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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

Even if we i want i cant complaint for late update because the update u have given is simply outstanding and beautiful
u described everything so beautifully the whole valley forest and all the charecters sakshi arjun and ya even shree sam aisha and chotu
Will be just waiting for next chapter
thanks for pm 😊 🤗


Hey.. Lol.. I'm thankful about that.. 😆
Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far.. 🤗

Originally posted by: roshanay

You write beautifully... loved t:)


Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

You know Avni what I was feeling. ..
I know its too early to say this...
But I feeling ek movie banni chahiye iss story pe...
It was really like watching a movie..
I can see the tea stall..
I can see Sakshi to hesitate...
I can see her bindi..
I can see Arjun to open the door for her..
I donn if this feeling of mine is due to the detailing..
Or due to the way of your storytelling. ..
Respect you a lot Avantika...
I am still in trance..
An awesome piece of art is under creation stage...
Awesome chapter...
Their meeting was so beautiful..
it was like an usual smell of soil after first rain...
Waiting for next chapter...
Take care...


Hey Amrita.. 😃
Aww.. Movie?! Arre baap re.. Pehle mujhe likh toh lene do.. Who knows, sab joootey phenkenge.. 😆

Thank you soo much. Really appreciate all of it..


Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yas23

Awesome update
loved the start
so Sameer and Aisha are already married
Shree and Chotu scene was nice
Arjun joining the academy as the second in command
Arjun Sakshi meeting was amazing and cute
looking forward to the next part
thanks for pm
continue soon


Thanks dear.. Glad you like it.. 😃


Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update. Awesome.

Please do continue this story.eager to know how it unfolds


Thank you! 😃


Originally posted by: PoohLover

Hello ji..first of all hope you feeling much better 🤗

Coming to the update...thats was very interesting 😃 😃
I came to know about the places,i never heard of and i love it 😛 😛
Hmmm thats going to be very interesting to know how to person with the same goal will come together to achieve it,in their own way 😊 😊
Awesome update and superb precap...am actually eager to discover the other side of sakshi now that you mentioned 😳 😳
Thank you heaps for the update and pm avniii 🤗 🤗


Thanks so much.. 🤗
Yupp.. better now.. Still recuperating..
Oh! You have to visit it.. It's one of the most beautiful places in India.. 😳

Err.. I'm going to cheat.. 😛😆
More on the way!


Originally posted by: Swara85

Awesome update..
Sam and Aisha married..
Shree and Chotu's antics as always sweet..
And Arjun and Sakshi's meet was superb..loved that part..
Waiting for next part
cont soon.


Originally posted by: anu91

awesome and lovely update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting for next...
do cont soon...



Thanks!
More on the way!


Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritu_24

New FF yayayayayayayyy

That too by you Avantika!!! Yayyy
Ok, sorry for the super late reply to this! I had exams and then was super busy at work! Sooo just catching up with all updates 😳
What a brilliant prologue! I must say again, you literally can write a novel (in fact this would make a very good one😳) and get it published! Like really! And i m not just saying it
The beginning was beyond amaazing..loved how you introduced Sakshi and Arjun
I was literally at the station, waiting with Sakshi.. but feel so bad for her

Ditto here, my dear.. I've been soo busy and then sick with fever and migraine!
I'm sorry, will read your PM's soonish..
Thanks soo much! Oh god! a novel? wait until u read more.. A flying shoe might come my way.. 😆

Coming to the first chapter!
First of all - OMG have u been to Dhanaulti? I went there so many years ago..and it is beautiful! Its the first time i saw someone mentioning that place😃 MMM you transported me there, amongst the mountains and the pine trees😳

I have been.. It was an accidental trip.. And trust me, i can't get those scenic memories out of my head even today! It's soo serene and beautiful.. 😳

LOOOLLL Shree and Chotu's dialogues are hilarious hahaha😆😆
Aisha's entry was superbbb!! hahaha i can just imagine Chotu and Shree gobbling down the paranthas 😆😆😆
OMG your descriptions are so amaaazing
Sorry if the comment is getting a bit long. I m actually reading and writing at the same time lol

Oh I love them all! 😳 Thanks..

OH. MY. GOD.
Did you just say that was NOT an epic meet? Seriously? Did i hear that right?
That was the most amazing first meet i have ever read! I could literally feel the rain, hear the thunder (even though its not raining here - for a change lol😆)
And I could see the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes..like the most amazing movie ever!
Ahhh it was just amazing beyond amazing!
And the last few lines were just superbbb👏👏👏

Oh my! You're not too good for my bloating ego.. 😆😆
Jokes apart, thank you! I love the rains and I love Arakshi toh club kar ditta.. 😉

I dunno how you write so beautifully! Most of all, how come you didnt go into being a writer? You could have had a good many books published - honestly!

Eeesh.. It's just a hobby and some pagalpanti.. 😆 But yeah, I love reading.. And you my dear, are a fantastic writer yourself! 🤗

Anyway already bada wala comment ho gaya hehe
I absolutely loved it! And i shall be waiting for the next update whenever it is 😳
I shall be going to bed with the memory of their first meet
Thanks Avantika 🤗🤗🤗

P.S - I hope you are feeling better now! 🤗

Thanks soo very much! Glad you like it..

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolRD

ek to aise hi I ws waitng 4 u 2 upd8 dis stry nd wen u did I dint get d tym 2 read it..wat an irony!! really sry 4 dt 😔

nywyzz...
vry beautiful I mst say..
arjun ws really clse 2 sakshi's father.. dat ws y he ws so mch afctd by his death.. it's really ironical dt bth arjun nd sakshi hav d sme motive nd r fighting 4 d sme prsn d luv bt stil aren't aware of dis
wel each nd evry prt ws beautifully xplaind.. it ws suprb
waitng 4 u 2 continue 😊
thnx 4 d pm 🤗


Thanks dear.. yup, he was like a father figure to Arjun and hence the attachment.
Irony or destiny remains to be seen.. 😊
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

I am late. 😛Was stuck in Mussoorie & so you r responsible for this delay😆😆

Chalo, matlab lollipop ke saath saath Mussoorie darshan free.. 😆


Coming back to the story:

I am glad that we have the whole ETF team here.😃
Aisha-Sameer married.

Ofcourse pleasantry surprise.😉

Lol.. I needed them to stay together.. unfortunately, a police academy won't allow live-in's.. 😆
And I love Shreetu.. 😳


Coming to the leads:
Saakshi:I just adorn & love her here. I must applaud you for penning down here character so beautifully. 👍🏼She is sweet, sensible, brave not physically at least for now i can say that she came out of the tragic past, patient enough & more specifically a practical one. I am glad that she got a loving & a caring guardian beside her which is one of the reason for her to give life another chance & live it.😃

Arjun: Each & every trait of his that you have described gave me an image of THE ACP ARJUN RAWTE that we adorned when the show started. He is very much the same minus the baggage of guilt of the tragic death of his wife but with the same burning soul who is here to avenge his mentor's death.

Their meet was beautifully described with every minute detail that i could visualize each & every element in it.


Phew! chalo.. I'm soo glad u could connect to them..


I am looking forward to explore this story of how the two who accidently started their journey together will cross each other's path for the one purpose in their life & yes how can I forget MUSHKIL PREM KAHANI


Lol.. Kahani poori filmy hai.. 😳😆 Thank u soo much.. 🤗

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Heylo.. Yup.. Back with the next one.. Read and replied to your comments.. Thanks soo much..
I know it's in the initial stages and the plot is still a mystery but we shall get there in a few updates.. 😉

Again, I'm cheating coz I will be carrying forward the precap.. The update got too long!
And I hope you like it.. Looking forward to your suggestions, if any.. 😊


Chapter Two

Part A

He had made this journey countless number of times in the past. The deserted road through the mountains, empty spaces around, outlined by lush woods and a rare haunting silence, one wouldn't find in the city had always managed to soothe his nerves.

Arjun hated the rains for the mess that it would leave behind; puddles of water on the streets, jammed roads and outbreaks of water borne diseases was all it represented.

But that had changed, 8 years ago when he experienced the rains in Dhanaulti..

Thunderstorms lashing the mountain slopes with sheets of cool water, wild weeds with colourful flowers that seemed to appear all of a sudden and the wet mist in the air that was left behind after every dark night had replaced all unpleasant memories of downpour in the city.

All lingering traces of fatigue in his dark eyes had vanished the moment when light raindrops sneaked their way in through the half-open window and splashed against his face. It felt as if he was coming home.

A storm rumbled through the mountains, bringing along loud thunder, flashes of lightning and her favorite, silver raindrops. She stole a peek at the sloping hillside through the dense forest and breathed the scent of the wet earth.

She had always loved playing in the rain as a child. Ignoring her father's protests, she would often pull him along until he finally gave in and made her paper boats. Watching her boats sail on the little puddle of water in their garden, soaking wet in the rains until he would lift her and carry her back into the house had been her favorite pastime back then.

A tear drop fell from her eye mingling with the rainwater splashing on her face, disappearing before she could even feel it, just the way her father's memories always did.

Arjun loosened his grip on the steering wheel and looked at the girl sitting beside him.

Something about her was different. The slight smile curving at the corner of her lips seemed heartfelt and was reflecting on her face. She had a childlike innocence to her, he thought. But it was the vulnerability in her eyes that held his gaze captive for a few seconds each time he happened to glance at her.

He watched her for a couple of minutes and couldn't stop the amused grin forming on his face.

"Tumhe baarish itni pasand hai?", he asked.

Sakshi turned her outstretched palm upside down and the water gathered in her palm trickled down. She turned to him and shook her head, "Kuch khaas nahi."

The calmness he had witnessed in her eyes was gone and was instead replaced by a haunted look. Arjun wondered what it was about.

"Yeh kaunsa raasta hai? Main yahan se pehle kabhi nahi guzri..", she exclaimed looking at the unfamiliar terrain.

"Shortcut hai. Seedhe Mandir ke paas wali sadak se jaakar milta hai.", he said manoeuvring the jeep expertly.

Sakshi nodded and found herself turning to him once again.

Something about him looked very familiar. She had seen those piercing eyes and the hard set jaw several times, but now she couldn't remember when and where.

He had taken off the wet raincoat and placed it on the backseat. He wore a plain black hoodie, a pair of faded jeans and a black sports watch and his soft hair falling over his forehead made him look very casual. She couldn't help but feel a growing attraction to his steely eyes, which held an unimaginable depth in them.

"Aap yahan naye hain?", she asked out of curiosity.

He looked at her for a moment before focussing on the road ahead. Arjun didn't have an answer to that, but ACP Arjun did.

"Haan. Academy mein posting hui hai.", he answered with a straight face.

She gave him a confused look wondering how he was familiar with the terrain if he was indeed new to the place.

When he didn't respond to her curiosity, she ignored it and thought back upon what he said.

The Police Academy.. Her heart missed a beat at that. Today, six years later, Sakshi still froze at the mere mention of the Academy. Her father had spent the last few years of his service at the Police Academy here. She had heard several stories of the prestigious institution, its honour, his cadets and their achievements, but had never visited the place while he was posted there.

Irony, that now she had to return to the same place where it had all ended and perhaps also started, to make a new beginning and restore her dead father's honour.

Sakshi snapped out when the jeep came to a screeching halt. She looked up and realised they had reached the temple. She rubbed her palms and peeped out of the window as the warmth settled in. The rain had stopped by then.

She turned towards him and smiled, "Aage main akele chali jaungi. Yahan tak pohonchane ke liye, dhanyavaad."

He looked at her and then rolled the glasses down. His alert eyes quickly scanned the deserted area. The road ahead was forked; one led to the Police Academy on the other side of the river across the bridge, while the other trailed into the peaceful village.

"Main ghar tak chod deta hoon. Kaafi raat ho gayi hai." he replied.

Sakshi shook her head and smiled slightly, "Nahi nahi. Aapko pareshaani hogi. Waise bhi humare raaste alag hain. Ab aage main khud chali jaungi."

When he didn't look convinced and still sported a concerned look, she spoke, "Mujhe aadat hai." and took out a torch from her bag.

Arjun finally gave in and nodded, "Jaisa tum theek samjho."

She got down from the jeep, fixed her dupatta over her shoulders and looked at the deserted road leading towards her house. He didn't miss the slight fear in her eyes as she glanced at the river flowing behind the temple.

His sharp instincts immediately kicked into action and he began observing her intently. The way her fingers twisted and untwisted the ends of her dupatta gave him an idea that she was probably nervous of walking it up in the dark.

His observant eyes were once again scanning the area. He glanced at the bridge which would lead him towards the Academy and then back at her. He wondered if it would be too much of probing into her private space if he offered to drop her home again.

Little did he know that she wasn't as brave as she pretended to be..

Sakshi had been on several dangerous assignments, during her internship and later while working as a crime journalist as well. Her inquisitiveness, which came naturally to her and the dare-devil attitude which was required of an investigative crime reporter had often landed her in tricky situations. But, she had always found a way out.

But tonight was different.. It wasn't the deserted road that scared her; it was the darkness that had engulfed the valley. As a child, she had always been scared of the dark ever since her mother's death. Even today, she left a lantern burning all night while she slept.

Besides, she needed him to stay away from her and her house. Though he was a stranger and came across as a helpful and decent guy, he was a cop. And Sakshi did not want to risk her true identity, no matter what.

Gathering her courage, she lifted her lashes and looked at him, "Mujhe chalna chahiye."

Arjun blinked his eyes, nodded slightly and held out his hand, "ACP Rawte."

Sakshi looked at him and felt it again. She had heard the name before.

He watched her forehead crease and wondered what had gotten her thinking.

Brushing aside her doubts, she looked at him and then at his hand, before slipping hers into his, "Sakshi."

Her name sounded beautiful and something about the way she said it, made him want to know more about her.

Despite the cool air seeping into her skin, his touch was surprisingly firm and as warm as his demeanour.

Her cheeks flushed and she tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear when she realised that he wasn't loosening his hold on her hand. Though that action of his should have made her nervous, coming from a stranger, yet for some reason all she could feel was the colour rising in her cheeks.

The sound of rustling leaves alarmed him and he quickly let go of her hand, stepping back.

Sakshi returned his gesture with a barely there smile and turned around to walk away. She looked back twice after walking a few steps and saw him standing there, fixed to the spot with his arms crossed across his chest.

It didn't take her long to realise that he was trying his best to make sure that she would reach home safely, even if it meant only keeping an eye on her.

She ignored the tiny voice in her head which kept nudging her. She wanted to tell him to leave and that she would be fine.

Just then she heard him sneeze. Once. Twice. And thrice. She couldn't help but turn around and look back at him.

He saw her turn around and was almost prepared to step forward when he saw her point towards something. His eyes followed her pointed finger and landed on the jacket lying on the seat.

He had just opened his mouth to speak when she beat him to it, "Raat ke waqt yahan kaafi thand rehti hai. Aur aaj baarish bhi hui hai. Toh.."

Though it was a seemingly simple gesture, it felt good coming from her. He was confused by the way it sounded in his head but then brushed it aside quickly.

She saw him pick up the jacket and wear it. He nodded as he pulled the zipper at the front and looked at her. It seemed as though she wanted to say something more but was hesitating.

Arjun stepped forward sensing her confusion and turned the ignition off. In a few steps he was beside her and waved a palm as if asking her to walk and guide the way.

She didn't know what made her do it, but she did. Sakshi began walking towards the village with him by her side, but didn't look at him even once. She mentally smacked herself for harbouring her fear of darkness till date. It had always landed her in embarrassing situations.

Arjun gave her a sidelong glance and saw her biting her lips and muttering to herself. He couldn't help but let out a soft chuckle at the sight. Pagal ladki.

Sakshi saw him chuckle from the corner of her eyes but pretended to ignore it. She looked around and figured, she wasn't even looking where she was going. He seemed to know the way very well and was taking her through a muddy road, which was a shorter way to get into the village.

She couldn't help but wonder as to why he had lied about him being new to the place.

They walked past the first few houses without having said a word. Suddenly, she turned on her heel and looked at him, tucking a few strands of hair behind her ear, "Thank you, ACP Rawte. Mera ghar bass yahi hai. Main aage chali jaungi."

Arjun shot her a confused look. But before he could ask her anything further, she gave him a parting smile and turned around to walk away.

Sakshi figured that must have sounded a bit ungrateful and so looked back over her shoulder. He hadn't moved an inch.

But she didn't want him to be seen with her. The village they lived in was a small community. A girl arriving home with a stranger late in the night would set a few tongues wagging. Though Sakshi and her uncle was used to her being in the company of men while at work, she knew it would upset him if he heard any gossips related to her.

Sakshi looked back at him once more and motioned him to leave with a slight nod of head. And this time she walked away, without looking back but thanking the officer silently once again.

Arjun stood with hands in his pockets and saw her step into a narrow lane.

A minute later, when she could no longer be seen, he walked back to the jeep and drove towards the Academy.


MORE ON Pg. 18>>>


Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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For me too please😊

*Edited*


Hey behna, just read your replied to the previous comment and now you have me really curious, looks like I am going to have to pester you to work on this one quicker also.😆


Anyway...Yes I am feeling much better thank you, and yep I know how it can get with migraines too, and hope all is well with you now.

Okay to the update...

The drive in the rain and its aftermath..sounds so romantic, but for Arjun and Sakshi it was much more. It brought them their favorite memories. Awe..I really felt for Sakshi the most at this point.

Yeah Arjun and Sakshi has both lost the one person they loved the most in the world perhaps..but I feel Sakshi's loss is so much greater, yet Arjun is no less either.

The scene was beautifully described and that is what I love the most about your stories. You instantly feel as though everything is happening right in front of your eyes.

This was a great start to what is to come of their relationship later, I am sure it will not be as smooth as this first introduction but with this you have set the connection between them, a silent bond/attraction that neither has realized yet.

It seems they have both heard of each other, but can't remember where, I wonder what it will take for things to click into place for them. Can't wait for more from this front and their next meet.😛

Aha..I am already loving this Ayesha of yours, not that I haven't always loved her but this one is definitely my favorite version.😉

So she is not only a friend to Arjun and wife to Sameer, it seems she keeps the two friend connected also.

So the team was estranged after Arjun lost his mentor. It seems the loss has made Arjun angry and stubborn too and that doesn't seat well with the straight laced, by the book Sameer Rathore, yet he can't kick his friend out of his life completely either.

Now once again they are all together and I hope they are successful in proving Arjun and Sameer's mentor and Sakshi's father innocent.

Yes this part was absolutely necessary, now we know how things will progress.

As I have already said, I am loving this story, its different and gripping so please don't make us wait long and update soon.

As always loved the update.🤗


Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Sorry for being late di..Was caught up in some work..

I'm loving this new version of whole of our beloved ETF team..They are different yet the same..

Arjun is the same as in the show but what I liked more is that here he has group of friends which are more like his family and he is not refusing this fact. He knows they love him as much he love them. And will always back him in the time of needs.
I'm so happy to see Sameer Rathore back in action..ohh god, yeh dono, Arjun and Sameer, kabhi bina fight ki sath reh sakte hWaise I'm not complaining, aapko toh pata h I love their Bromance too much😉
So Sameer ne khud aapne best friend ko yahan indirectly bulaya h..uff, Yeh Nafrat pass aane na de..Mohabbat door jaane na de..Iss pyaar ko mein kya naam dun😆😆

Jokes apart, so the reason behind their conflict is because one believes in
evidences and witnesses that were against their mentor while other, true to his nature, thinks kuch toh choot raha h and will do anything to bring back the honor of his mentor..
Ahaa...Aisha Sameer Rathore😃 and I love you for this❤️ I'm sure she'll not only help Arjun and Sameer to keep their calm in tough situations but will also keep them connected..
I just love Sakshi here...She is mature, sweet and sensible..Just the way I always wanted to see her in the show..Her equation with her uncle is very sweet..I'm happy to know that she had him beside her in those tough times.

So they met..I loved the whole jeep scene and their little conversation...So they both are already intrigued to know more about each other, unknowingly. I guess they both have heard about each other from the only link that connects both..

All in all great start di..You described each and every scene very beautifully..👏
And I'm already to hooked to this storyand can't wait to read more...Please update soonish..😃

Thanks for the PM!

Edited by -Rajvi- - 11 years ago

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