T2 FF :Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi...Discont note on page 134 - Page 30

Originally posted by: laila1994

Finally, I read it

Firstly, in previous update you asked whether Riya deserves Arjun or not? My answer is yes She does.

thanks

Though I personally think Abortion is sin but I am not Judging Riya by my narrow approach here.

If I am not wrong, Abortion is not illegal or prohibited in India. A woman can abort a child I she does not want to be a mother.Here Riya is not at fault She chose her carer over her Fetus (Not a child).

But not telling Arjun about her Abortion was definitely wrong. How can she take such a big step without Arjun's Support or approval. It shows her lack of trust on her Husband.

"Couples who are devoted leave behind single life and establish their marriage as their first priority."

Arjun and Riya were in love with each other But clearly they were not devoted to each other.

yeah i loved this part...devotion...ahaa..not bad laila..

Even now if they choose to move on with each other would they be ready to make compromises & accept each other as they are not as they want them to be.

The details that you added of the Ariya's marriage life e.g, Riya's carefree attitude, Arjun's busy schedule, Arjun's possessive nature. All of these added a realistic touch in it. these little & minor difference eventually led them into a big disaster.

I read a comment where you mentioned that Arjun cheated on Riya by going closer to Sakshi. I disagree with that. When Sakshi came into Arjun's life Ariya were already Divorced so how can it be termed as cheating???

a divorce doesnt mean the person has stopped loving..here too arjun loves riya...and sakshi..i still doubt his love there..if he had loved her..he wouldnt have cared for riya so much...he could have left her to sam...

Arjun-Ayesha shares a beautiful bond. Ayesha is supported,Not judgemental & a lovely friend. I simply loved her.

Sameasha are adorable. Sameer was jealous of Arjun & Ayesha slapped her😆

There scenes are treat to read .And the beach scene was so beautiful. At least somebody is happy & satisfied with his spouse. 😉

Sakshi was kept in the dark for the long time. though her character is a bit Chipku types But at least She loved Arjun & still supporting him after knowing about Riya's presence in Arjun's life.

Please Tell The truth to sameer. He is getting on my nerves. He knows that he knows only half truth still he is judging his best friend. Ayesha is not telling the truth because she is bonded by Arjun's promise but why Riya is keeping her silence???

Last update was Fabulous. You wrote Arjun's agony brilliantly.

My views are no different than Atisha's. I wanted to say everything exactly the same as she said it. to time q waste karon

Read her comment and think it's mine😆

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Loved it Rimi Awesome dear

Beautiful update

Loved Ariya emotional turmoil that u sketched so beautifully

So now sameer knows everything thats good

He was really shocked to hear all this

He never expected this of riya

Poor riya tried to start fresh with all her might

But destiny was not in favor

She had to pay for her deeds now

Arjun is also so broken

even he tried to forgive her but no use

n last main tumne jhatka diya hai rimi

Waiting to know riya kisse baat kar rahi thi

Thanks for the Pm

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
awesome update
love it
cont soon

Originally posted by: pango

awesome update

loved it

thanx for pm

continue soon

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

yeah sam means sam's place..how long laila?? even after he is staying with someone else for the past year?😕

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

nice

Originally posted by: Jane523

nyc

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice one.. LOVE it.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update sam get riya truth now
what he will do he hate riya and
arjun confuse stage when solve
and whom Riya talking update
soon

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

really nyc1.


finally u back & update it...


really happy to see that sakshi understand him very well.


and Riya?? why she never try to talk to him again , she loves him na.. i think so... then why she ???? she even did not give try to save their relationship????? is her career more tham imp to her ????

Originally posted by: madmadona

omg riya cannot be a mother again, is that true?
feeling so sad yaar
their turmoil very well written
with whom riya talked on phone at the end???
woah arjun is still scared to lose riya
his fear of loosing her overcame his pain
awesome update
cont soon