T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

excellent part!!
Rosh' fears was well depicted
and her convo with Sha was nice
and she well realizes that her Sha is caring
unlike the Sha/Arjun whom she witnessed last night
Karan and Shaina's sequences were nice
the juvenile home's sequence and Sha's sufferings
out there were really painful😭
n his silence n bearing the things gave birth to Arjun
who was out to help and make Shan happy
but Arjun failed and killed Vasant😲
Arjun seems to be getting dangerous with time
for both Sha and Roshni
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

mind blowing update di.

just loved it.

arjun pov about shaa was scary.

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm.

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

The update is written so nicely..😊

Roshni is now feared of sha and she is trying to stay away from him for some time.

she knows about arjun now..ab kya wo bhi danger mein hogi?

If sha is taking sleeping pills then how can arjun be there?

zaid will start his search again...and this time i guess he will come to know about something that lead him to sha with some proof...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Oh God!
this is getting sooo interesting...nd dangerous too... 😲
I am worried for Sha and Roshni...and even for Zaid now...

Vasant had let Sha down...nd arjun finished him off...nd now Zaid has unknowingly failed him, wat will Arjun do to him...
I thought Arjun ws an angel in disguise...bt its the other way round here...he is evil! very evil! he jst wants to finish off people who comes in his way...yeah...sometimes he is right bt sometimes he is nthng bt a evil dark soul...uuufff he is so confusing...may b this is wat we call an Alter Personality...

continue soon heli...

love
Aisha

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Shaleen cares a lot about Roshni, it was evident on his panicked voice but Roshni is hell scared of him now.
The foreigner was killed too but Jha died and that made everybody angry and the protest is on.Zaid and Naina are having a hard time handling everything but the one who's affected the most is Arjun, they failed him and he's really angry.Everybody around have failed him.Shaleen was weak and humilated by everybody so Arjun appeared to take revenge on his behalf. Those SMS to Shaleen, I had guessed it before but Arjun is getting more and more dangerous.
Great update.
Loved it..<3
Looking forward to more..
Continue Soon.
Also thanks for the PM.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Arjun killed Vasant? Oh God, Arjun is really ruthless when it comes to wrong doers...

His thoughts of punishing Zaid scares me...and also ending ROshni and Sha if there is a slip...

The other personality in SHa is really cold blooded and perhaps a result of the injustice meted out to him and his parents in his childhood...

Intriguing and mind blowing update

cont soon!

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome update...

Very interesting...

Many things got cleared...

Arjun' POV for Sha was quite scary...

I m scared for Roshni...😭😭😭

How she vll handle this??

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Je t'aime mon amie!!🤗

I just loved it...& it's the 3rd time I'm reading it...trust me i'm enchanted again.

Roshni's first reaction on sha's phone call was superb!!...she was trying to save herself & Sha from Arjun, by not seeing Sha...but for how long??

Jha's murder...Sha's headache & his sudden mood swing...for a second I thought Arjun come out any moment.It was way too brilliant👏 (I hope you didn't see any real SPD patient to write this)😊

And finally Arjun...you gave us a clear idea about Arjun's remarks about Sha. Finally we came to know how Sha created his own dark superhero inside him. The introvert, innocent and frightened boy went through so much that all his incapabilities took a form...and it's too much real, much alive..& It's Arjun.👏 for this POV of Arjun...⭐️❤️🤗

I was right about that boy!! It's him!!😃

Jha's murdr took a toll over Zaid...& he is tensed.. on the other hand Karan also doing his part well.

Now, Arjun took a decision about Zaid, Sha & Rosh...I'm eagrly waiting for his action..

Should i say it aloud?!! I think i don't...😆 (this comment is preety long..)

Keep writing.

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Ok I get it,this MPD is with sha since long but my dear I m still not convinced that Sam &Masa is not aware of this split personality,atleast Masa might have a hint of this I feel coz If I m not wrong she is the one in touch with Raghu sir who we know is aware of this split personality in Sha &I m confident about this😎(popat mat karna mera😆)

Trait mingling:If Arjun's traits overpowers Shaleen's then the same goes vice versa&I get a feel that this overpowering of traits will be a hurdle Ofcourse in gud sense that will save Roshni.Lets wait &see if my assumptions are correct.Arjun killing vasant was ofcourse a shocker but I guess I should not come to conclusion before the complete picture is out&moreover there is more to wat it seems to eyes that transpired back in the juvenile room.Ofcourse Arjun is a dangerous soul but then this is also a fact that he can't harm innocent souls,in this case it's zaid &Roshni.

P.S:You enjoy when I pull my hair in confusion right?