ariya ff:mohabbat ki dastak❤️!!!updated ch-12 pg-25 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Nice update. Love it. Thanks for pm. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Hy guys',m so sry ki mai update ni kr payi...
I typed the whole update bt dnt knw hw it got deleted itself befre posting...😭m so sry frnds as ill nt b able to give u post till 26 feb cs i hv to attnd a wedding...pls dnt mind n m agn sry bt try to update in btw...hope u guys wil undrstnd
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
PART-5
"Zindagi me akele rehte rehte hume tanhai ki adat ho jati h magar kabhi zindagi me koi ata h jo hume apna banakr humari zindagibhar i tanhayi ko dur kr deta h!"

After a wonderful shopping session n dinner,they come back to thr home.thy bid gud nyt to each other n went to their rums.
as riya enters hr rum she feels d frgnance of roses wic she lovesn then notices the bunch of red roses on her table n moves twrds it.
she picks it up n smells it,she feels so gud..bt thn she thinks tht who had placed it in hr rum?bhai...ni,wh to mere hi sath the!fir kisne rkha?
n thn she notices the slip tht arjun had placed,aftr reading it there is a big smile on her face:)bt once again she is cnfused tht d one who had placed it>just wen rathore enters hr rum n found hr hlding d flowers n asks-ri!ye kha se aya?
ri-pta ni bhai,jb mai rum me ayi tb ye table pr rkha hua tha!
sam-kisi ka nam ni likha slip pr?
ri-ni bhai...shayad yeh flowers...wh rkh gye ho?
sam-ri!tumhe lgta h rawte aisa krega?aisa sochna bhi mat..mai bht ache se jnta hu use...usne ajtk kisi ldki k liye aisa ni kiya!
ri-(wid a sad face)-hmmm..
sam-seeing hr sad says-ri!u knw him na,fir aisa socha hi kyu?
ri-kya kru bhai,man ni manta..pr dil yhi khta h ki yh unhone..
sam-ni ri aisa ni ho skta,hum kl sochenge is bare me,abhi bht rat ho gyi h,tum so jao!gud yt.
ri-hmm..gud nyt
at arjun's home-
as he enters his house,a voice comes-kya bat h!!aj ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE is smiling!!!!
arjun-asoo di!!!
asoo-oh ho...dear brother!mai to bs puch rhi thi ki aisa kya hua ki tumhare chehre pe smile aagyi?lgta aj kisi khubsurat se katil ko pkda h!
arjun-di!ye keh rhe ho ap aisa kuch ni h,mai to bs wh..riyu...
asoo-RIYU!!!!!!kya bat h!aj tk jiska nam sirf gusse me lete the aj use hi itne pyar se riyu bula rhe ho!!intresting...vry intresting!
arjun-di aisa kuch ni h jaisa ap soch rhi h..
asoo-wh chod ye bta ki aisa kya kiya usne ki wh riya se riyu bn gyi?😉😉
arjun-di!sachme kuch ni h!apko to bas bahane chaiye mujhe tease krne k liye!
asoo-acha thik h,ap jao n chnge krlo...aj tumhara fav8 dinner banaya h!
arjun-really di!u r gr8:)
asoo-ha ha thik h,n ha choti ko bhi bula lena pta ni kisse itni der se bat kr rhi,ek ghnta ho gya h use phne pr!!!
arjun-ok di!
asoo(in mind)-kuch to bat h arjun,chahe tum kuch bhi kho pr tum mujhse itni asani se jhuth ni bol skte!lgta h sam ko btana pdega)
(astha rawte,arjun's elder sis,she love him a lot n also understnds him d most,n another is choti,arjun ki cute si littl sis)
arjun enters her rum n found her talkng to somne on phne,she is saying-ha ha dnt wry shreya ill bring ur notes tommrw!
n thn pretnding tht she has snsed arjun says-chl ok,meet u tomrw at college.
n turns to find arjun n says-bhai!ap yha?
arjun-ha,di bula rhi h tujhe dinner k liyye>waise kisse bat kr rhi thi itne der se?
choti-wh mai apni frnd shreya se bat kr rhi thi!uske notes the mere pas bas usi bare me!(acha hua bhaiya ko ni pta chla ki mai shreya se ni kisi aur se bat kr rhi thi)
arjun-agli bar jb itna bat krne ka mn ho to use ghr bula lena,thodi bate hum bhi kr lenge!
choti-ok bhai...ab chle?
ar-tu ja,mai atahu.
thy had dere dinner n then muved towrds their rums..
asoo in her rum is taking to sam-sam u knw aj kya hua?
sam-kya hua jaan?😉
asoo-oh ho sam m serious,romance bad me krna phle suno jo mai kh rhi hu!
sam-ha bolo mai sun rha hu...
asoo-aj na arjun smile kr rha tha n tht too unneccesrily,n mrover riya ko riyu kha usne!
sam-what????
asoo-kya hua ab?ab romance ni krna?
sam-sry jan,phle btao na kya hua fir?
asoo-kuch ni bs mere puchne pe kh diya ki aisa kuch ni h!
sam-hmmm..(kuch to gdbad h,ho skta h ki roses usi ni rkhe ho,pr itna chnge ek hi din me kaise?)
they taked fr a long tym.that nyt was sleepless fr both ariya,as ri was thnking abbt roses n arjun was thinking abt ri's reaction!
next morning-
arjun was having breakfast wid his sisters ,thn he says-choti i'll drop u.
choti-ok bhai,bs do min,mai meri buks leke ayi!
n thn d door bell rings n arjun open the door n found a sweet grl,smiling at him.
girl-hi!m shreya.
arjun -oh...ap h wh jisse hmari bhn ghto tk bat krti h!
shreya(in mind-ye kya kh rhe h yh?maine to use ek hafte se bat ni ki h,mai to kl hi wapas ayi hu!zarur yeh usse bat krti hogi n mera nam lga diya!!)wh kya h na ki wh meri bst frnd h..to bs bate apne ap lambi ho jati h!
n frm back comes a voice-shreya!!!!
arjun-choti!ye tjhse milne ayi h!
choi-ha bhai...ab ap jaiye..hm sath me hi chle jaenge!
arjun-its ok,mai tum dono ko drp kr deta hu!
shreya was all flat on him on frist sight!aqb kya kre humare acp saab h hi itne hot n dashing!😳😳
whole journey she was staring at arjuntil thy reach college,after dropping them he heads towrds office.
ETF office-
riya enters n flashes hr dimpled smile n says gud mrn to every one,n notices that arjun hdnt cm yet.she was eager to meet him,n it was evident on her face!
"intezar hi pyar ki pehchan ban jaye to kaisa hoga?asman se phul barsenge,jab ye lamba sa intezar khatm hga!"
tbc..
thnkew guys fr ur commnts n lyks,i had gr8 difficulty in updating this!
still hope u wud lyk this,n some things wic seemed to be cnfusing u wl clear out in next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow..
it was awesome update...
just loved it.
do continue soon.
and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Superb update dr...!!!!!
Riya's assumption was right was Sam made her a bit disappointed...!!!!!
Loved Arjun's bonding with his sisters...!!!!!
Wow Astha n Sam r in relationship...!!!!!
Even Sam looked surprised whn she told him about his changed behaviour...!!!!!
Whom was his choti talking to...????? Is it Shree...??????
Awww Shreya seemed lost in him...!!!!!
Loved it...!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!!!
Continue asap...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
this is not fare...ek to itna awesome update aur who bhi itna chotu sa...

haye...arjun ek din mein change ho gaya hai...mujhe bhi sam ki tarah vishwas nahi ho raha hai...


lekin jab riya arjun ke samane apne secret admirer ki baat karegi to...arjun ka reaction kya hoga

kya wo jal bhoon ke raakh ho jayega...


omg ab ye shreya...kahi kabab mein haddi na ban jaye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
nice update so his younger sister
friend also attract toward him
waiting how he is saying his
feeling toward her update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
KAM SE KAM MERA NAAM TOH UPDATE KAR DETI AUNTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...THAT'S NOT FAIR!!!...TUNE TOH MUJHE CHOTU KI CHOTI HI BANA KAR CHOD DIYA!!!!!
BT WAISE...UPDATE WAS NICE...KEEP UPDATING...YOUR STORY IS DOING GOOD!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
RIYA want 2 believe ,that the roses are send by ARJUN 😳 but she is confused and also her bro is not helping 😆
SAM and ASTHA love each other 😃 omg interesting 😈
this SHREYA is not looks good to me
awesome update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Kya baat h mujhe bhi le aai apni story mein...mera pair bada accha h Sam nd astha... Chotu ki choti bhi badi mast h...jab chotu ko pata chalega ki uski gf acp asr ki bhen h to bechare ka kya hoga:D
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Ek baat aur naam sahi kar asoo nai aasu h nd beta track par aajao ye ariya story h na ki areya story:)
at last story was super duper
update soon...love u:)
Edited by sheenshreesen - 11 years ago

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