Ariya os :- Bati q gul ho jatte hai part2-9 complete 13/3 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
all the best for exms👍🏼
mere bi paper start hona wala hai😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
wow..


it was awesome, blossom and mind blowing update dear.
just loved it.



wah arjun was event manager...

kya mast profession hain.



wow finally ariya meet and arjun was lost in her..

but riya says him idiot.


arjun falls for riya.



loved ariya seconed meet too..


do continue soon.
and thanks for the pm.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
HOTA HAI HOTA HAI
HAR KISI KA ZINDEGI MAIN EK NA EK BAD AAISE HE BATI GUL HO JATTE HAI 😆 JAISE KE HAMARE THE GREAT ARJUN KE SAATH HUYA HAI 🤣
RIYA CALL ARJUN IDIOT 😆 TWICE ,NOT BAD 😆
'kaka Mai aap ko kis chez ko nishani do'
seriously 🤣
awesome start 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesme start
aww arjun is full latoo on riya
& riya's idiot lol
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Mishtu's note :- I'm sorry ...who r really want to kill me .But Mao to gayab ho gae the 😆😉...I did not inform u all that me will not come ...Aaj time mila jaker ...to ik update post ker rhe ho hope u will like nahi to chaple and tomato welcome ...chaple designer ho kam ban jayga 😉 And tomato plss fresh...😳

No more bak bak ...or ha Jo mere Supari dey they hai ya mujhay Marna chahatay hai plsss reham kerna sarif bachay per
I have 350 pm Thanx writers freind u did not forget me will commnt soon ...will back 20 march ...
Muhaaa
Misss u all
Love u all

Love
Mish
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Someone call her

Voice :- Riya ...

Girl reply and glare him ...


Part 2

Riya glare Arjun ...Arjun just stare her ...she went to her freind ...Arjun just seeing her back

Arjun :- riya ...cute hai ,...Naam

Arjun went to Shree and congrats to him ...Shree insist him to attend the wedding ...tab kya tha Arjun k man Mai ladoo fotta ...and he want to dance bt contral himself

Arjun(mv) :- control arjun abhi sirf naam pata hai ...or kush nahi...kae vo shadi Shuda Huye to ...

Nahi ...nahi ...nahi Aisa nahi hai ...ager vo shadi Shuda hotte to usk nishani hotte mangalsutar ya sindoor...

Shree just shake him few minute back ..shree want to ask him that he is ok becouse Arjun is lost in dream ...

Arjun :- h,mmm...

Shree:- r u ok na ..?

Arjun :- ya I'm ok ...dost Chalo !! Tum itna keh rhay ho to tumari shadi ko attend Jarur kerga...

Arjun went to riya she is busy in her work ...

Arjun :- ahem...ahem ...

Riya rose her head and found him

Riya :- mery pass pani hai ...???

Arjun nodded negative

Riya:- hmm ...mery pass honeytus hai...

Arjun again nodded negative

Riya :- to mery sar(head) per aa ker khanss kyu rhey hai ...jao pani jaker pio..

Arjun could not listen her shouting because he just lost in her expression When she talked to him not her lips speak but also her eyes speak ...riya shake him ..

Riya :- behray ho ...

Arjun nodded negative

Riya :- fir boltay kyu nahi ...asha tum Bol nahi saktay hongay ...

He just keep his hand on her mouth ...with sudden jerk her eyes wide

Arjun (MV) :- kitni sunder hai mregnaine ki Tara ...

Arjun :- aap riya ji mujhay bolnay ka muka to dege tabhi to Mai kush Bol sakta ho ...aap muka nahi dey nahi rhe ya yeh kaho ki aap jab mery samnay hotte hai ..mujhay kush yaad nahi rehta ...

Jab sai aapko dekha hai bus aap Mai gum ho jatta ho ...jab aapko Dekhta ho to apnay aap ko mukambal pata ho ...Aisa kabhi nahi dil dharka kissi k lea ...Jaab aap samnay atte hai ...to merey dil ki sur taal baj Rhay hottay hai...I love u ...aapka Jo bhi jawab hoga mujhay manjorr hoga ...

Few minutes Silent

Arjun :- aap kush bolio to sahi

She signal that her mouth covered with his hand . He removed his hand and felt embarrassed
Arjun :- sorry vo ...

Riya:- idiot ... Muh per hath rakha hai or keh rhey ho jawab kyu nahi dey rhe ...By the way I love u too...

She hug him and Arjun registered her words and after realization he tightly hug her

After some days

The groom wait for his bride when his bride came in madap..he lost in her beauty ...after a second lights off ...

Groom:- kaka ...yeh kya kiya ...

Kaka:- maaf kerna Arjun baba

There is lot of dark ...in this darkness ...groom felt someone hold his hand ...after second he felt touch ...

Arjun :- riya ...

Riya :- Arjun shadi sai phely ik baat pushu...

Arjun :- ha...kya baat hai ...

Riya :- mujhay dekh ker tumari baati khyu gul ho jatte hai

The end

Excuse from any error did not prove to read
Love
Mish

Edited by Mishti_k5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Yippeee!!!!!!!!!!!
me first
Awesome update
loved it
Loved their confession
it was cute
truly Riya ko dekhke Arjun ki batti gul ho jati hai😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Loved it mish too good
& pani & honeytus 🤣 that cracked me up
too good dear
Awesome & funny OS
So welcome back dear 😃 missed u
Exams khatam ho gaye ya abhi hai 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Loved it a lot,Mishtu dearie...
It was fabulous and equally funny...
Will miss this story a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome
really pretty
the last line was cherry on cake

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