Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 65

I hope I'm not in the way.. Resss

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Yes yes yess you updated!!

Sautan meriii ❤️ Hayeee finally de hi diya 🤗

I just fetched myself a bottle of water to start reading since *ahem* you warned me 😛

Shuru mein hi ghayal kar diya.. ab aage kya padhungi? No wait! I was only kidding! Like I said, be prepared for a super crazy comment today... BTW! You know the song Neela aasmaan... from Silsila? Imagine HIM singing it. *thud*

*slaps self* I shouldn't be getting distracted when ASD is concerned! Ok, back to the heavenly moonlight

*Lost in their conversation and angry hotwa* ☺️

Shhh I shouldn't be drooling over him when the situation is serious! *slaps herself* (It doesn't help that a waterfall is nearby!)

Ok shushhh.. back to their perfectly written conversation *picks up a stick and looks around for the author*

You seriously should stop complaining! 😛😛

"Her eyes were always so expressive; he had always witnessed warmth, trust and respect for himself in them, but tonight they were challenging him to prove her wrong; to earn the trust that she had placed in a stranger when she hadn't even known him."

THAT is called perfection... nailing the feelings. Or so I think. This isn't my ASD love speaking yeah... but that line was just perfect.

"The shallow cold water beneath his feet splashed around, swirling up and joining the light waves that were swaying around them."

Great now I can not only HEAR the waterfall but I can also see the rippling reflections of the moonlight on the water around me .. even though I'm sitting in my room lit by table lamps 😆😆.

Ok I was totally lost in everything else that followed... her conflicting emotions, the love she had started to feel for him and the anger she felt at him for what had happened in the past was beautifully blended together.. mat maano! But seriously, I do think it was the way I would have imagined it to be BUUUT waaay better. I liked the little moment when she lost her footing by the lake and he saved her from falling. It had to be by the lake didn't it? *shakes head* Nooow you know why I love this fic so much.. no of course this isn't the only reason!

Oh and also... when he asked her to trust him just one more time... *sniff* I got emotional... not to mention the part when she was trying to push herself away from him even though she was in love with him... even though his touch comforted her... even though she wanted to comfort him too for the pain that he had gone through... here I am writing my own little story in the comment! 😛 Acha I don't know what I said.. it was all very muddled. Reason? I was lost ...yeah I even forgot HIM for a minute even though his song was still goonjing around me... no not khamoshiyan.. a Bengali song which went so perfectly with this scene

FIREPLACEEE! I love yaa sautanwaaa ❤️ You kept my wish *sniffs* *reaches for a tissue* *super emotional*

"She watched as his eyes flicked back to the crackling flames, and that dark gaze blazed into her like fire."

That's it. I am dead. *thud*

Seriously what's wrong with me? It's supposed to be a serious scene! No wait, it's hotwa.☺️

"Something dark and malicious lurked behind his otherwise warm eyes, but it didn't scare her away; instead, she was drawn to him like a moth to the flames."

Basss aaj quote hi karti rahungi 🤣

Goddd I got major goosebumps when she asked how he lived with so much guilt... SIGH.

"The trust he had been looking for, was back.." *sniff*

"You have me.."

Mummyyy she makes me cry *sniff* *reaches out into an empty tissue box*

LOOOLLL you actually fulfilled one of GB's wishes... the takkar moment 🤣🤣🤣

Yeah she's gonna kill me too now for saying it 🤣

Sheeeshhh since when did coffee-pouring become so ...*ahem* You have created a new definition for coffee now... Now I shall think of hotwa every time I have a cup 🤣

Ok this is totally random but have u seen the move "The Proposal"? There was a similar scene like the one I'm reading now on the couch hehehe... if you haven't watched the movie, do check it out when u have time.

I swear I breathed in really sharply when I read this line:

"No one had made him realise that a day would come when he would have to stop thinking about his miseries, and hold his hand out for a ray of light that would bring him so much peace, that he would forget the very existence of his darkness.."

*lost in shukr tera*

JEEEZ that was insanely beautiful. No, not JUST the song, you! Sautan meri kabhi toh uske aage soch liya karo! I meant your writing... and the conversation... insanely beautiful. *sniff*

Grrr I finished! That songgg! I have changed songs three times (bg music in my mind!) during the entire duration of the update 🤣.. and yeah needless to mention they were all his songs.. hahahahaa. Ok soo.. let me fill in my own comments coz I was totally lost in the second chapter and only wrote the lines I liked hehe. Sooo... I am still coming after you with a stick coz you were worried so much!

Right ... so it all made sense... why he couldn't contact her... and his guilt. Damn... that part brought tears to my eyes.. of course u expected that didn't you? it was just too emotional... I was strangely reminded of "The best of me" by Nicholas Sparks.. just that part where he was about to be killed but wasn't. His mentor saved him... and Arjun couldn't save him... that part was emotional. I don't know how to express it... it tugged at something in my heart.

And then the way they both consoled each other even though both had gone through so much... I just cannot imagine what Arjun went through. Sakshi is right: how did he live with so much guilt? If it had been someone else, he would have crumbled down. You portrayed it well, sautan meri.. aur kya bolun? I am actually a bit emotional and speechless at the moment. But that won't stop my praises for this fic. Jo bhi kahoon kam hai... actually no words can do justice to the characters you have created and the emotions that you pen down so perfectly.

Like I said this was going to be an essay but hey, birthday hai! Itna toh haq banta hai!

Sooo where was I? No no don't say "HIM"!

Yeah so the way she starts trusting him once more... the way they start healing ❤️ Sigh! It's true, only they can truly understand and heal each other...

OH I also liked the part where he thought about Sakshi over Sakshi Anand.😳

And then of course the little coffee and omelette scene.. hehe that was so light-hearted it left a warm and fuzzy feeling in me. 😳😳

And then of course.. the end *sighhh* It was so beautiful. I have repeated that word beautiful so many times now... but anyway. It was. It really was. Deep husky baritone *shivers* You're evil sautanwa.. as if Shukr tera wasn't enough you had to add so much of heart-stopping hotwa moments into the update!☺️ Tomorrow people will think I'm engaged or something ... what with the new songs and this... DAMNN this comment is becoming 3 page long! *slaps self*

Back to wrapping up!

Hayeee and then of course the song.. their moment. THEIR MOMENT! I dieeeddd. I already pointed out the best lines... the last one was the best though! Ok, I should reaaally wrap up this comment.. it's become like a little update on its own. So what else did you expect?🤣🤣

Ok, sooo to wrap up... I'm waiting for the past to reveal! And of course... Arakshi 😳

This was totally totally a beautiful birthday update... goes into the best updates list! Don't think it could have been any better. No, wait... you'll surprise me with the next one! I take back my words.😆

Chalo! I hope u haven't dozed off reading my super large comment. I shall go to bed with "Flames" on my mind now he he he he.

Love youu for this update and of course the super amazing trailer! I just realised I said nothing about it.

I don't know how u do it... stay up SO late ... *bows* You know I admire the way you squeeze everything in between your hectic work schedule right? You're a superwoman. Period.

Ok, have a gooodmorning sautan meriii... Aaj shukr tera night hai! There's the new song too... oh no... which one? BOTH.

I was supposed to wrap up! Okay... waiting for the next one!🤗

res./unres for part A..

Reallly awsomeee update di...
Loveing ur way of potraying each emotion...
Just fantasticcc!!!!
So finalllyy saki outburst...lasty he want her to tryust him which she agreed!!!!
lets see what happen in past...

whoa i think that was the longest update I've ever read! :) Love love loved it, no wordsss! Please update soon !!! :D

Unres above...
Res for part B...

super se upar wala update

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