Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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IshaniSinghh

@IshaniSinghh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Awesome dear., I so love the way you describe the landscape, the weather. its so beautiful. Their emotions were very well portrayed.. Excited to know about Sakshi's secret job. Update soon.

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Awesome part...

aisa laga ke main bhi wahi kahi waadiyon mein hoom...I havent been to that place but ur description makes me wish to go there...

superbly written B2!

I can visualize it all...

So Sakshi has a big plan...wondering what it is and who her boss is? though I have my guesses, I will wait for u to reveal it...

Jay seems interesting!

So Aisha wants to get Arjun settled soon...and he is at the temple with her...nice!

ab Sakshi kahaan chupne waali hai...Arjun se bacch ke kahaan jaayegi!

u stopped at a very very crucial point...devilish B2

cont soon...

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome update...

Why u always put a full stop on my words for appreciating u?😡

Meaning...I m speechless again...😆😆😆

About the update...

👏👏👏

Liked Arakshi's POV...

Liked Aisha also...

Waiting for dhamaka...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Hellooo avni...sooo happy you updated...hope everything going on well now 😃 😃

Am sooo sorry like button not working*sighs* 😕 😕

Avni am a fan of your writing...you know that nah 😳 but in this story the way you describe everything soo beautifully makes me want to continue reading on and on ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Love the update wholly..do continue soon and thank you sooo much 😃 😃

Ps-yeh bhi poochne ki baat hain ji...ofcourse am soo kin to follow this story and see what twist and turns you planned for us 😉

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

res...
once i read will unres...

avantika..i will always love to read ur story...do write more...waiting to read further up coming updates also ...

Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautiful...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Awesome update dear...
Thanks for the pm...

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

awesome update...loved it
esp.the way u potrayed the mandir scene
cont. soon
thmx for pm

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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Superb update
Sakshi's phone conversation with Jay was great...so Sakshi is hiding something very big..this is interesting
Sakshi and her uncle talk was amazing
Arjun Aisha scene was nice...loved their bonding
the mandir scene was beautifully described
thanks for the pm...continue soon

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

I want to go to Dhanaulti

Chalo if not in reality,u gave me a virtual but a magical trip through the beautiful description of the hilly mountains with all foggy morning &...I should stop now warna Dhanaulti ki beauty description ko lekar I can go on &on &on😆

Back to the fic:

So saakshi is on a secret mission to prove her dad's loyalty for his country.I am glad that you brought in this track of her's trying to fight for clearing all the Charges on her dad.She, being a journalist in the past has given a logical track to this.The one helping her for the mission is a mystery for now.Sherlock Mode k liye point mil gaya😎I guess I enjoy pulling hairs in confusion😆😆

We have one more reason to be sure of our success then, Jay. They've sent one of their best to the rescue. Which means.."

This makes me conclude that she feels Arjun's involvement will help them in their mission but after our conversation on this one,I wonder wat exactly your devil mind is planning here

Mushkil Prem kahani making on the way😉

She befriended Aisha for her mission.I wonder wat this wil lead her in this.🤔

A hearty but painful conversation between Saakshi &her Uncle.Hiding one's identity &Starting a new life is sumthing unacceptable. Applaud her for thinking & asking him to clarify things first👍🏼😃

Dalia bhi kabhi tasty hota hai?😆😆But I loved RR glaring session.Bromance.

But then,amidst their difference in opinion,the Care doesn't go unnoticed.Gud that Rathod's better half does this caring for his buddy.He can't 'directly voice out his worry but ask her to help his best friend get settle in his life.

Aisha:A lady, straight to the point which is one reason for me to adorn her alot for this trait of her's.😃

Mandir scene brought in the images of the evenings of the Assi ghat in Varanasi.Evening filled with devotees &the blazing of their diya's all around.Imagine Saakshi-Arjun offering flowers lightning diya &praying together.

Delhi dur hai Farheen😆😆

They met again &he remembered her name.But wat was she doin in the woods?Distracting Arjun Rawte?😉