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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates...
Poor Shree-Chotu...😆😆😆
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Ab toh Neha-RD gaye kaam se...😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Happy HOLI..
it was awesome dr.
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Posted: 11 years ago
uff..
neha ne wah..kya tarike se color lagaya he arjun ko..
sam save arjun's life..
oh..rd make drink samjun sharabat..
I think that sharabat is nothing but bhang..
samjun ki ekdam se dosti ho gayi..
aur sath me game bhi khela..
aur holi bhi kheli..dance bhi kiya..
etf team toh shocked reh gayi..
uff..ab samjun hosh me aa gaye..
ab toh rd aur neha ki khair nahi..
precap is interesting..
hope samjun ki dosti aisi hi bani rahe..
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Read n replied everyone..

@ zubiya92 - thankx dear

@ pink1 - thankx dear

@ GOLD.A - thankx di

@ misakiscarlet - cliffhanger..sorry for it..wait for more ariya scenes..

@ Aks13 - thankx dear

@ shreyashi19mld - thankx dear

@ rinku95 - thankx dear

@ Radhikerani - thankx dear

@ rimi_invisible - sachmuch khel rahe the..but as they were drunk..they didn't recognise their character..thankx di

@ Shamsad1607 - naam ka asar to padega na di..me neha wo neha..not much different ..thankx di

@ Snehajain - nahi jayenge dear..thankx dear

@ halima_zaka - thankx dear

@ greensakti - thankx dear

@ ariyabestfan - thankx dear..sam jun ki friendship aise hi nahi bani reh sakti abhi..baad me hoga..wait for it




Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 5 c

Jun - jhooth mat bolna..

Rd - par drinks ka arrangement maine kiya tha..aur wo..

Jun - aur wo kya rahul?

Rd - wo bhaang mere dost lekar aaye the..Neha ko iske baare me kuch nahi pata tha..sorry bhai..par mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mere dost aisa kuch karne waale he

Jun - [he does not understand what to say..he looks at watch..it was 9:15 so he goes to his room to get ready to go to office]

Sam also goes to his house..he takes driver with him

After they both go..

Neha - dada.. me aata taiyaar hun yete..[Bhai..me abhi ready hokar aati hu.. ]

She goes to dressen up..

~

In Jun's room..

Jun goes to freshen up..Rahul comes there n puts a chit under the glass of water..he'd written sorry on it..

Jun sees it n throws it away..n goes to office..

~

ETF headquarters..

Conference room..

Neha reached there first..then Chotu,Shree,Riyaya,Aisha n Liza also came

Aisha - Neha! Tum yahan? Abhi?

Neha - batate he ms.kapoor..thodi der sabr kijiye..

Sam comes to the office n goes into conference room n sees Neha there..

Sam - tum yahan?

Neha hands over an envelope to him..he opens n reads it n meanwhile Jun has also arRiyaved in office..Sam hands over first letter to him n looks at the other one n crumples n throws it in dustbin..

Neha gives a winning smile when that letter drops in dustbin

Jun finishes reading that letter..holds Neha's hand n takes her to his office..neha follows silently..

~

In Jun's cabin..

Jun - ye kya he? Tum ETF join kar rahi ho? Mujhe tumne ye sab bataana zaroori bhi nahi samjha?aur tumne ghar pe sabko bataaya he iss baare me?bataao..

Neha - wo..haan..nahi..

Jun - haan aur nahi? saaf-saaf bataao..

Neha - ghar pe bataaya he par sabko nahi..sirf papa..bhabhi[shyna]..aur dada ko kal bataaya..baaki kisi ko nahi pata..

Jun - thik he..par ye sab mujhe kyu nahi bataaya?

Neha - surprize jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti he ya nahi??

Jun -[gives u r impossible look] ab chalo..

They both go to the conference room

~

In conference room..

Sam - I'll introduce u to our new ETF member Neha Rawte.

All r shocked except Jun..

Sam - n one more member will join us soon..

Karan - I've joined!

Sam n Jun n Neha r shocked to see the person

Sam - chote! Tu?

Karan - yes! [he hugs Sam then..looks at others]me Karan Damsingh Rathod!new Forensic expert of ETF.[hands over his joining letter to Sam]

Sam reads the letter n then puts it on the table..

Sam - Karan..me tumhe meri team se milwaata hu..

Ye he second-in-command of ETF

Jun sits on his regular place..

Sam - ye he Aisha,ye Riya,ye Shree,ye Chotu,ye Liza..forensic expert

Karan -[pointing towards Neha] ye koun he..me ise nahi jaanta

Neha - nahi jaante?? sachme nahi jaante ??

Karan - of course nahi jaanta..waise bhi yahan par insaan kaam karte he..jungli billiya nahi

Neha - sahi kaha..isliye yahan chuho ki bhi zarurat nahi he

Karan - o teri..ye to me bhul hi gaya meow..

Neha - usme hum kuch nahi kar sakte rats..

Sam - ok..enough of ur talks..kuch der apne naye colleagues se baate karo [to Aisha] tum in dono ko office dikha dena..

Sam n Jun go to their cabins..after they go..

Aisha - neha..karan..welcome to ETF..

Neha - thankx..aap logo ko party me koi pareshani to nahi huyi na?

Riya - nahi..bilkool bhi nahi..we enjoyed it a lot..

Sam n Jun enter the conference room again..

Sam - team..we've a new case..ek ladki ki missing report aayi he..wo pichle ek din se gayab he..so lets go..

~

Sam,jun,aisha,Riya,Shree,chotu n Neha go to the house of the missing girl..

They rang the doorbell n a man of 50's opens the door

Sam - ACP sameer ETF se..

Man - ji..aaiye..me abhishek goel..mene hi aaapko phone kiya tha

They go inside the house..it was a big house..mr. goel is a businessman

A woman of nearly 48 is sitting on sofa n crying..Aisha goes to her n consoles her

Jun,Riya,Shree,chotu,Neha search the house n sam n aisha talk to the parents

Aisha - aap ki beti ko aapne akhri baar kab dekha tha?

Mrs. Goel - kal shaam ko

Aisha - kuch baat huyi thi?

Mrs. Goel - nahi..wo bilkool normal thi

Aisha - koi jhagda..ya kuch aur?

Mrs. Goel - nahi..aisa kuch bhi nahi hua

~

Riya n Neha r searching the girl's bedroom

Neha opens the wardrobe..the lockers were empty..no valueables were found

Riya searches the rest of the room

~

Sam - aapki koi business rivalry?

Mr. Goel - nahi

Sam - kisi par koi shaq?

Mr. Goel - nahi..

Sam - thik he..hum aapki beti ko jald se jald dhund lenge..

Neha - aap apni beti ke kamre me akhri baar kab gayi thi?

Mrs. Goel - kal shaam ko jab hum bahar se ghar wapas aaye tab use dekhne gayi thi par wo wahan par nahi thi

Neha - to aapne ye nahi dekha?[she shows a letter]

Mrs. Goel - [takes it n reads it n starts crying again]

Neha - aap rona band kijiye..aapki beti ghar chorkar gayi he..

Mr. Goel - par meri beti kahan he?

Neha - wo to aap jaane aur aapki beti..

Sam - dekhiye mr. Goel..aapki beti baalig he to wo apne faisle khud kar sakti he..to is report ka to koi matlab hi nahi he..the case is over..

They leave from there

~

In SUV

Sam's phone rings..he picks the phone n then drives towards a beach

Sam - we've got a new case..ek laash mili he..

~

Beach..

A girl's body is lying near a tree..the girl was of 20s..from a rich family..her clothes told it..a single neat stroke of knife from right of neck to abdomen..

Neha - [looks at the girl]ye to Abha he..Mr. n Mrs. Goel ki beti..[examines the wound]iski death iss nas ke kat jaane ke karan huyi he..time of death autopsy ke baad pata chalega..ise lab bhej dijiye

Sam - me mr. goel ko phone karke ye bata deta hu

~

ETF conference room..

They r briefing the case

Girl's name - Aabha Goel

Daughter of rich businessman Mr n Mrs Goel

Sam - ek ladki kal shaam ko ghar chorkar bhaag jati he..agle din uski laash milti he..aur koi samaan nahi he..murder ka motive robbery ho sakta he

Neha - question! Ye ladki ghar chorkar kyu aur kiske saath ya kiske liye bhaagi?

Sam - sri! Iske call details check karo

Sri - yes sir..

He checks the call details

Sri - sir..bahot saare calls alag-alag landlines se aaye he...shayad kisi pco se

Sam - aur kuch?

Sri - nahi..

Sam - hume Aabha ke dosto se milna chahiye..kuch to mil jayega

~

They go to meet her friends but do not find anything suspicious

All said that she was very silent..introvert n did not talk much

~

ETF conference room..

It was evening now but they did not get any link

Jun - kuch to chut raha he..par kya?

Neha - do cheeze..ek bhaagne ka motive aur dusra wo calls..

She goes to the fact board n is thinking

Karan - Meow..aake baith jaa..wo tera kaam nahi he

Before Neha replies her phone rang..

Neha - [on call]no dear..aaj..not possible..kal pakka..ok dear[cuts the call]

Karan goes behind her n tries to listen the call

Krn -[wispers] koi boyfriend he??

Neha -[exclaims] got it!

All - kya?

Neha - Boyfriend! Aabha ka koi boyfriend to hoga..shayad uske liye hi wo ghar chorkar bhaagi ho..

Sam - par wo koun ho sakta he?

Neha - aabha ke bank details check kijiye..

Sri checks her bank account details

He finds that all her money is transferred into one account

Sri - sir..aabha ke saare paise kisi Naksh ke account me transfer kiye gaye he..

Neha - we need to catch this guy!

Sri - me abhi bank se uske ghar ka pata lagata hu..

He gets the address

~

They reach the house but it was locked..

Sam - DAMNIT! Wo haath se nikal gaya

Neha - par kuch chorkar to gaya hi hoga

Jun - Chotu! daar todun taak [break the door]

Chotu breaks the door n they all go inside n search the house..

They find a ticket of bus to chennai..the bus was leaving within 30 minutes n the bus-stop was 40 minutes far..

Sam - team..lets go..

Neha - let me drive..[before sam replies she takes the keys n sits on the drivers seat]

She drives so fast that they reach the bus stop within 20 minutes

They search for Naksh n find him..but he manages to run..

A chase n finally that boy is caught..

~

ETF interrogation room..

Sam - batao ki us ladki ko kyu maara?

He doesn't reply..gets a few slaps from sam-jun

Naksh -b..batata hu..mujhe mat maariye..

Sam - bata..

Naksh - paiso ke liye

Neha - Paise ka lalach insaan ki akal mein daraare daal deta hai...aur woh tumhari tarah, apni kismat khud jala bethta hai

Jun - Jurm ke raaste kitne bhi makhmali kyun na hoon...khatam toh jail mein hi hote hai

Naksh - sorry..mujhe maaf kar dijiye

Sam - Maafi galatiyo ki hoti hai...gunaaho ki nahi[looks at jun angrily]

Jun - chotu..yala gheun jaa [take him away]

~

It was 8:00 already

Sam - team..lets call it the day off..kal milte he..

All leave except Sam,Jun,Neha n Karan

Sam - good job Neha..

Neha - thankx bhaisa..

Sam - par iska matlab ye nahi ki mene tumhe subah jo kiya uske liye maaf kar diya..

Neha - wo bhaang to dada ke dost laaye the..hume kuch bhi nahi pata tha..waise bhi aapne hi to kaha tha ki maafi galatiyo ki hoti he..to ise bhi ek galati jo humne nahi ki wo samajh kar maaf kar dijiye na..[makes a puppy face]

Sam - thik he..maaf kiya..par agli baar aisa

Neha - kuch bhi nahi hoga..bilkool bhi nahi..kabhi nahi hoga..[wispers into his ear]bhaiya ko bhi maniye na plz..

Sam - ye nahi hoga..

Neha - plz..plz..

Krn - meow..tujhe nahi ka matlab nahi pata kya?

Neha - rats..tum bich me mat pado..

Krn - kyu nahi..wo mere bhai he..me kyu bich me na padu?

Jun gives u r impossible look to neha n karan n walks outside

Neha - tumse behes karne me bhaiya chale gaye..

Neha also follows jun they both go to their home

Sam n krn also go to their home

~

Rawte mansion

Jun,rahul n neha have their dinner..

Jun - tumhe naksh par shaq kaise gaya?

Neha - it was a mere guess..aapka jo chut raha tha wo ye naksh tha..

They chat for sumtime n then go to sleep

~ ~ ~

That's it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soo
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice Dear
Awesome update
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dr...!!!
Wow neha joined ETF...that's good...!!!!
Loved Karan n Neha nok-jhoks...!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Neha-Karan join ETF...Loved their nok-jhoks...😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice upodate dear...neha solved the case...good...

continue soon dear..thanks for pm😊

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