T2 FF :Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi...Discont note on page 134 - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional update di...
Finaly sam ko pathachalgaya sab kuch
realy feeling sad for sakshi
OMG riya could never be a mother
eagerly waiting for next part
please di... Sent me pm please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sometime back I remember reading this story, fir bhool gayi
but lately I read the whole parts
its a good plot
none can blame anyone in this fiction
all had their problems, egos and confusions
waiting for the next part
PS: shud say, I loved the banners. simple yet elegant

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 15:

Arggg! Itni late update diya hai k ab samaj b ni araha comment kia karon, sab to pehle hi bol chuki hoon

This update was a complete summary of your FF.
Many things got clear by this,

Firstly, Riya did want a child.
But first she wanted to prove herself.

Arjun wanted a child at any cost.

They both were affected by their past.
This child & Riya was Arjun's only family, He didn't want to let go of them
& The mission was Riya's only chance to prove herself.

We can say they were in conflict of interest😳

Arjun kept his silence because he didn't see guilt in Riya's eyes of killing their child.

Riya never felt guilty of what she had done.Her forgiveness was a fake gesture.She needed his support not his forgiveness. Was it a fact or just Arjun's POV???

Raesha❤️

Sameer ko bari masti sooj rahi hai😆

'to taste kar lo,🤣🤣

Sameer proposed Ayesha...yay.🥳

PS. If Riya was just few weeks pregnant then how do they know it was a girl????😕
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

res

unres...
let me dance,,,me 1st
firstly sorry 4 d i hate u pm😭😭
i had entirely 4got about dis res😆😆😆
me n my sharp memory u c...
Sara din agar dimag me shree,BK ,Raesha n ARK ghumega to sab bhulna jayez hai,...
very sorry😳😳

Ohkay.. 1st.. WELCOME BACK...

Coming to the update...
it actually made me cry...
the irreversible things that happened... no one was at fault...
yet all are suffering,...

Acha hua Ria ke bare me Aisha ne sab bata dia Sameer ko...
Their emotions..turmoils.. even Sakshi's reaction was written beautifully...

Ab ye phone ka kya chakkar hai.. is Ria on some other mission again?? bcz its not Sam we know that!



thank you so much ishi...your large fonts and deep colors always sooth my eyes but not my heart...coz ittu sa comment seems itna bara...🤢

haan sam ke bare mein to saab pata hota hai tumhe..😛
thanks you liked it...😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

It was a classic Dukhi update💔

Ayesha made a right choice. I am proud of her.😃

Arakshi scene was adorable. I used to think Sakshi is Chipku & immature but after last two updates she stole my heart.👍🏼

glad you liked my sakshi..chipku..😆

he walked out without turning back,missing the fading color in sakshi's eyes and face.She knew well then she had lost him.Arjun said that he will not give up one her so why she thought she had lost him

urdu is taking a toll on your mind...think after you give that exam...😉😆


Poor Riya, She can never be a mother ( Biologically only).

She doesn't deserve it. 😳

yeah biologically only..😉 hmm


Arjun wanted a family but After this news his all expectations were crushed that eventually made him depressed thus he isolated himself and busied himself with work.


I think Riya made a right decision, nothing was left in there marriage expect silence. It was better to let go than to keep holding & hurting/breaking each other.


Arjun thinks Riya is in love with someone😆


PS. I used to think that I know which couple would make it in the last after our PM talk. But now I am not sure anymore. You are actually behaving like a star-plus vamp😡



star plus vamps are much better...trust me on this...

about the couple...dont worry sweety..ill use my every ounce of energy to confuse my readers...

thanks for your comment...

i am glad you finished reading the story till now...proud of you baji..😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Liked Sameer-Aisha convo...😃😃😃
Now Sameer knows the whole truth...
Loved how Sakshi handled Arjun...😃😃😃
Arjun's NO to Sakshi made me smile...😃😃😃
I like this song...😃😃😃
I don't whether I m feeling bad for Arjun more or for Riya ...But yes feeling bad definitely for Ariya...😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭

One question aap itna emotional likhte kaise ho???...Aapko rona nahi aata???

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



thanks sneha...i like the song too..😃

ye emotional tha?? really?? something is wrong with my emotional side...i felt it was quite hilarious..😛😆

glad you liked keep reading..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

u asked in ur last update na whether ri deserves a 2nd chance my ans is yes, not coz i like ariya n u know i like ur str coz of ur writting

my pov is that i depends an mother also if she want a child or not,..she has the right ..right?
n if the mother is not mentally prepared then she can abort...n every 1 deserves a 2nd chace especcially in love , in marriage in any realtion..it is sensitive.
though is is not cent percent right but she is not wrong 2
so my ans would b a YES
n rest all upon u ...how is u gnh 2 shape the stry



thanks for the POV tina..i appreciate it..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farana786

di i like this story be it either ariya or arakshi. even though ariya is my favorote couple but i am enjoying this fiction so please dont discontinue. . and keep on pm me the updates acha.

and u r a fantastic writer di. ...



thanks farana..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonycs001

Hi rimi
I come to the forum occasionally nowadays as im lil busy
Sorry I couldnt read your story from start but read it today
Its totally nice
Everyone are on their own phase ria feeling sorry for what she has done
Arjun feling confused what to do his heart wanted to forgive her but mind still reminding what ria did
Sakshi frightened of loosing her love

And all are wrong in their own ways too
Ria should have discused her insecurities with arjun as both loved each other and went against their parents for their love instead took own decision like an individual forgetting she is now not individual but tied up with someone
Arjun thinking only of himself and forgeting rias emotions and not giving space to her, how can he think he can force a girl to become mother when shes not prepared
And finally sakshi knowing arjuns love for ria coming into his life thinking he forgot his wife

But still I have confusion on arjuns part
Whom does he love
Sakshi or ria or his long lost child , whom does he, because he is the one gona cause major misunderstanding

Anyway about your writting skills their are awsome, in this forum I came acroos people who write stories in different kind other than just mere love stories, ypur one of them. You have such a good skills girl.
Thanks for writing such a good fiction for us
Thanks again



hey...i am so glad you read my story and liked it...

thank you so much for the lovely comment...😃


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

the much awaited moment of truth finally came!!

I have frozen fingers to write anything on these chapters. thy are well executed, well bound & superbly written ones. Arjun maybe went his toughest time, stuck between two ladies he loves simultaneously.
Riya, whom he loves till the date and Sakshi, who has been his biggest support to move on. but the triangle is hurting everyone.
Riya, she was still in the dark, but yes, she could read Arjun...without asking a word she sensed his restlessness, bravo girl!! but I want to see her reaction when she came to know the whole truth.
Sakshi's turmoil, pain, shock everything you portrayed so nicely...along with the storm..nothing would be that perfect...she saw her first love was quivering for someone else...and then found his past standing in between them...it is enough for her to cut up with Arjun...but the way she waited for a justification from Arjun and tried to handle him till the last time...she earned my respect. She stood by a shattered man...& I fell she'll stand by him till the end.
Arjun finally opened his heart to Sakshi...& yes to some extent I agree with him...love is not everything to live with...a mutual respect is necessary to make a relationship fruitful...Whatever Arjun couldn't get from Riya, he found it with Sakshi...

Stick to your original storyline Ree, I don't wanna read a spoiled story due to public demand, plz!
Thanks for PM.



atisha glad you liked the chapter..i am not changing anything...

i asked a simple question ati...it worked like a filter..😆

thanks for the comment..😊

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