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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Update
Loved Saakshi. Hope she is fine and safe

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story read both the parts
hope arjun is able to save sakshi
pls do pm me for the rest of the parts

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme stry..
nyc cncpt
cntinue soon
plz pm me 4 d nxt prt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi

Thnx for the pm.

Awesome update. I'm Glad that sikander is dead.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb plz save sakshi... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you all the guys...for ur comments...and for such a good response...

here is the last part..hope u all like it

Next part...

"Sakshi..."Arjun was just hugging her continuously and crying..he path her cheek and said "ye tumne kya kiya Sakshi..tum aisa kase kar sakti ho..tumhe kuch nai hoga Sakshi mai tumhe kuch hone hi nai dunga..."he was literally crying.. "sakshi ankhe kholo..plz mere liye saksh..ek bar bol do plz...Sakshi utho.."but all was going in vein..

Few minutes before Sakshi saw sikinder pointing his gun towards Arjun...she don't think twice she saw that her life is going to snatch out from her...and she can't bear to loose hhim so she run to him and take that bullets..and saw himself falling in his love's arm..

And now she was lying lifelessly in Arjun's arm...and his shirt was full of blood...of Sakshi..

Kal Meera tadpi Kaanha ko
Sab laaj samaaj ganwaai re
Ab prem mein tadpan tarsan ki
Hai baari Kaanha ki aayi re

As they reach the hospital..arjun took Sakshi in his arm and place her on the structure and shout for doctor.. as the doctor came he pleaded to him... "ise bacha lijiye plz...isse kuch nai hona chaiye..." doctor told him "vaise to inka bachna muskil hai..six bullets lagi hai..koi magic hi inhe bacha sakta hai..phir bi hum apni puri kosish karenge...ise ICU mai le ke jao"..and the Sakshi was taken to ICU and that red light above the door was lighten..

Mori jaan gayi
O.. tora khel hua...

Arjun stand beside the ICU and saw inside Sakshi was fighting with he life...

Ayesha came towards him and told him that.. "bahut mana kiya tha maine..ki vo apse payar na kare...apse door rahe hai...par nai...vo nai mani...kaheti thi...ki vo kisi aur ke bare mai soch bi nai sakti...apke payar ne use kisi aur ke payar ke layak choda hi nai...maine kaha tha ki apka payar use sirf dukh dega...aur apne bi use taunt and nafarat ke alawa diya kya hai..sorry to say but aj Sakshi sirf apki vajah se zindagi aur maut ke bich lad rai hai.."

Arjun was felling shame on himself.. Sakshi's similing face, her innoncent eyes..her talks were coming in front of him..


Mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota..
Mujhko maine ishq wafaa mein
Khud hi hai loota

He remember one time..when he taunt Sakshi for her silly talks..he said jis din tum yaha se jaogi na us din mai party karungi..sakshi got irritate and said "soch lo Arjun...dekh lena jis din mai jaungi na us din tum sabse jayada tum royoge.."

Her words were ecoing in his ears...and yes he was crying a lot..


Lut-lut ke.. lut-lut ke..
Jeena hai marna baanke yaar bina

Saaiyaan.. hun main ki karaan
Saaiyaan.. jee laan ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafaa
Saaiyaan.. (x2)

He was in deep thought.. what he was thinking in evening that he would apologize for his behavior..and would propose her..and start his new life...would forget his old wounds...would try to live now..would try to sleep peacefully...would try to erase his old past... but now his life was lying inside the ICU and he was watching her..

Ho.. sapnon ke sheeshe toote
Dukh ki daraar se
Chaah ke bhi nikle na mann majhdhar se

A little girl came to him and said.. "kya hua uncle..ap pareshan ho.."arjun just watch her and nodded .. she again said "koi bat nai uncle vo jo ganesh ji hai nai..ap unse jake bol do..vo apki sari problems ko solve kar denge.." she hold Arjun's hand and take her to the temple inside the hospital...Arjun senselessly walk with her..and he went to the temple and saw that girl..she ordered him to sit and join his hands and asked him "a bap inse apni bat bol de...ye apki sari bat man lenge"

Koi bhi na bole aur

koi bhi bulaaye na


Phir bhi aawaazein sune

baadlon ke paar se..

He said to god that.. "apne meri ma mujhs chini..mai chup raha..!!

Apne mera bachpan mujhe china..mai chup raha..meri roshni..meri sans lene ki vajah mujhse chin li mai tab bi chup raha..par aj ap meri zindagi mei jan..mera sab kuch chinne pai lage ho..plz aisa mat karo mai..us ke bina nai ji paunga..apki roj puja karunga...apko dil se manuga..par plz...ap mujhe Sakshi lauta dijiye..plz.."

Rus-rus ke.. rus-rus ke..
Mann se mann jaana khud hi yaar bina

Saaiyaan.. hunn main kee karaan
Saaiyaan.. jee laa ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafa
Saaiyaan ..

Suddenly he heard doctor sound.. "mr.rawte..patient ko hosh aa gaya hai.."he stand and cry loud..by hugging that girl.. he parted and said "tumhara naam kya hai.."she was about to say but someone call her "ROSHNI..."the girl said "ab mujhe jana hoga..bye..uncle.."he was constantly looking to her..and after that the girl stop and look behind.. and wave towards him.. he saw his roshni in that girl.. he wave and run to Sakshi's room..

She open her eyes and look to him..he hold her hands and sit near her and said.. "tum samajti kya ho apne ap ko..supergirl ho...koi powers hai tumme jo tum sab kuch sah logi...kya zarurat thi ye stunt karne ki...tumhe kuch ho jata to.."he was sobbing between he talk.. "tumhe kya lagta hai ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mai zinda raheta...mar jata mai...nai hai ab itni himmat ki dubara kisi apne ko khoke zinda rahene ki..par ab tumhe iski punishment milegi..sari zindagi tumhe mujhe jhena padega...mera gussa mera pagalpan aur mera der sara payar.."

Sakshi has tear in her eyes and she said.. "koi dusra option nai hai..kya..??"Arjun smile at her and said "nai hai..koi dosri choise nai hai..miss Sakshi anand tumhe mrs Arjun rawte banna hi padega..samjhi ya samja.."he could not complete his words and hug her..tightly " I love you Sakshi..I love you a lot.."Arjun whisper near her ears.. "I love you too.."Sakshi replied..

"and we love you three.."whole team came inside...and sit with them... Ayesha said sorry to Arjun for her rude behavior.. but Arjun said "agar mai tumhari jagah hota to isse bi bura bolta..sorry ki koi zarurat nai..hai..it was your love towards Sakshi..that save her.."

Sameer said "ha..ab Sakshi ki fikr karne ki koi zarurat nai hai..kyoki ab aur koi hai jo uska bahut..khayal rakhega..hai na Arjun.." all laugh but Sakshi blushed and Arjun through a glare to Sameer..

He said "ab Sakshi ko aram karne do tum sab bi jake aram karo..jao.."Ayesha wink to her and all left.

Arjun lock the room and went to Sakshi... He slowly bend his head near her neck and kiss their..then he move to her chicks..her nose..her eyes..her forehead..kiss their all and said "I love you..a lot Sakshi"... with this he took her lips with his and kiss her slowly gently softly pouring all his love care in it..for a long time.

.they parted to take air..he smile to her and kiss on her forehead and shift her a little to lie beside her on that bed...Sakshi nuzzle to his neck and said.. "I love u too..' placing her hands on his chest..he also keep his one hand as her pillow and other on her waist as if protecting her from all problems..and they sleep in each other embrace.. to welcome the new morning of their life...

The end..or start of new life..

Kaisa tha.. how's that song...

Plz comment and give ur response...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow I am really impress why? Because you complete this
Story so quick 😉 and in good manner ( cold sigh) otherwise we all waiting your other one( pouting) update
Anyway it's all joke please don't mind
Yes I like the song and story base on this song
It's really nice first I am going afraid maybe
Sakshi dead I read with one eye close( scared)
But when doctor say patient ko hosh aa Gaya hay
Then I open my both eyes
Sigh relief and relax then finish reading
Small roshini was cute idea
ACP sahib confess is really nice
But sakshi reply was hallarious koi doosra option nahi hay
Hahaha
Amazing yaar
Awesome very nice work
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Beautiful & Romantic end
Loved it dear
Thanks for the Pm
Super OS
it was really beautiful 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rehana25

Wow I am really impress why? Because you complete this
Story so quick 😉 and in good manner ( cold sigh) otherwise we all waiting your other one( pouting) update
Anyway it's all joke please don't mind
Yes I like the song and story base on this song
It's really nice first I am going afraid maybe
Sakshi dead I read with one eye close( scared)
But when doctor say patient ko hosh aa Gaya hay
Then I open my both eyes
Sigh relief and relax then finish reading
Small roshini was cute idea
ACP sahib confess is really nice
But sakshi reply was hallarious koi doosra option nahi hay
Hahaha
Amazing yaar
Awesome very nice work
Thanks for PM


thank u dear..
for liking the story..
and mai sakshi ko kaise mar sakyi hu.. jab arjun ji unke sath hai..
and i am in love wid arakshi...
yar mere exam chal rahe hai..isilye i can't update regulary..
but i try to update my story as soon as possible..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Beautiful & Romantic end

Loved it dear
Thanks for the Pm
Super OS
it was really beautiful 😊


thank u dear...
i am glad u like it..

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