Raesha story : Second Chance ! part 8 24/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
beautiful start
awesome part
sasha always love to read their stories
thanks for the story and pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
I can't believe these...so much change from previous os...
but I guess as u mentioned change is constant in life...and my my it was amazing update nd bonus was it was through out in English and m proud of u for that...
and tell me from where have u find this book 'the monk who sold his Ferrari'..and last quote is so appropriate. ..
phewww...commented late but gave this much biggg comment...can't write more as using my mobile...huhhh
as laptop is hijacked by as usual virad
happy?? 😆 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh..forgot to mention that continues it yaar...
I want to see ur growth as such a good writer. .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 - I believe


They both are walking on the road as he has parked car somewhere in parking zone..

she loves road side food and even though he doesnt like it much they both are going to eat at roadside stall.

It is sunday so people are out with friends and family to enjoy weekend.

They both are looking around and walking side by side. They see siblings are fighting over a candy near the candy stall and their parents are smiling by looking at this silly fight.

A girl is repeatedly asking her papa to let her sit in that merry go round,but her papa denies for her request and tell her to ask something because he knows about her fear of height.

They both are walking but none try to break the silence and wants to talk. As if this silence is more comfortable than any other words.

This scenes of children and their parent remind her of her own childhood.she is single child of her parents.and because of this his father was more protective about her.

Again she goes back in the past..as the scenes around her remind her of her childhood..how her papa made her sleep in the swing by telling her the stories..how her mom fed her favourite aloo sabji..how her uncle and aunt took her to the fair in the town during vacation..how she had lived with her uncle and his family during vacation..how she used to play in the sand with her cousin..her first gift when she turned 13 was beautiful cycle from her parents..and everytime they used to take dinner out in restaurant on every member's bday..she was always fascinated with small gifts ..

suddenly cold water touch her foot and she comes back in the present..having sam around she doesnt feel so lonely like she used to feel usually.yes he has that aura around her..and it affect her much that..she feels nice whe he stays around her..his company had bring little changes in her..

sam looks at her and raising his eyebrow gives'what happen'kinda look..she just smiles at him and start walking towards the chat stall..

they enjoye their food and walk at the beach..while walking he asks her about her next day plan ..she answered him that she would be busy tomorrow as she has already planned shopping and dinner with her collegues..he asker her further where they will be going..and replied with 'yet not decided.' he replied with'okay' and asked for an ice cream ..and in answer of her question she replied with her big smile..yes she likes ice cream too much..

they go to shop and order their ice cream..she likes chocolates while his order is as simple as him 'vanilla'.

after they come back to his car while eating ice cream and talking..he drops her at her hotel and leaves for his home.

he is thinking about her while driving a car..they liked each others company but nothing more than friendship is their.they have started their friendship on the base of trust..

sometimes you need long time to trust someone..sometimes it clicks in a single meet..sometimes even after knowing someone for a long time you cant easily trust the person wholeheartedly..and when a person like her who had been betrayed in the past and very sensitive from the nature cant easily trust anyone...even after knowing these many things..she has trusted him..

aisha is walking back to her room..

after changing her dress,she orderes coffee for her and then takes a book from the coffee table..books have made her life easy..

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"I believe in the sun, even though it slowly rises
I believe in you, even without realizing
I believe in the rain, though i see no cloud in the sky
I believe in truth, even though everybody lie
I believe in Love
Even though people live hatred
I believe in the power to forgive"

(song composed by agnee and parikrama)



Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
Beautifully written
Aisha's emotions were nicely depicted
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update..
iliked the lastlines specially. .from parikrama and agni..u used them very well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Loved It anant
Beautiful update dear
Loved aisha pov & way she was recalling her past
N SAMSHA trust & & friendship Awesome
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sorry for double post
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome update...
Loved Aisha's POV...😃😃😃
& their friendship...😃😃😃
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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