ArjunOS: The Other Day!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm ready with an OS dears! Are you?

Right!

This one is about a police officer, all right!

A two part story!

What else? Let the story tell the remaining story!

I think it would start more like this...

The Other day!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part-2: (Completed)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104069425


The Other Day:

Synopsis:

In her brother's diary, they got two things. One was the company at which he worked involved in some underground activities and the other was a pen drive.

They could not retrieve the files in the company's records, mentioned in the pen drive.

They tried to find the fellow mentioned in that diary, to trap the company through the phone records since her brother had talked to him the day before his death, in their house.

After finished talking to their aunty her brother called someone and informed that he had decided to quit, she informed.

That was Raghuram Seith, the supervisor. And Raghuram had called her brother that evening. In his diary he mentioned that someone was at his doors (in his quarters).

So the S.P concluded that Raghuram was the one who knew that company well and helped to kill him.

-SMILE-

Thanks,

saKthi.

Edited by greensakthi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Other day!

I would not wish any companion in the world but you!

-Shakespeare.

Part-1:

After putting her bag into the luggage compartment of the bus, she looked at her watch, 'Five minutes, the bus sets forth its journey in five minutes!'

She searched for a shop to buy a bottle of water which she forgot to bring along while packing, but saw him approaching.

He was coming from the court when he saw her sitting before the S.P. room and was searching something in her hand bag.

She stood up as he approached.

"I'm here for my brother. They said-" He held up a finger.

"Wait here! He'll come."

He was coming from the court when he saw her sitting before the S.P. room and was searching something in her hand bag.

She stood up as he approached.

"Yes?"

"I want to see the S.P! Who are you?"

He motioned her to see his batch.

"Oh! I' am here for my brother. They said-"

He held up a finger, and led her into the room.

"He was restless, the last time he came to visit me. He said he was going to quit the job. But before he could-"

She lowered her eyelashes to hide the tears.

"Have some water!" He offered.

"No! Thanks!" She squared her shoulders and spoke, "He called a number before he left for the construction site and told somebody that he was going to quit."

He felt wonder at how she was poising her fortitude.

"Yesterday I got this diary along with some story books in courier. When I took a book this morning, a letter fell down and it said that I've to take the diary to the police."

She gave a diary to him.

He opened it and it said it was the diary of the man who died in the massacre.

He thumbed the pages.

'Jan 1':

I wished my beloved sister a successful new year and she told she got the sari I had sent. I got a watch from my angle sister!

'May peace be with her forever!'

He turned the page and came to know that the diary was not filled every day, but on important days and events. The important days and events related to his sister, mostly.

'Mar 12':

Sweetie said she was going to apply for the designer course.

I'm too proud of her.

She takes all the effort she can to win and show that she is not affected by the sudden loss of our parents. I know what she must be undergoing while we celebrate every festival alone...

He thumbed further.

'June 2':

'I don't have much time. They smelt that I knew the issue. And he was suspicious when he asked if I had a copy.

I refused it. I don't know if he believed me.

At last I found that he was in this.

Oh, I didn't know that when I told him I was going to quit. Now-

At this point the writing stopped short and continued on the next page.

'I've to go to meet them. Before I go I've to send this diary.

I don't know what will happen next.'

At this point the writing had lost its calmness and the neat hand.

'Oh, The door bell!'

He could not read it further.

He tried in vain.

"I -I hated-" He read aloud.

"May I?"

He looked up from the diary.

"I think I can read my brother's hand writing better than you."

"I've made a copy of those papers. I m sending it to you dear, hope you will do the necessary. I will tell you everything on my return.

Don't worry!

"I-I meet you soon-"

She turned the page and got nothing to read.

She stopped short.

He thought she was going to cry at this point. But-

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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Nice shakti dear
Loved it
So emotional & beautiful
Lovely start
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM 😊

zubiya92 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
atharin thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Nice update
little bit emotional but liked it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
904129 thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Awsumm Dear! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
awesome yar.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww such a sweet os
so emotional brotherly love for his sister
omg is he dad ,the brother i mean
update soon dear
thnks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arey...cliffhanger pe rok dia re!
interestimg..
i dont think tht d boy ..d owner of d mysterious diary is d culprit...
ltz c wat happns!

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