|| Arjun SS-Zehnaseeb || Part 12-Pg 58 And 59

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

the chain of washrooms in the pub...First Shanaya got inside nd den pulled the guy inside..ShreeTu follwed dem wid hurried steps..Dey reached the washroom dey wer in nd bfore dey cud bang in the door..The door opened nd dat guy fell flat on the floor..Shree-Chotu lukd at the unconcious guy at der feet..While Shanaya walked out frm the washroom dusting her hands..She smiled at ShreeTu.."Bevada Saala!" ShreeTu lukd at her open-mouthed.."Kya Hua? Chal Na?" Shanaya spke up.."Yeh Tune Kiya?" Both of dem asked in unison.."Haan! Aur nahi toh kaun??" She laughed.."Ab Chal!" She urged her frnds.."Devaaa! Yeh ladki kamaal hai.." Chotu sighed..Haan Sabki Zubaan Pe Kyun Mera Hi Sawaal Hai..Jo Ho Gaya Hai Wo Mera Kamaal Hai.. She walked in stylishly nd again graced the dance floor..Lucky Boy..You're My Lucky Boy..Jaane Kaun Banega Mera Lucky Boy..(x2) She was dancing but her eyes wer all alert on her target..When she noticed sumone in the drinks counter.."Sir! Bhai! Mil Gaya

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

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She reported Arjun nd Sameer.."Drinks Counter!" She added.."Good Job Shanaya!" Sameer praised her..."Now Focus Miss Mukherjee! U knw What To Do!" Arjun spke.."Yes Sirrr!" She answered..She took a deep breath nd walked confidently to the drinks counter.."Shivkumar Right?" She spke huskily..A Man in his mid 30's turned to luk at the beautiful vixen bfore him..He eyed her frm head to toe.."Yeah! And Ur?" he asked her smiling,appreciatively.."Alina..Alina Singh!" She smiled giving her hand nd he shook it.."Bahut suna tha aapke bare me.." She smiled seductively.."Really? Im honoured!" He smiled,drinking his whisky..He apparently seemed very drunk.."Waise Aapko Experience bhi karna chahungi.." She spke,huskily.."Main Bhi betaab hunn aapko samajhne ke liye.." He smiled naughtily..TBC.. Precap-"Sir??" She spke softly..Arjun advanced towards her lyk a lion towards his gazelle..He Was Close..So Close dat she cud feel his breathing on her neck.."Sir!" She spke..Arjun leaned closer to her..

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Delusional Minx

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

awesome updates dear

loved them

read them all in one go

can u plz pm me the next updates?

thankx in advance

unres for next part

me first 😆 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

awesome update dear

loved it

shanaya 👏👏👏

martial artist..sharp shooter😲😲👍🏼too good

went as n undercover😲

interesting precap

continu soon

thankx for pm😊

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rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

awesome plot
Shanu n Akansha's bond was really nice n wonderful
truly loved the convo n masti of the two friends
Shan n Arjun's first accidental meet was amazing one!!
n Shan's sarcastic n bitter replies to our akdu were nice as well
Arjun's helping her n taking to hospital
was nice on his part
indeed a true gentlemen
Arjun-Shan suv fight over the game was really nice n cute
the team's n Shan's bharat milap was super awesome
wonderful parts👏
cont soon

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fairy shah

@fairyshah

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

wow amazing update dear

loved the girl yaar

sab chizo mei A 1

wow usne toh sab ko he dho dala aur etf ho apne suprises se shocked kardiya

kiya larki hai boss

thanks fro pm and do cont soon

ps : precap looks hot

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Anika_VR

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Wow...
Super awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Oooh...
Shanaya impressing everyone with her skills... Thts great...
Shanaya on an undercover mission to nab the criminal...
Hmm...
Looks like Shivkumar ko uski naani yaad aane wali hai...
Attagirll... Apt term for Shanaya...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

superb.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

awesome!!!
Shan's skills were truly impressive
n she manged to impress our akdu too
Arjun thinking "a Raw agent" was really nice
the undercover plot was nice
n Shan's sizzled with her work
wonderful!!
interesting precap
thanks for pm
cont soon