T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Mind blowing update...

Roshni's fear and her thoughts and actions are well justified...

her decision to help Shal and relieve him of Arjun is right but I hope nothing happens to her or Shaleen in the process

So Zaid and Naina are back in action and this time, perhaps they are grabbing every link sharply...

somehow I feel Shaina is vulnerable or rather a weak link...

loved Shaleen-Roshni convo..

cont soon

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

wow di..

it was awesome and mind blowing update.

just loved it.

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm.

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Awesome.
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

beautiful update

feeling really bad for Sha... his loneliness... him missing Roshni...
Zaid once again suspecting him
very nice writing Helna
loved it 👍🏼

Edited by shreya09 - 11 years ago

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

By one way or the other, Shaleen keeps coming into the view and ACP Zaid keeps noticing it.Roshni is too worried, she fears of losing Sha and also fears of Arjun.
The part of Sha comforting Roshni was so beautiful..
That was a brilliant update.
Loved it:)

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Awwssmmm part
loved It
Supperbbb...
Amazing as always...
loved Sha-Roshni confortation...
loved the way Sha was comforting Roshni... Beautiful...
loved Roshni's dicesion to get back her Sha...
Wonderful...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Many questions have been answered...

Zaid's sixth sense is telling him something...where Roshni just connected the dots and found the answer...brilliant yaar!!

So Rosh decided to stand for sha...& she has a plan too...I really loved the emo portion between Sha-Rosh. Sha did his bit beautifully to console his friend... upps...love.That gesture gave Rosh the strength to fight Arjun. that was a big twist in this story...

It seems Zaid and Naina also approaching towards Arjun...

I'm eagerly waiting to see how Rosh's plan work against Arjun...that too without alarming him...

Keep writing & thanks for PM.

p.s. I'm not sure about OCD, just tried to figure out what happening...but I wouldn't mind to start over this one, it's one of my fav. stories.

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prachi

@prachi90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Awsm update dean
Nooo...ye zaid nd naina shaaa tk nhi pahunche chiye...wrna evrythng vll end...hope u r nt gng to do dat dear 😭
shaaa ne honestly zaid k ques.k ans kfdiye...use to ye bhi nhi pta k uski lyf mein kya tufan ane wala h ya kya chal rh .h
Nd Arjun is also nt a criminal nor an evil..jisse arrest kia jaye
he is dng gd wrk in Way.