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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
it was a nice part anant..

you gave sameer's pov...good work gal...

arjun...kamina dost..well done...😃

loved the potray of relations...continue soon..thanks for the pm😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Amazing
Arjun trying to find who Sam was talking to
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
read all 3 parts in one go
nice start...but ek shikayat hai...pehle 2 parts me ek bhi dialogue nhi dhang se...

but finally third part me arjun k aate hi dialogue bhi aa gye


but 3 rd part tha bahut chota...

nice start aisha doctor...aur sam dil ka mariz😆


aur arjun wo mariz ko hospital pahuchane wala rishtedar 😆


ab arjun kya karega sam k sath wo padhne me zyda mazaa aane wala hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Res / UNRES

YAAH Me first dance to banta hai
Now coming to comment *****
Loved it dear awesome
Poor sam missing aisha
Loved the way u described sameer state of mind
so arjun ne pakad liya
thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊


yup😆😆...dance to banta hai
now you know that how much happy we feel when we comment first on your story..😉
glad you like this update..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

aww!!

so short...
yet a cute part..
ab ye kya.. adhi raat ko aise hasega to shaq to hona hi hai..
ab dekho./.. Arjun kaise pata lagata hai!!😆

good night pe ye haal...agey kya hoga sameer sahab?

kya kare kabhi dimag nahi chalta na issliye chhota tha.😆
yup arjun hai..kuchh na kuchh to kaerga hi..😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Sam missing Aisha...😃😃😃
Arjun teasing Sam...😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Glad you liked the update.😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

short yet amazing..
sam missing ayesha.. 😲
ab dekhte hain arjun kaise pata lagata hai
contd. soon
thnx for pm


Thanks for reading..😊

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun teasing Sam😆😆
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon


Thanks for liking it..😊

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..


Thanks for loving it..😊

Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

it was a nice part anant..

you gave sameer's pov...good work gal...

arjun...kamina dost..well done...😃

loved the potray of relations...continue soon..thanks for the pm😊😊😊


Thanks..😃
kamine dost hi kaam ke hote hai..😆 unke sath hun bhi aise ho sakte hai..
sameer ke sath arjun na ho to kaise chalega?😉
trying my best to portray their relation..😃

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
Arjun trying to find who Sam was talking to
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon


Thank you for liking it..😊
Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

read all 3 parts in one go

nice start...but ek shikayat hai...pehle 2 parts me ek bhi dialogue nhi dhang se...

but finally third part me arjun k aate hi dialogue bhi aa gye


but 3 rd part tha bahut chota...

nice start aisha doctor...aur sam dil ka mariz😆


aur arjun wo mariz ko hospital pahuchane wala rishtedar 😆


ab arjun kya karega sam k sath wo padhne me zyda mazaa aane wala hai 😉

haan kyunki i am not good at writing dialogues..
ha ha...arjun ki entry ho or kuchh naya na ho!!
Thanks for reading it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Part 4

She is getting ready for the conference.Its the last day here for her.She is excited about going back to home but she is nervous also as she has to live this beautiful place..she is going to miss everything about this city and people of the city..

Thanks to Sakshi my collegue cum my friend,who insisted me to attend this conference.she has always been my strength.after coming to delhi Sakshi and Karan have been there for me.my friends are my family now.

Her collegue knocked on the door.After greeting her good morning,she asked her to hurry up.there is lot to do today.After the conference is over ,everyone is happy that now they are going back.

When everyone is chatting happily and having fun,she goes far from the people and called Sameer.

Aisha: Hello!

Sameer(happy happy): hello,aisha!! kyun call kiya tumne? kuchh kam tha kya?

A: Nahi nahi...bas wo aaj conference khatm ho gayi..abhi khatm hua sab.socha ki tumse baat kar lun..busy the kya?

S: Nahi busy to nahi hun..bas kaam kar raha hun..bolo to bahar jaana hai?

aaj kahan jaana chahti ho? ab fir to tum wapas chali jaogi na (feeling sad)

A:bahar? haan jaana to padega hi na..(jaise ki usko to jaane ki ichha hi na ho)

(to make him happy) abhi to bahar jane ki baat kar rahe the or abhi ye kya dukhi dukhi baatein karne lage haan..chalo aaj tumhari pasand ki koi jagah pe chalte hai..

S: haan haan ...kyun nahi..(he is all happy)

A: to thik hai

S: mein sham ko tumhe pick up karta hun tumhare place se..

Tabhi awaj aati hai door se

Arjun: kahan jaa rahe ho? (narrowing his eyes) kisse pick up karne ki baat kar rahe ho?

Arjun kab se bahar khada sam ko dekh raha tha..wo kuchh kam se uski cabin mein aa raha tha tabhi dekha ki kisika phone aaya ho or wo achanak se khush ho gaya ..

Arjun ko dekh ke sameer ki situation to aisi ho gai jaise koi criminal red handed pakda gaya ho..

S : kahin nahi...mein kaha jaa raha hunn..mein to yahin hua...(baat ko badlne ke liye) tumhe kuchh kam tha?

A:( seeing his failed attempt to change the topic..usko bhi mazak sujta hai)are nahi wo bas mein kehne aaya thi ki hum sab bahar jaa rahe hai dinner ke liye..tum chaloge ?

S (turant hi):nahiii

A:(uska doubt clear ho jaata hai..kuchh to gadbad hai) kyun or kuchh planning hai kya?kisi or ke saath jane wale ho?

S: nahi to mein to bas ghar hi jaanewala hun...kyun tum kahan jaa rahe ho..?

A: abhi kuchh decide nahi hai..bas tum meri wait mat karna .ab tum to nahi aana chahte to..

S: nahi wo mera mood nahi hai..tum chale jao..(kitna jooth bologe sam)

A:thik hai to mein chalta hoon..bye

S:haan

ab tak aisha ka phone chalu hi tha or wo sab baatein sun rahi thi..sam fir se phone pe baat kar raha hai..jaise hi arjun ko bahar jaate dekhta hai

A: kya hua ? kon tha ?

S:kuchh nahi ..mein tumhe shaam ko milta hun..bye.

A: bye.


Tabhi bahar arjun ke dimag mein or hi kuchh chal raha hai...

'ye sam bhi na..jab bhi puchho ..kuchh nahi kahe ke baat ko avoid kar deta hai..dekhna padega ye hai kaun jiske liye mujse jooth bol raha hai..uska phone aate hi maano uske face pe chamak aa jaati hai..i have to find it out today..chalo sam aaj ye bhi dekh lete hai..wait and watch sam..aaj to malum kar hi lunga..'

sam andar soch raha hai ki aisha ko kahan leke jaoon aaj..ab to wo waise bhi aaj ke liye hi yahan hai...fir to pata nahi kab milegi..

Sam apna kaam khatm karke apni office se bahar niklta hai or dekhta hai ki office khali hai sirf night duty wale log hi hai..shayad sab log ghar chale gaye hai..or wo bhi apne ghar jaata hai..

Suv mein bethte hi wo aisha ke liye kuchh gift lene ki sochta hai or gift shop ke aage rok deta hai apni gaadi ko..

bahot sari confusion ke baad wo ek simple chain or pendenant choose karta hai..
wo pack karwa ke ghar pahonchta hai..
jaise hi wo door kholne jaata hai..arjun ghar pe hi hota hai or uske aane ki awaz sunkar door kholne chalta hai...
arjun ko ghar pe dekh ke wo chaunk jaata hai..

S:tum? tum ghar pe? tum to bahar jaanewale the na?
Ar:haan ..par fir nahi gaya..kyun kya hua? itna shock ho gaya?
S:nahi kuchh nahi
Arjun sam ke haath mein gift bag dekh ke
Ar: ye kya hai?
S:hai kuchh..par tumhare liye nahi hai..so use chhuna bhi mat..

sam sochta hai ab mein kaise bahar jaaoon? ye to ghar pe hai ..agar bahar gaya to fir se iske 20question game start ho jayega..kuchh to karna hi padega..

arjun sochta hai sam ab kaunsa bahana banaoge dekhte hai..

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Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago

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