OS: Romeo and Juliet ~ Part 3: Pg 24 {Last part} - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

mmmwwaahh dear!1

hatts off to u.. wonderful os! Thank you thank kyou! :)

I loved some parts...
"Mere pas faceboook nahi hai.."😆😆😆 Mera paas bhi nahi hai
"Mere pas twitter nai hai!!"🤣 Me too
sharam karo rawte ... ajkal to 12 saal ke bache ke pas bhi facebook aur twitter hota hai!!😆 Ye sahi kaha but I am 15 and I don't have any of those so Rawte isn't along mien bhi uske saath noon lol

then That part..." hawa kha rahi thi..ap bhi khaiye na... hawa bahut tasty hai!!"😆😆🤣 Yeah that was my sense of humor...:P kind of cheesy but oh well at least I made you laugh. feels good hehe
I couldnt stop laughing!!
Then her 'Damn it' and tug of war! Lol..yeah...those were one of my favorite parts of the OS as well
wonderful...😳

Then comes the cute confession and the kiss!!😳😳
Awesome.. mind blowing...🤗Thank you sooo much...for staying with me till the end. means a lot

Keep writing dear! I will! thank you again love you *hugs*

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update nabi...loved it esp the fb and twitter part and the sweet confession of ariya
the song selection was really nyce ...it went with the update very smoothly
thmx for pm
and keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

awesome update nabi...loved it esp the fb and twitter part and the sweet confession of ariya
the song selection was really nyce ...it went with the update very smoothly
thmx for pm
and keep writing

Thank you yaar! I am glad you liked it so much1!!
heheh...I had that song on repeat while writing this part
I just can't write without music! that's why everyone of my works has music in it Lol!
Thank you for being here till the end
love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was more than superb n awesome!!
so pure confession...just like mineral water!!...just joke mara like ri do in mind...
but first part is true the confession was so true n pure...
it was sweet romantic as well!!
what i liked n what also made me laugh was her pov n mv like " lungi dance" , tug of war" , quareeling n patch up with bappa "
so sweet...
arjun pouting...awww...hello arjunians would have died n would b ready to do so for watching this...

shree also did good job , shree ri part added the needed fun in the story...

i m so lucky that i have gone through such beautiful os or 3s!!

wanna say more but if i will describe this story , then it may end up as long as the story itself!! lol seroius


nice journey with it
thnk for pm

will not say 2 cont soon but will say 2 start another!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

it was more than superb n awesome!!
so pure confession...just like mineral water!!...just joke mara like ri do in mind...
but first part is true the confession was so true n pure...
it was sweet romantic as well!!
what i liked n what also made me laugh was her pov n mv like " lungi dance" , tug of war" , quareeling n patch up with bappa "
so sweet...
arjun pouting...awww...hello arjunians would have died n would b ready to do so for watching this...

shree also did good job , shree ri part added the needed fun in the story...

i m so lucky that i have gone through such beautiful os or 3s!!

wanna say more but if i will describe this story , then it may end up as long as the story itself!! lol seroius


nice journey with it
thnk for pm

will not say 2 cont soon but will say 2 start another!

You have no idea how happy your comment has made me seriously!
Especially the mineral water part...Lol...now that is a compliment of a kind...never got one like that before. The confession was the hardest part to write because writers before me have done an out of the world job of an Ariya confession which made it harder for me to write up to those standards. But I am really glad you liked that part. Yeah the funny moments and the sense of humor in it was purely me! 😆 I just wrote the first thing that came into my mind right then. heheh! I see situations differently 😛 Lol Well Arjun pouting was cute and I had a fun time writing that as well tehee!
Thank you...for reading this OS...and staying with it till the end
It seriously means a lot when you take out time to read my story
Thank you and Love you! loads! 🤗
Will continue writing I promise!
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Posted: 11 years ago

hai hai amazing update ... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: clementina


hai hai amazing update ... loved it

Thank you Thank you Tina!
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Means a lot!

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Posted: 11 years ago
unres comment on pg 27 at lastt😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

My head's underwater

But I'm breathing fine

You're crazy and I'm out of my mind

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: greensakthi

My head's underwater

But I'm breathing fine

You're crazy and I'm out of my mind

Cause all of me loves all of you!
All you curves and all your edges
all your perfect imperfections

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