!!!! My heart just went out for Arjun when he began telling Riya how his life had become joyless and hopeless after Roshni died! The way you use her name as an analogy is just brilliant, Nabi! LOVED that part! Their confesssion to each other was beautiful...delicate but heart wrenching! I love the insight you give us into Riya's emotions!! What a whirlwind of emotions!!!

You did it beautifully, Nabi!!! Bravo bravo!!!!!!!

Sorry for writing in so late, love! But we hope we made up for it! Thank you for sharing Arjun and Riya's story with us :D

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Sakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: Live-life

Well video ek bahan tha un dono ko milane ka...see if shree wo vieo leke garden mein nahi bhaag ta to Riya usi piche nahi aati aur agar Riya uski piche nahi aati to...confession aise nahi hota jaise meine likha! 😉 So technically...vo video ek zariya tha! Muhahaha!
waise bhi jab pyaar kiya to darna kya! 😳

Thanks for the this reply sakthi!
😃

i got that now you r in full form!😃

glad u liked it dr!