ariya ff:mohabbat ki dastak❤️!!!updated ch-12 pg-25 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Very nice and emotional part...the best thing I like abt ue stry is riya n rathore's chemistry...u r dng vry good...arjun comforting riya...nice...but wnt to knw if arjun is Frank wid riya...didn't understand y he called her 'ri'...but the story is dng good...lekin agli bar humari phool jaisi riya ko mat rulana...Woh hasri hui acchi lagti hai...keep it up!...luv u!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: riyaarjunrawte

Very nice and emotional part...the best thing I like abt ue stry is riya n rathore's chemistry...u r dng vry good...arjun comforting riya...nice...but wnt to knw if arjun is Frank wid riya...didn't understand y he called her 'ri'...but the story is dng good...lekin agli bar humari phool jaisi riya ko mat rulana...Woh hasri hui acchi lagti hai...keep it up!...luv u!


ohk baby dont worry,apki phul jaisi riya ko ab jyada der tk ni rona pdega,bt cnt promise cos u knw na humara hot cop kitna shaitan h!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
PART-4
"Aksar log sochte h ki agr wh shakhs apki zindagi se chala jaye jisse aap sachi mohabbat krte h,to zindagi adhuri hti h,magar sach to yeh h ki zindagi tb adhuri hoti h jab aap uss insan ko pane se phle hi kho dete h!"
In conference room-
all were worried about riya n suddenly she came inside n posed a fake smile saying i'm ok,but truth was something else n only rathore knew it!
as the case was over and they dont have anything to do so he called it a day.and evryone bid bye to their baby doll i mean aur ri...n left!
after that rathore and ri too left the office n now arjun was alone in the office...
in suv-
rathore was driving while riya was sitting silently,this state of her was usual frm past few days as valentine day is arriving n evryone else around them is busy in arranging surprises fr their luved ones!
rathore,in his mind-ye kya ho gya h meri ri ko?ye to kbhi chup ni rhti fir aj kyo itni chup h?ye kya kr diya arjun tune?roshni k bad ek wohi thi jo mujhe samjhti thi,jo mujhse baat krti thi to make me happy magar aj tere pyar ne mujhse meri behan ki wh muskaan bhi cheen li!
he decided to cheer up her mood,as it was evening so he decided to take her to the mall,so he tuk a turn instead of gng strght bt riya didnt noticed it...he stopped the suv in front of the mall n asked riya to get down of suv wen she noticed tht thy wre outside the mall.
riya-ye kya bhai?hum mall kyu aye h?hum ghar ja rhe the na?
rathore-to finally tumne notice kr liya ki we are at mall!
ri-woh bhai...
rathore-leave it!waise bhi hume roj roj itni jldi off ni milta,to socha ki fr a chnge yha ate h n shopping bhi krlete h thodi si,kitne din hogye ri..but tu shopping pe ni gyi!!!!!
ri(understud tht he was trying to cheer up her mud n decided to stay happy wid his brother)-ha bhai...sahi kaha apne!kitne din ho gye magar MAINE SHOPPING NI KI!!!!
rathore-felt little cntnted aftr seeing hr smile-to chale ?
ri-ha bhai jaldi chalo ab aur wa8 ni hta...aj to mai jee bhrke shopping krungi!😆
in etf office-
arjun was alone in his cabine n ws thinking about wat riya said some moments ago-kyu log aksar us insan ko hurt krte h jo unse bahut pyar krta h???
arjun-m sry ri!i knw maine tumhe bht hurt kiya h,i hv made u cry so many tyms,n also i nvr talked to u calmly bt tht was jst to keep u away frm me
bt nw i hv understud my feelings,now my past memories didnt haunt me.thanks to u roshni😊
roshni-oh ho arjun!!mujhe thnks badme bolna pr agr tumne use jaldi propose ni kiya na to...
arjun-to kya???
roshni-sam uske liye koi aur ldka dhundh lega n fir tum jindagi bhar riya k baccho k mama bn k rhna!!!😆
arjun-ROSHNI!!!(he said wid a surprised reaction)
soon he realised that roshni wasn't there it was his imagination,bt it was sweet!
arjun-chal arjun ab sab kuch jaldi jaldi arrange kr,wrna valentine day nikal jaega n riya ko koi aur le jaega,fir roshni ne jo kha na wh sach ho jaega!!!!!
do u guys wanna know ki wat changed arjun so much?????
janti hu sab ke man me yhi sawal h to chlo aj bta hi dete h ki aisa kya hua ki humare arjun sahab mogambo se majnu ban gye!!
flashback-
remember wen riya burst out crying n arjun was witnessing all this frm his cabine,he was very sad n feeling bad for her n sat on his chair,he jst closed his eyes and rested his head on the head rest just wen he heard a voice-arjun!
the voice was filled wid love n it was roshni who was calling him.he opened his eyes n said-roshni!!!tum yaha????
roshni-jab mera arjun itna pareshan ho,tab mai kaise ni ati??
arjun-mai kuch samjha ni.
roshni-oh ho mr.samjhe ya samjhau!!hr kisi ko samjhate rhte ho aur meri itni si bat ni samjhte??
arjun-tum kya khna chahti ho roshni?
roshni-mai bas itna khne ayi hu arjun ki pls apne dil ki awaz suno!dont deny wat ur heart is saying!
arjun-pr mera dil to kbka dhadkna band kr chuka h!
roshni-jnti hu,ye dhadkane us din hi ruk gyi thi jb mai chli gyi thi!magr tum jnte ho kya?tumhare dil ne firse dhadakna shuru kr diya h!
arjun luked at her wid surprise!!
roshni-ha arjun,yehi sach h,koi h jisne tumhare dil ko firse dhadkne pr majbur kr diya,wh jo tumhare dil ke itne kareeb aa gya,magr fir bhi tum usse bhag rhe ho!kyu??
arjun-cs i luve u roshni!!
roshni-i knw tht,bt nw u luv riya!!!!!
arjun-ye kya keh rhi ho roshni??aisa kaise ho skta h?i cant betray u like this!
roshni-who said tht u r betraying me??did i said that?no...cos u r not arjun.u r just luving sumone else,who is trying to make u smile,who is trying to make ur lyf beautiful!n trust me arjun,accepting her wil make u live ur lyf again!
arjun-magr,tumhare siva kisi aur k bare me mai aisa kaise soch skta hu?
roshni-to tum kya chahte ho,?ki mai is guilt k sath rhu ki mai tumhe chod gyi?meri wajah se aj tum akele ho?
arjun-no roshni,it was death wic came bw us!
roshni-exactly,i cant see u living a lyf equal to death!accept tht u luv riya ,n arjun use apni jindagi me lao,m sure she will make u lively again!pls meri bat ko man lo...
arjun-bt rosh!
roshni-think about it!n ha meri khushi tumhare aur riya k sath me hi h!mai ja rhi hu arjun n apni jagah tumhari jindagi aur tumhare dil me riya ko deke !
arjun-rosh ruko!
roshni-think abt it!n jb tum decision le loge ill cm back!
saying so she disappeared!
arjun thought a lot abt wat she said,n finally he admitted that he is in love wid riya!!!
fb ends
after this,he went out...
rathore's house in riya's rum-
the window was open narjun eneterd hr rum frm window,rathore n riya hdnt cm back.
the moment he switch on the lights of hr rum,the sight he saw shocked him,on the wall of hr rum there were lrge images of arjun with his every expression!arjun was surprised tht wen riya clicked those photos bt kuch bhi kho,riya thodi na kisi se kam h!
n in centre there was a huge photo of him n riya,smiling!it was wen once they went on undercovr mission n thy acted as a newly wed couple.then he luked at the other things,evrything was perfect!as riya is!
he then placed the bouquet of red roses on her table wid a note-ri,this is for u!keep smiling,ur smile makes my heart skip beats😳..
jab tum ni the zindagi adhuri thi,zindagi ko jeena ek majburi thi,tumhare ane se manzilo ko pehchan mil gyi,zindagi me ek kami thi,aur ab wh bhi puri ho gyi!!
(this was a beautiful poetry tht he wrote fr ri!

"pyar insan se na jane kya kya karata h,kisi ko shayar to kisi ko dewana bana deta h!"

tbc...
sry guys fr the late update!
kya kru preboards the!thnkew so much fr ur lovely cmmnts n lyks,thy r valuable fr me!
hope u wud lyk this part tooo...
waiting fr ur reviews😊

Edited by sarthikarathore - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Wow..
Its mind blowing update dear.
Just loved it.
Loved arni talk.
Samiya segment was mind blowing.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Wonderful update dr...!!!!!
Awww Riya was depressed...!!!!
Wow Sam took her to the mall to cheered her up...!!!!!
FB was beautiful...!!!!! Loved how Arjun realized his love for Riya...!!!!!
OMG Arjun enter her room through window...!!!!!
Awww Arjun surprised to see his pics in Riya's room...!!!!!
The poetic lines were lovely...!!!!!
Loved it a lot...!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!!!
Continue asap...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
AWESOME UPDATE 👏
Waiting 4 RIYA'S REACTION
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice update finally he relies
his feeling toward her update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Oh wow!!!...riya's room full of arjun's photos!!
N Ye kya...arjun ko khidki hi milibthi ghar me ghusne ke liye!
Flashback was superb!...finally roshni convinced arjun!
Lagta h iss baar ka valentines day bahut special hone wala h!
Keep it up!
Love you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
finally arjun admit that he luv ri.. Flashback was awsome.. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
love the chemistry..cont soon means soon sys

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