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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -Carrie-



There is a bit of supernatural in it. Have always been intrigued by it😳

Thanks for heaping so much praise, Anku.🤗And thanks for reading too!

Hope u have been well. Ramadan begins at the end of this month so will be fasting all month. Be back on 1st Aug.



This is what I wanted to hear . LOL
coz in show everytime Mr. Rawte proved each the witches wrong 🤣
now that will be interesting stuff. 😉.
I have been a bit inactive with my real life in Mess 😆apart from that everything is fine.

Oh ! Come on you know this was less. You deserve much more praising 😉😃 Cause you are the one make me love each character you introduce ❤️ ! I have never loved any ArSha story but Khamosiya n QH did made it well. And now even in ths story in the starting looking at the CS i hardly relate the females with the hero but again you made me fall for their connections😉. You have that charm 🤗 !

Ohh! Enjoy your month! Love and will wait for your come back😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen


This is what I wanted to hear . LOL
coz in show everytime Mr. Rawte proved each the witches wrong 🤣
now that will be interesting stuff. 😉.
I have been a bit inactive with my real life in Mess 😆apart from that everything is fine.

Oh ! Come on you know this was less. You deserve much more praising 😉😃 Cause you are the one make me love each character you introduce ❤️ ! I have never loved any ArSha story but Khamosiya n QH did made it well. And now even in ths story in the starting looking at the CS i hardly relate the females with the hero but again you made me fall for their connections😉. You have that charm 🤗 !

Ohh! Enjoy your month! Love and will wait for your come back😛



Awwiiie...😭 Khushi ke aannsoo! Thanks Anku😳


What happened? All well at college? Do talk if you feel like. I am just a PM away. 😛

Loved these edits in your S Box. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Just read it all in one go... All I can say is that wow
I am speechless... I really missed ur qubool hai and live this piece of work too...
Ramadan is starting soon, but whenever u update please add me to on ur pm list
This is a cliffhanger and I really want to know what happens next.. Who is nandita? Was looking forward to Alisha putting her heart out to arjun regarding leaving her behind on the investigation
Please update soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Supper Awwwsssmmm update..
Loved it
Brillantly written...
Who is Nandita...???
Cont sooon
Eagerly waiting...
Edited by _Nikita_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Unreserved! First of all, I want to applaud you. Hats off to you! What a brilliant writer you are Zuby! Really, this story is one of its class. A gem, a masterpiece! Brilliant, simply brilliant! It's a pure crime thriller imbued with emotions where every chip falls in its own place. You must have thought out the entire story in your mind.
I think Aadhira let R & R go too easily. For me, they died a too easy death. They should have been tortured in such a way that it would hurt them the most. Oh, I forgot! How can anything hurt them. They are monsters, not human. To kill a child just because she witnessed their crime. A father killing his child is not unheard. Girls are receiving that fate even today just for being girls. But this was cold-blooded, preplanned murder to hide their crime and save their skin. I can't think of a punishment that is...

My heart cried for Adhira. The mother in her just couldn't get over the fact that she slept that night when Ellie ventured out too far, she couldn't understand what was Ellie drawing in her sketch book, couldn't save her when she was killed. There is nobody more helpless than a mother unable to help, save or protect her child and there is nobody more dangerous than a grieving mother whose child have been brutally taken away from her. Ellie couldn't even call out for help. How pathetic that a child can't roam about her house freely.

But one thing I must say that that Adhira, Ramona & perhaps Alok also are brilliant actors. The way Aadhira played the grieving wife, Ramona played protective aunt towards Adhira (even after her truth came into open after Alisha's super interrogation at police station) and the story Alok gave to Arjun about Ellie (I think he knew everything). Ramona even kept her cool & didn't let her part in Ellie's death come into open.

Finally, ACP Rawte!!!! Nothing misses his eyes. Even after hearing this gut wrenching story, he doesn't forget to ask the most important question that how did Adhira know everything. Love you ACP saab. His inherent wish of being wrong about Adhira yet instinctively knowing that he is right. His confrontation with Adhira, gently calming Alok. Uff, miss you so much ACP saab.

Hmmm, now will have to see Shaleen in pyar tune kya kiya. Waise Malhotra saab shaadi ke baad Eid ka chand ho gaye hain. Dikhtei nahi. His bride was looking so pretty in the glow of his love.

So you are going on a break from IF. Will wait for you for another story, if you come up with one.

Thanks for pm.
Love,
Anwesha

P.S. Yes, I have settled into the job.
Edited by nwshbsws - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What To Say Didu??? Im speechless!!!!! 👏👏 Kickass Job Sugar!! 👏👏 A Very Very Emotional Gut And Heart Wrenching Update!! You actually gave a glimpse of how really low Humanity can stoop..So It Was Aadhira Who killed that bas***d Rajneesh And that wh**e Ramona..Absolutely they got what they deserved! Thaloxin given to Rajneesh To give a slow death and She herself killed the s**t! Finally avenging her baby's revenge! How can A Man do that to his own daughter?? This is utter shit!!! And luvd the Heart Wrenching Outburst of Aadhira!! Beautifully Written!!! 👏👏 I too had my eyes moist at a point of time!! So Rajneesh killed her own daughter just cuz she was a threat to him?? And this wh**e Ramona!! Wasnt Rajneesh And Alok enuf dat she did hanky panky wid Joy Too?? 🤬 How can sumone be so merciless as to kill his own daughter so brutally? Loved Hotwa's reactions too! Very Apt..👏 What? Aadhira can see dead ppl? Goin Supernatural eh? Love Your Choice fr Nandita..👏 Continue Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Once whn u wrote qh i said i am speechless
Well i repeat it now
The pain of that mother wad geting to my skin
Wow u did a wonderful work dear
Ellie's death was so cruel
Felt like she was killed by a monster pair
They deserved to die
Somewhere i knew Adhira had done it
I dont feel sad she did it at all
But the climax was terrifying
Sorry I m late
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly, I am really sorry I wasn't able to unreserved my previous post...My internet is not working properly & I was out of town .😳
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Secondly, I must say you are a brilliant writer.
You describe everything perfectly...Be it emotions...case details...connections...personalities.👏👏
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Now coming to the updates.
I am not shocked at all that Adhira is the murdered I had guessed it long back. But what shocked me is that Rajneesh killed her own daughter with so much cruelty.
I was sure Ellie is dead But I thought Ramona killed her😕
Adhira is finally at peace.
Poor Ellie I can't even imagine her state.
Rajneesh & Ramona only deserved to die. But they escaped it easily.
Adhira can talk to dead people😲. Brilliant twist😆
Nandita??? If I am not wrong she is somehow related to Arjun.
Continue soon..
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Ps. I always wait for the update of this story😃

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Miss Precious: Thanks for reading dear. So happy you liked this one too. Just updated the last part and will PM you soon.

As for Alisha expressing her resentment towards Arjun he was just a witness who also happened to be a celebrated policeman. She asked for help. She would not have hesitated to cross swords with him if he had been her colleague.

@Nikita: Thanks for the comments, Niki. All you questions have been answered in the last part updated

@Anwesha: As always your review is the tonic for my writer soul. Thanks & Bless you! I am so happy to have you as my reader.

Yup! Ramona & Rajneesh's torture should ahve been prolonged. Their crime has no apt retribution.Even the most hardened killers & criminals have a big hatred for child molesters & killers. But then this was Aadhira who had to take this road for revenge. And she is a nourisher, nurturer & creator by nature. Harming a living being let alone take lives of her family members would have killed her also. So she had to make it quick for her own sake.

I still haven't got any idea for a new story but then QH & LG just happened on a sudden whim. Let's see.

@Shanaya: Your outrage is understandable but then you just have to open the newpaper to see how the world is rapidly hurtling towards complete destruction of morality & compassion. Thanks for reading Shanoo. I am sorry the story is a little away from the fun masti types you like so much. Hope to come up with something light hearted soon.

@Kunchu: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you, Helna Jee! Uff! So much praise. Nah! Not that good also! Hope all your questions have been answered in the last update. Thanks for reading & commenting.

@Laila: I am touched you made time to read & comment despite have bad connectivity. Always look forward to your comments. Yup! As I said to Anwesha the cretins got their due too fast but prolonging it would have hurt Aadhira too.

Hope you like the last part!
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8

Arjun felt sucker punched in his gut.

Nandita..

It was a name he remembered with every breath he took but had least expected Aadhira to blurt out.

There could be no connection between her and the being that was the soul of his life 13 years ago. A professional criminal could have been expected to dig all there was to the man that was Arjun. But someone like Aadhira could hardly have known something about the past Arjun had so carefully buried.

"Nandita?" he asked looking at her carefully his breath coming in rapid successions.

Aadhira looked at him with compassion and sorrow filling her eyes. She walked slowly towards him and put her palm over his cheek. It was a gesture meant to soothe a devastated person. But in Arjun's mind no one was more broken than Aadhira at this time. Then why was she offering ...

"Who is Nandita?" Alisha's urgent clipped voice broke through the connection that had developed in this moment of trauma. Arjun roused himself.

"Who are you talking about, Aadhira? What has this person got to do with Ellie & her killers?" he asked her wanting to believe that Aadhira had a different person in mind.

"No, Arjun. Don't pretend you don't understand. You know who I am talking about," she had not broken her eye contact at all and stared at him willing him to understand what she was saying.

"What is going on here?" Alisha was perturbed.

But she sensed that her question had not registered with the two souls standing in front her , two beings that were silently communicating with each other in a way only those who bonded over a shared excruciating pain could communicate.

"What are you talking about, Aadhira?" Arjun asked softly still unable to fathom that he and not Aadhira had become the point of focus in this bizarre game of blood and deceit.

"Sir, I have meaning to ask. Do you know Aadhira before coming here? What is she saying? Who is Nandita? " Alisha fired rapidly her head spinning wildly.

Arjun shook his head." I met her the night Rajneesh was killed. I did not know her before then,"

A rush of sudden anger shook him and he turned on her."But Mrs Sickand seems to know a lot about me."

She looked back completely understanding his anger and shook her head regret fully at how completely misplaced it was.

A wave of regret and sense of loss washed over him. He needed to be in control. He was in the middle of a major investigation and there was an associate watching him. But try hard as he might he could not rein in his roiling emotions that one name had triggered in him. That the trigger should have come from a totally unexpected quarter blindsided him completely.

Nandita...After all these years...

Something struck Alisha and she pounced on Aadhira.

"You said you talk to dead people. Then in the same vein you said you talk to..to this Nandita. So...is he dead too?"

Colour drained from Arjun's face and he could take it no more.

"Enough!", he thundered. "Enough of this nonsense."

"Alisha, please make sure this room guarded well for the night."

Turning to Aadhira in a voice full of anger Arjun said emphatically ,"Nandita is not dead, Aadhira. She is happily married and settled in Europe,"

Striding outside he called for the duty nurse.

He instructed her to call the duty doctor and asked him make sure their suspect is well enough to make appearance in court in the morning.

As he was about to step out Aadhira called out in an anguished voice,"Arjun, please believe me. I can see & talk to dead people,"

He kept walking without a backward glance.

"Arjun, Nandita is dead," She had pushed away Alisha's hold and rushed to the door. Arjun was quickly striding away into the dark corridor.

"ARJUN!" she called

"She is dead. Has been dead for 13 years. Naren and his friends raped and murdered her. THEY THEN BURNT HER BODY!"

He stood still. After Aadhira shrill pronouncement everything fell deathly silent. He swayed a bit such was the powerful impact of her word. He felt numb. Then a hot liquid spring burst forth within him. His eyes zoomed in & out of focus. He turned around and rapid walked towards where she stood her eyes now full of big fat tears.

"What did you say?" he hissed. He looked much dangerous than the few Alisha had shut inside jail cells.

"She did not betray you, Arjun. They conned her & then did the unspeakable with her," Aadhira wanted to hold him to cushion the blows she was dealing him.

Naren...


The rich spoilt brat of the politician Arjun was charged with guarding.

It was his first assignment after coming out of Police Academy and he had cursed the day he joined the training every moment of his duty hours. This was not what he wanted to do. He wanted to be out there clearing out muck and make society a better place. Not babysit fat lazy junior minister while he tramped from one lavish party to another.

He noticed a kindred soul in the sad girl who was ordered about all day carrying files, typing out useless letters and booking hotel rooms and party halls.

Nandita was the intern from the government run secretarial school who was assigned to work in the office of this politician. Both had loathed their jobs and had morosely gotten through their days of slavery to this sort of hegemony.

Slowly they began to gravitate towards each other and a friendship developed between them. Which soon blossomed into love. There were so many things common to both and their outlook towards life matched perfectly it felt they had known each other forever.

Both were orphans raised in Government shelters and badly wanted a sense of belonging and family to call their own.

It was a beautiful relationship. Both were looking forward to a rosy future together when Nandita fell in the path of the rich and handsome Naren Gehlot. He had just returned from finishing college abroad was usually seen coming in and out the house with a bunch of fat rich kids.

Once he had waylaid Nandita and began flirting with her. She ignored him and walked away.



Naren Gehlot

Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago

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