Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Hellooo hellooo look whose here...you still remember me nah? haha 😆😆
Sooo sorry to be gone for sooo long but am finally back to catch up with alll updates slowly 😃😃
First of all a big thank you for sending me the pm's though i was completely missing,loove you for that and a biiig biiig hugs to you 🤗🤗

Chapter 11 :

Am soo glad ayesha and sameer are back,firstly because sakshi will get some support and secondly i soo wanted to see the whole ETF team together some way or the other 😃😃

Ayesha and Arjun,two great mind together trying to solve something...ah i just likee that...all the thinking's,suspicions,their take on that particular matter and then...action*soon to be * 😎

"she still felt her heart thud nervously each time he delivered his trademark samjhe ya samjhaun' with a menacing glare. " hehe we all do but kuch kuch aur bhi hota hain 😉 😉

I was trying to visualize this dichuum dichuum scene in my head and and arjun look super hot being angry and beating Trivedi hehe 😳😳 and and yes trivedi deserves it all..sooo goo goo arjun beat him and make him spills out the truth

Looove looove the small Flashback 😛😛

Ayesha and sakshi friendship and bonding rocks 😃😃

Chapter 12:

"The truth doesn't always set one free, perhaps they were happy being in the situation they were in. Because for the first time in many years, silence was offering them a strange sort of sweet solace, and not jabs and pricks at their insides.. A friend, a companion or a stranger, whatever they meant to each other, didn't matter." this small paragraph says sooo much about life and how can someone literally change your life and become such an important part of it without you realizing it 😛😛

Arjun joking around with sakshi...this is something i was waiting for...one of my wishes is fulfilled...merciii avni 😳😳

The part where sakshi cried and told arjun about her father was sooo emotional indeed !!😭😭

Ohhh i want to make snowman too...why does it not snow here *sad sad*

Looove this part very berry much,both enjoying themselves 😃😃

The song is cheery on top and totally suits this particular situation 😛😛

Thats what we call destiny i guess,the golden bangles and arjun both at her side 😳😳

Awesooome update my dear...l0oove each and every bits of it...thank youu sooo much and i shall be back soon with other chapters 🤗🤗

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

hello avani di🤗

while reading the scene where arjun is in front of waterfall😳☺️ and when he let out his emotions the scene was so pure n heartbreaking both at the same time

after reading his past i don't if a mere word would be enough. 🥺

arjun's dad😡 and no doubt arjun's mom is a real inspiration👏👏👏 what she did to make arjun what he is * proud* she deserves an standing ovation😃

but this man always make me respect him more n more😃❤️

but his past was heartbreaking i literally stopped my tears😳 i forgot its a fiction

arjun after going through has emerged as a winner but he needs a companion 😊 and sakshi and he needs each other.

he blame himself till now but yes sakshi was there to give him assurance tat his mother can't hold grudge against him❤️

his expression was sooo...❤️

waiting for more to unfold update soon di love u❤️🤗

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Heylooo heylooo

Pata hain i wanna thank you for taking time and updating aaram seh...i know this sounds ajeeb hehe but see latecomers like me benefits from it then nah,dont have too many chapters to catch up with*kidding* 😆😆

Chapter 13:

Awww Acp Arjun embarrassed

Drinking cappuccino,eating biscuits and reading avni story in the middle of the night is the bestest combo trust me 😳😳 sorry got carried away 😳😳

Thanks to those bratty kids we got soome cute romantic part of arakshi hehe 😳😳

I love the way how you wrote about how both felt about each other,about their new feeling and also how their past was not letting them to take a step forward 😛😛

Chapter 14:

I sooo want to go to Mela tooo...seems soo much fun 😃😃

Someone is jealous haha 😆😆 red really suits arjun though haaye

Avni you're surely the twist bringing queen huh...seriously was not waiting for this...you were bang on,awesooome twist,amazingly written update...words are not enough to describe how beautifully you writee indeed ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Looove looove the update...thank you sooo sooo much 🤗🤗

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Hellooo 😃😃

Chapter 15:

What a cute relationship between..its actually a little like all of us friendship outta here,though we never met our friends made on IF still we are sooo close to them and becomes besties😃😃

Am also very intrigued about where arjun was...but am sure there are some awesome twist behind it 😛😛

Oh oh acp arjun is very very gussa...am getting more curious as i continue reading 😛😛

There's you and then there is rituu...you both always makes me fall in love with the places you described in your stories...i could imagine the waterfall as there are many heree hehe..but still fantastic description of the place 👏👏

Am actually lost of words,because you know how to makes us feels whats the characters are feeling in the story through the right words and through your writing...and this is not an easy task for sure...hats off avni

Chapter 16:

Yoohooo i could catch up with the last one you updated too...ah i know i have to catch up with other stories too...i guess it'll be in 2015 now hihi but am very much eager to read them 😳😳

Your lil note in the beginning...i totally understand,in the healthcare sector there is no fix time at all and also lots of work to do...i really appreciate all the effort you put in to update your stories despite being soo busy,biiig biiig hugs to you,for all the hardwork you put in and also replying to everyone individually 🤗

I loove looove the banner,the effects,the pics and the edit all beautifully done 👏👏

Arjun and his mom has gone through sooo much...if only his dad was not full of soo much ego,hatred and i dunno...he made their life like hell but still arjun mom fought for her son and parents...thats indeed very courageous 👏👏

The flashback and the part that follows made me soo emotional,literally crying...arjun has soo much pain in him and guilt as well 😭😭

Veryyy veryyy emotional updateee it is but i just looove it,you did full justice to it avniii ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Veryyy veryyy eager to read what happen next now 😃😃

Thank you sooo sooo much 🤗🤗

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Emm...😳😳😳

I am ashamed of myself needless to say.

So far caught up on 11 and 12, will unres after I read rest, please be patient with me.😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Avniii🤗

Guess who's back!! God, typing really feels weird after so long! I don't know how I used to type haha.. anywaay back to what I am here for!

I am a day late.. and you know why😛 I wanted to do this for a long long time.. but only just finished it. Of course, it's the best time to post this since it happens to beee...

*shakes head at impatient sautan*😆

The birthdaaay of ASD my loveee❤️

Ok, it was yesterday. But anywaaay, I made something silly saaa.. since I wanted to 😳(I think you can guess where the inspiration comes from... 😉)

And here it is!

(something went wronggg in the colouring)

So... here's to treasure the beautiful moments of this fic.. I know I cannot capture everything... but I have put together some of my favourite lines (trust me, there's a huuuge list and these are the few I could fit). Ok, typing feels reaaally weird.

Here it isss!! Last year, yesterday u started this beautiful story which somehow became really close to my heart... ok, I love alll your stories (whatever I have read😳) but this one happens to be special for various reasons.

From the first meet in the rain... to their silent gazes, the mountains, their understanding for each other, and then ... their friendship slowly blossoming into love... *Banjaara moment* (see I was looking for a snowman pic but somehow it was spoiling this lol.. so I made do with the ice crystals... which reminds me... London isn't even that cold this year). OH and not to mention the bangles wala part.. I know I am missing loaaads more. And this was just Arakshi. If I start I will keep going on and on and on... and yeah not to mention I am waiting for Waterfall part 2.. but take ur time *ahem*

And that song u gave me, I have been dreaming on that since the day u sent it🤪 so u better write it fast😛

Greaat now Banjaara is playing in my mind! (and guess in who's voice🤪) We are the hopeless I tell you😆

Anywaay, I shall stop here! Ab jaake mera waterfall wala scene complete karo!😛

Oh and waiting for the mystery to unfold... and more beautiful moments.

Need I say your words have magic? No, you already know it.😆

Love you for this beautiful story ❤️

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

omg!!! i didnt realise till now tgat i forgot to coment on the most important part of ASD ... i think work load has taken a toll on me .. i know um damn late but um still here to tell you that i drank two glasses of water and cried almost throughout the update ... it was soo emotional... arjun's father was such a cruel and rude man... his mom*woweee* she was such a womderful woman...
the ending was most intresting.. sakshi revealing her true identity. .. waiting to know arjun's reaction... plz diii update fast i cant wait..

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#638

His mother is a great woman.

And Arjun would do anything to have his mother back.

Very beautifully written, especially the mother-son relation, and nothing is more pure than this.

Awesome chapter

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves
Avniii🤗
Guess who's back!! God, typing really feels weird after so long! I don't know how I used to type haha.. anywaay back to what I am here for!
I am a day late.. and you know why😛 I wanted to do this for a long long time.. but only just finished it. Of course, it's the best time to post this since it happens to beee...

*shakes head at impatient sautan*😆

The birthdaaay of ASD my loveee❤️
Ok, it was yesterday. But anywaaay, I made something silly saaa.. since I wanted to 😳(I think you can guess where the inspiration comes from... 😉)
And here it is!
(something went wronggg in the colouring)

So... here's to treasure the beautiful moments of this fic.. I know I cannot capture everything... but I have put together some of my favourite lines (trust me, there's a huuuge list and these are the few I could fit). Ok, typing feels reaaally weird.
Here it isss!! Last year, yesterday u started this beautiful story which somehow became really close to my heart... ok, I love alll your stories (whatever I have read😳) but this one happens to be special for various reasons.
From the first meet in the rain... to their silent gazes, the mountains, their understanding for each other, and then ... their friendship slowly blossoming into love... *Banjaara moment* (see I was looking for a snowman pic but somehow it was spoiling this lol.. so I made do with the ice crystals... which reminds me... London isn't even that cold this year). OH and not to mention the bangles wala part.. I know I am missing loaaads more. And this was just Arakshi. If I start I will keep going on and on and on... and yeah not to mention I am waiting for Waterfall part 2.. but take ur time *ahem*
And that song u gave me, I have been dreaming on that since the day u sent it🤪 so u better write it fast😛
Greaat now Banjaara is playing in my mind! (and guess in who's voice🤪) We are the hopeless I tell you😆

Anywaay, I shall stop here! Ab jaake mera waterfall wala scene complete karo!😛
Oh and waiting for the mystery to unfold... and more beautiful moments.
Need I say your words have magic? No, you already know it.😆

Love you for this beautiful story ❤️

Hailaaa... What would I do without you, sautanwa.. 🤗

Like seriously.. This means a looottt!!

How dare you call it silly.. It's gift, and gifts are always meant to be treasured!!

I love it soo much.. 😳

Oh my!! You girls are really gonna make me cry, now.. Pehle gundi and now u..

It's been a wonderful journey so far, and you, my love have made it even more eventful with your constant motivation and 'distractions'.. 😉

Ab aur kya bolun, thank-you bol nahi sakti..

Toh I'll only say - Ab bhugto! 🤪

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#640

Hola!

My lovely ladies... 🤗

Yes yes.. Main hi hoon.. Aur kaun! And before you pick up that jooti, let me tell you that I'm really very sorry for delaying this!

So, to each one of you who's been waiting for an update on this one, - may you get one flying kissi from your love, tonight.. 😛 (And to the singles, and bacchas - Hotwa hai na.. Kaunsa tax lagta hai.. 😉)

Okay, so before I go ahead and post, I have a few things to say.. (Oyee rukooo.. Bhaago matt!)

Birthday hai yaar! 🥳

Yes.. This baby of mine has completed one year..

Though I'm not really proud of the fact that it took me so long to get here, I am kinda satisfied with what I have done, considering writing soft romances isn't my forte.. (Naah, sach mein, if you don't believe me, you gotta ask my 'Lady in Red' readers.. They'll tell you just how many buckets I've made them cry..) 😆😆

I love the angsty, seksy ones, more.. 😎

Okay, jokes apart..

Soo.. Right from my besharam behnas, who may not be around always, but I do know you guys will always be there for me, in spirit - to the three musketeers, who are a little family of mine now (crazed out and fultu gundis) - to Bharatee, Shree, Nee, Sneha, Swara, Bhavana, Shyamala Aunty and each one of you who has read, followed and showered your love on this particular work of mine, words will never be enough to thank you all.. 😃

Truly.. Honestly.. I cross my heart.. I love you all, for making ASD so special, and loved... 🤗

** Oh! And there's an issue I'd like to address, while I'm at it..

All those PM's and comments, asking me 'why don't I update', I really appreciate all of them.. I truly do, coz I wouldn't be writing if your views didn't matter to me..

But I have a very stressful and responsible job, a family that I need to look after, 2 more stories that need my time, and there are times when I just don't feel like writing..

So, asking me to prove my loyalty to my own works, isn't going to make me write faster, if you understand what I mean..

If you would rather have me post substandard work, that doesn't come straight from my heart and out of my louuve for Arjunwa, then too bad, coz I happen to believe waiting a little longer is worth it, if it means something better..

Okay then, I have a chotu gift for you.. (And a really lengthy one, below) 🤪

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[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3nku96P7jAs
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Direct Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3nku96P7jAs

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago