Ariya os :- Bati q gul ho jatte hai part2-9 complete 13/3 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends ...hey me back with part one hope u like concept ...

Thanx 4 lot of love and drop ur valuable comment ...

Muhaaa...

Note:- ajnabi season 2 ka note read ker Lena ...

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Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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. Part -1
One old man who stood in one chair ...who is sipping his tea... He is caretaker of electronic light's shop ...he is color blind person ...he can't come to knw the difference between red and black ...just tukka lagatay hai...apnay malik ki help k lea ...

Man :- oye...Chotu ...tere chai ...Mai Aaj dhood nahi tha ...Maza nahi aya ...Arjun baba k lea dood Mai pati dal k leker Anna ...Mai to peele ...per vo nahi peaga...

(yes mr Arjun Suryakant rawte ik light decorator hai Jo rawte light wala ka Malik hai ...Jo shadio Mai jaker gher ko roshandar kerta hai light jala ker ...)

One handsome boy wear white kurta chalay aa Rhay apni bike per

Man:- ayo Arjun baba Aaj bhut time laga diya ...

Arjun touch the old man's feet and took blessing from him..

Arjun:- kaka Aaj maa k sath market Jana tha ...gher ka samman kharidna tha ..

Kaka:- asha karid aya...

Arjun :- ji kaka karid aya

Arjun apni pocket sai ik packet nikalta hai or kaka ko deta hai...

Kaka:- tumay yaad hai ,,,,,,baba ...

Arjun :- bhula kab tha ...

Their Conco disturb by landline's ring ...

Tring ...!!!!!!!!!!tring...!!!!!!...tring ...!!!!!...

Arjun pick the phone and took order from sharma house ...

Scence shift in wedding house ...

Arjun decorate the home very nice ...and check the all lights and arrangement and went to upstairs to check the """jhumar""""

When he check the it ...his eye sight went to one girl ...he gazing shamelessly ...she is stunning personality and just like angel came from heaven ...

Girl feel his gaze ...and went toward him ...jab vo ik dujay k smanay jatay hai ...then kaka galat wire set ker dettay hai ...to light gul ho jatte hai ...

Arjun (MV) :- kaka abhi mila tha time wire galat lagnay ka...

He came in reality when he heard her voice

Girl :- tumari baati kyu gul ho gae ...mujhay dekh ker ...

Her voice has little bit angeryness ..koe candle ko jalata ...us light ki roshni usk chehray per padhe hai ...

Arjun (MV) :- mashaallah ...yeh to or sunder lag rhe hai ...but mere avaj kyu nahi nikal rhe ...yeh kya ho rha hai...

Arjun was silent ...and stare her without blinking the eyes...girl felt uncomfortable ...

Girl:- idiot ...

Yeh keh ker muhtarma ...chali jatte hai...or Arjun sirf ussay Dekhta he rehta hai...

After they went to their shop..Arjun just lost in his thoughts ...

Arjun :- kaka Mai aap ko kis chez ko nishani do...

Kaka:- baba aap kya keh Rhay ho??

Arjun just frustrate and went to take his cutting tea ...

Arjun (MV) :- salay pyar huya ...but ladki ka na naam pata hai ...na kush or ...Arjun beta Tera kya hoga ...Bhagwan he rakhsha kery

Few days spend like that ...Arjun just lost his dream where he and she jhula jhultay hai...

Tring ...!!!!!tring...!! !!!!!tring...!!!

Arjun rush to landline with hope ,"ki vo fir ussay milay ..." without waisting any time he picked the phone

Arjun :- hello

Voice. :- yeh rawte k shop ka no hai...

Arjun :- ji ...aap kon

Voice :- Mai Shree ho ji...mujhay apni marriage k lea light decorate kervane the ...

Arjun :- ok g aap apna address dey degia...baki details bta deejia ...Mai ker donga ...

Shree:- ji aap yaha aa ker bta donga ...Mai apka kam Jo aap may sharma house Mai kiya tha us sai kafi impressed ho ...mere honay wali biwi chahti hai...ussay best light decoration chahea ...to aap is Mai kami na rakhna...

Arjun just heared main point .."sharma house """

Arjun(MV):- Shayad vo bhi ho ...

His heart jumping and dancing ...Her chain of thought broke when he heared Shree 's voice

Shree:- aap line per ho ...hello...hello...

Arjun :- ji Mai...ho ...sorry ...aap fiker mat kijia aapko best decoration Melige...aapko koe shikayat ka muka nahi meliga...

Shree:- mujhay aap sai yahe umeed the milay hai ..fir ...ok

Arjun :- ok ...

Arjun went to kaka :- kaka order mila hai ...

Kaka:- baba order to rooz milta hai...

Arjun :- hmm yeh to hai ...but Aaj best order hai ...jiska Mai wait ker rha tha ...

Kaka:- matlab

Arjun :- kush nahi kaka ...chodo aap yeh Saab

Scence shift

Arjun decorated the hall with colorful lights ...and check all arrangement ...
While checking he walk backward and just hit with someone ...

Voice :- aouch...

Both balanced are unstable so both fall on floor ...girl is top on Arjun ..she close her eyes due to fear ...Arjun state her ...After minutes when she realized she is top on something and open her eyes ...and her eyes wide ...

Girl :- tum ...

Arjun came back from his oh la...la...(dreamland)

She try to get up but she agin fall on him ...She glare him who has no mistake nw ...Afte Arjun 's help she stand on her feet ...

Girl:- idiot...

Someone call her

Voice :- Riya ...

Girl reply and glare him ...

Precap :- soon post ...

Next part depend on ur reponse
Excuse 4m any error did not read


Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
nice start dear.. Like it.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Lol arjun ki sach mein batti gul ho gayi...lol

Kaka aap ki timing sach mein bahot kharab hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Nice mish dear awesome
Loved it
Bati gul ka sahi title diya hai 😆😆
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Hilarious title... 😆😆😆
Awesome start...
Arjun as lost case...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Fantastic update dr...!!!!
Wow Arjun key liyeh kya profession chuna hai...😉😆
Awww love at first sight for Arjun...!!!!!
Oye hoye Arjun jab bhi uskodekhta hai usme kho jaata hai...😉
Poor Arjun har baar madam ghur kar aur idiot bol kar chali jaati hain...phuti kismat...!!!!!
Loved it...!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Awesome update.
Loved it a lot.
Unique,as well...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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