ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA PART 8 PG 81 - Page 57

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Posted: 11 years ago
Kal raat I hope 😃
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sorry for late reply dear
my exams are going on so time problem
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: atharin

sorry for late reply dear

my exams are going on so time problem
read the missing part
awesome part
love it
continue soon

Not an issue dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Goldie...hope mujhe bhul nahi gayi... 😊
couldnt come here for xam.now its over n am back here... 😃
have read awwwlll parts in one go...as always its awesmest...
thnks fr d PM dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sukanya001

Hi Goldie...hope mujhe bhul nahi gayi... 😊
couldnt come here for xam.now its over n am back here... 😃
have read awwwlll parts in one go...as always its awesmest...
thnks fr d PM dear 😊


I know sukanya bahut ogo ke exams hai so i am seeing a slow response 😉
Well Main bhooli nahin hoon bhai aap sabkko 😃
Glad u liked it so much dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Important Note : Guys I am going out of town in my cousin's marriage so will not be able to update this week I will be leaving tomorrow n will be back by friday so Hopefully if every thing falls at place will give update after 3rd may 2014 now. Hope u all will be patient enough love u all guys

Regards Goldie


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Guys new banner made by RAZZ hope u all will like it I loved it to the core I will use it from the next part of the story 😊 THANKS RAZZ



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PART 8 A

Days rolled by & Arjun & other ETF team members were taking good care if riya accordingly & all were waiting for the time to leave for panchgani & thank Dr Jain as well who take such good care of riya during this all course of time.

On the day which they were about to leave shree had chotu too had proper arrangements & at that point of time they were solving a critical case of a ministers son who was accused of smuggling the drugs & even involved in flesh trade. Minister was using all his powers to threaten ETF & save his son .

But ETF was standing strong as Rock & moreover they had some vital information n proofs regarding all this & ministers son knew that very well but all his efforts have failed to break the ETF & release himself from the hold .

He had ordered his men to keep an eye on the members & find out the weak point so that he nab them & make them dance on his tunes whenever he desired but little did he know that ETF was ETF he can never approach them or make them weak like that. His men told them all & said that only one thing he find & that is Riya Arjuns wife she has lost her mental balance & is loved by everyone in the team & she is also a weak point of ETF as love love her equally & if they kidnap her or do some kind of harm to her ETF will sure dance on their tunes.

They thought for a while & ordered that they should attack riya when ETF is all around them so that they can sense the fear of losing riya he also odered them to follow them & keep an eye on them & if this does not have any effect they should kidnap riya & bring her here. Men nodded & they went to execute the plan.

Here sameer had already submitted the proofs to the higher authorities & now this minister son has no other way to escape they all after completing collected at arjuns place & started the journey to panchagani. Riya ,Arjun & shree were in 1

Suv & Sameer ,Ayesha, chotu & liza were in next SUV all were enjoying the journey & were happy at heart & the most happy was Riya as she was going to meet her Doctor bhahiya after so many days & also her friends of hospital who were close to her.

She was continuesly talking about the Hospital her doctor bhahiya her friends n all that happened during these 8 months when she was there.

Shree & Arjun were listening to her continuous talk's stories & cases with patience & were enjoying her enthusiasm & her non stop chats about her experiences in hospital & admiring her antics.

It was when she realized that none of them are responsing to her then she said making a Grumpy face "Ajju shree main itni deer se bol rahi hoon aur tum log jawwab bhi nahin de rahe hoo?"

Shree & Arjun were looking at each other with confused faces "what to reply her?"

She again said "bolo na tum log bolte kyu nahin ?"

Shree said "Ab tum baat karne ka mauka dogi tabhi to hum kuch boolenge na?"

Riya realized her mistake n said "Oh ! sorry accha bolo"

Arjun smirked & shree said with a smile "riya hamne sab suna really interesting haan aur baaki hum sab jab panchgani paunch jaayenge tab tumhare doctor bhaiya se pooch leenge accha tum kuch khaogi?"

riya said after thinking for a while "Haan par mujhe sandwich hi khana hai"

Arjun smiled & shree opened the tiffin & handed over a sandwich to riya & she started having it & relishing its taste & Arjun N shree were enjoying her antics. After driving about 30 minutes They stopped the suv at a small tea shop to have tea or coffee when suddenly shree gaze fell on a known Scorpio standing nearby,.

He tried to recall that where he has seen this SUV? But could not recall after a while he took his tablet n searched the details of the Scorpio & was shocked that it was register on the same ministers name who was involved in the last case with his son he sensed danger & went to Sameer & informed him right away as riya was with them.

Sameer & Arjun were fuming in anger & Arjun had totally lost it now he clutched his gun & was about to attack when sameer stopped him saying "Rawte kya karne jaa raho tum pagal ho kya? Riya yahi hai unhe zara bhi shaq hua to riya to unke liye soft target ban jaayegi main saari formalities poori karke aaya hoon aur please abhi kuch mat karna warna unhe shaq ho jaayega aur wo haath se bhi nikal sakte hai"

Arjun said "rathod main inhe chodounga nahin in log ki himmat dekho hamara peecha kar ke humpar attack karna chahte hai? Inhe samjhana zaroori hai ki har cheez bikau nahin hoti aura b aise harkato pe utar aaye hai hai ye log"

sameer said"Rawte shant ho jaao abhi kuch nahin karna inhe kaise seedha karna hai main jaanta hoon"

Sameer took out the phone n called commissioner directly & informed him he also told him to take action as soon as possible as that minister & his son may escape & rest he will deal with these people here. Commissioner assured him that in next 1 hour they will be under arrest as after the proofs they have submitted they don't have any doubts left that they are guilty. Sameer came back to arjun after finishing the call & said Rawte maine sir se baat kar lee hai aur wo sab agle 1 ghante main jail ke ander honge aur inka kya karna hai wo to tum janate ho na" he said with smirk .

After a pause he called team & said "Team ye wahi minister aur uske bte ke gunde hai bas react mat karna shanti se jaa ke SUV main baith jaao inhe pehla waar karne dena keh deengnge ki humpe hamla kiya tha aur encounter main mare gaye" all nodded to sameer n all went back to their respective places in the SUV.

Later after 10 minutes of following SUV when they entered the the outskirts of panchgani which was not much populated area they started to come closer to the ETF SUV.

Liza N Ayesha were keeping n eye on the suv coming at the back. Liza said "Sir wo loog zayada door nahin hai shayad attack karenge"

sameer said "Liza tum loog bas tayyiyar raho inhe aaj main nahin chodounga" they all nodded

sameer called arjun on his cell who were bit ahead of sameers SUV. Sameer said "Rawte wo loog hamare peeche hi hai tum ready rahna par riya ka khayal rakhna kahin wo darr na jaaye"

After that he disconnected the call n in next moment the goons in the scorpio started to fire on the SUVs of ETF & ETF gave them a good answer too.

In all this Riya got really terrified hearing the gunshots from goons as well as her friends. They stopped the SUV n came out to stop them there. Liza came to riya in her SUV n she was crying aloud due fear of gunshots. Liza tried to consonle her but all in vain. Suddenly one goon looked at crying riya he thought of kidnapping riya n started approaching the SUV.

Sameer saw this n said to Arjun "Rawte riya ko dekhko wo jaa raha hai uske paas tum dono hospital jaao hum wahah aate hai jao jaldi" Arjun went to riya n kicked the goon hard n he fall on the ground.





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PART 8 B

Arjun punched him hard but goon pushed him back & n took the driver seat started the engine of SUV & started to drive he said to Liza "koi aawaaz mat karna aur koi galti nahin warna main tum dono ko jaan se maar doonga samjhe"

Liza nodded & made riya put on the seat bets & she too put on her seat belts Goon was driving fast to reach the hideout so that riya is safe in their custody & riya was sobbing hard as she was hell terrified with all this she saw.

Here when they saw that Goon has taken riya along with him ETF started to follow them to save riya & rest of the goons to follow them & started to chase their friend so that riya comes under their custody. The chase between Scorpio n SUV started they fired some more bullets on each other but luckily nothing happened soon ETF Suv & Scorpio were behind the SUV in which LIZA & Riya were there.

Arjun was focusing on to reach Riya n after that he will see these people but all of sudden sameer shot bullet in the tyre of SUV to stop them & as the roads were not proper too SUV Lost the balance and got dashed with the large tree.

As riya was sitting in the front the impact of accident was much higher her head dashed with the door n corners of the SUV & she got cuts & bruises on her head n she fainted there liza got dashed with the seat so just got some little injury but Goon who was driving he too got big cuts on his fore head & he too fainted. ETF & Goons reached there .

Arjun got out of the SUV & started beating goons black & blue & sameer too joined him. After a while when ETF overpowered the goons & everything got under control Arjun realized that Riya is fainted due to the impact of accident he got worried n

sameer said "Rawte tum jao hum sab thodi der main hospital main milte hai" Arjun nodded n scooped riya in his arms n put her in SUV n strated the engine to move.

Arjun drove like a maniac & as they had already reached near the hospital of Dr Jain in next 15 minutes Arjun was at the gate of Dr Jains hospital He scooped up riya in his arms n took her inside & asked a wardboy to call Dr jain & she is his patient Riya.

Arjun took riya to emergency ward N Dr jain came there at the next moment. Arjun said" Dr jain wo hamare poeehe kuch gunde pade the unhone riya ko kidnap kar liya tha aur fir uska accident ho gaya Riya ko bahut chot aayi hai aur wo behosh bhi ho gayi hai please aap check kijiye"

Dr Jain said "Mr Rawte aap shant ho jaayiye main check karta hon riya ko aap bahar wait kariye aur pareshaan mat hoyiye kuch nahin hoga riya ko"

Arjun went outside the room n just sat on the chair totally numb he was just feeling helpless that he could not save riya from all this. He was really feeling guilty for riyas state first her mental state n now this accident that was all taking a toll on him. After a while sameer n entire ETf reaches hospital n saw Arjun totally numb sitting like a statue on the chair sameer placed his hand on his shoulders .

Arjun broke down completely saying "sam ye sab kya ho gaya kitni koshish kithi maine ki riya ka khayal rakh paaun par nahin kar paaya pata nahin ab kya hoga riya ke saath"

Sameer said "Please Arjun sambhalo apne aap ko tum aisa karoge to riya ko kaun sambhalega? Aur kuch nahin hoga hamare rehte riya ko hum kuch nahin hone denge aur hamare paas koi aur chara bhi nahin tha ab bas dua karo ki riya jaldi theek ho jaaye"

Arjun calmed down a bit when he saw Dr jain coming out of the ward all went to him n before anyone could speak he said "dekhiye Riya ke sar pe gehri chot lagi hai aur uska impact kya hoga ye main abhi nahin keh sakta hame usse observation main rakhna hoga 48 hours ke liye taaki uski sahi condition hame pata chal sake aur darr ki baat ye hai ki riya abhi behosh hai hosh main aane se pehle kuch bhi kehna theek nahin hoga aur yadi agle 48 ghanto main riya ko hosh nahin aaya to uski jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai" hearing this arjun stood like a statue & rest ETf team was in shock too.

They were just praying for the well being of their friend as her life was at stake right now. Arjun after hearing this sat on a chair n pressed his forehaed with his palms.

All were waiting for riya to come back to senses it was more than 5 hours & riya was still unconscious laying on the hospital bed.

No one can do anything accept praying for her safety. Dr Jain was too keeping regular checks on riya so that as soon as she comes back to senses he can do the complete tests & can come to some conclusion regarding her mental state.

After 30 minutes nurse who was keeping n eye on Riya saw her moving fingures she checked her n yes she had gained her senses back she ran to DR jain & said "Doctor Riya ko hosh aa gaya hai aap please jakldi chaliye"

Dr jain ran to the room & said to ETF Team that Riya has gained her senses back & he needs to do the complete checkup & asked arjun to complete all the formalities of test & therapy at reception as he was riya's husband now. Arjun went to reception & rest waited outside the ward. Dr jain entered & saw riya gaining senses & when she opened her eyes Dr Jain said "Riya ab kaisa feel kar rahi hoon ab theek ho na?"

She looked at Dr jain like a stranger & said in a formal voice "Doctor I am fine now par aapko kaise pata ki maera naam riya hai?"

Dr Jain was bit stuuned when she addressed him in a formal tone & then he realized that the impact of accident had brought her back from the state she was in for 8 months but he need to confirm it once from her mouth.

He replied "wo actuaaly aapke saath jo log aaye hai unhone bataya tha aapka poora naam?"

She replied "Riya mukherjee" n

doctor Jain said "Aap kya karti hai?"

She replied "Main ETF Mumbai main as research analyst work karti hoo"

Dr jain was confirmed but he probed further "Aap Mr Arjun Rawte ko jaanti hai?"

Riya said "Ji haan wo hamare ETF ke second in command hai aur mere senior hai par Arjun sir ko aap kaise jaante hai?"

Dr jain said "aaapki poori team bahar hai aapka ccident ho gaya tha is liye aap is waqt panchgani ke ek hospital main hai aur main Dr Jain hoon"

Riya nodded & said in a happy voice "kya ETF yaha hai? Doctor can I meet them please main ab bilkul theek hoon"

Doctor jain nodded in yes n she ran towards the gate of the ward where entire team was standing she first went to sameer & said with a smile "Rathore sir kaise hai aap?" sameer first got surprised at her address n then he smiled n said" riya main theek hoon ab kaisa feel kar rahi hoo"

riya said "Much better sir" she then went to shree n coutu & hugged them & said "Kaise hoo tum log?" both hugged her back n said "hum theek hai ri"

riya started searching for Arjun ignoring liza & Aisha as they were unknown to them she asked "Arjun sir kahah hai?" they said "neeche reception par"

she went downstairs n saw him filling the form she went closer n receptionist asked "Patient ka naam?"

Arjun said Riya Arjun rawte" n

then she asked "aap kaun hai?"

Arjun said "unka husband hoon" riya heard the conversation n was shocked she fainted on the floor near reception hearing this.






P-RECAP: Riyas take on this marriage what will she so after knowing the truth will she accept this marriage ? what will all team members do? & much more 😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Pravalika 😊 Good work dear 😃

Regards Goldie

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Have a blast Goldie...njoy alot..n tk care 😊 will wait for ur update

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