Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

You know Avni what I was feeling. ..
I know its too early to say this...
But I feeling ek movie banni chahiye iss story pe...
It was really like watching a movie..
I can see the tea stall..
I can see Sakshi to hesitate...
I can see her bindi..
I can see Arjun to open the door for her..
I donn if this feeling of mine is due to the detailing..
Or due to the way of your storytelling. ..
Respect you a lot Avantika...
I am still in trance..
An awesome piece of art is under creation stage...
Awesome chapter...
Their meeting was so beautiful..
it was like an usual smell of soil after first rain...
Waiting for next chapter...
Take care...

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Awesome update
loved the start
so Sameer and Aisha are already married
Shree and Chotu scene was nice
Arjun joining the academy as the second in command
Arjun Sakshi meeting was amazing and cute
looking forward to the next part
thanks for pm
continue soon

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Wonderful Update. Awesome.

Please do continue this story.eager to know how it unfolds

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Hello ji..first of all hope you feeling much better 🤗

Coming to the update...thats was very interesting 😃 😃

I came to know about the places,i never heard of and i love it 😛 😛

Hmmm thats going to be very interesting to know how to person with the same goal will come together to achieve it,in their own way 😊 😊

Awesome update and superb precap...am actually eager to discover the other side of sakshi now that you mentioned 😳 😳

Thank you heaps for the update and pm avniii 🤗 🤗

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

I am late. 😛Was stuck in Mussoorie & so you r responsible for this delay😆😆

Coming back to the story:

I am glad that we have the whole ETF team here.😃
Aisha-Sameer married.

Ofcourse pleasantry surprise.😉
Coming to the leads:
Saakshi:I just adorn & love her here. I must applaud you for penning down here character so beautifully. 👍🏼She is sweet, sensible, brave not physically at least for now i can say that she came out of the tragic past, patient enough & more specifically a practical one. I am glad that she got a loving & a caring guardian beside her which is one of the reason for her to give life another chance & live it.😃

Arjun: Each & every trait of his that you have described gave me an image of THE ACP ARJUN RAWTE that we adorned when the show started. He is very much the same minus the baggage of guilt of the tragic death of his wife but with the same burning soul who is here to avenge his mentor's death.

Their meet was beautifully described with every minute detail that i could visualize each & every element in it.

I am looking forward to explore this story of how the two who accidently started their journey together will cross each other's path for the one purpose in their life & yes how can I forget MUSHKIL PREM KAHANI

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Awesome update..
Sam and Aisha married..
Shree and Chotu's antics as always sweet..
And Arjun and Sakshi's meet was superb..loved that part..
Waiting for next part
cont soon.

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

awesome and lovely update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting for next...

do cont soon...

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

New FF yayayayayayayyy

That too by you Avantika!!! Yayyy

Ok, sorry for the super late reply to this! I had exams and then was super busy at work! Sooo just catching up with all updates 😳

What a brilliant prologue! I must say again, you literally can write a novel (in fact this would make a very good one😳) and get it published! Like really! And i m not just saying it

The beginning was beyond amaazing..loved how you introduced Sakshi and Arjun

I was literally at the station, waiting with Sakshi.. but feel so bad for her

Coming to the first chapter!

First of all - OMG have u been to Dhanaulti? I went there so many years ago..and it is beautiful! Its the first time i saw someone mentioning that place😃 MMM you transported me there, amongst the mountains and the pine trees😳

LOOOLLL Shree and Chotu's dialogues are hilarious hahaha😆😆

Aisha's entry was superbbb!! hahaha i can just imagine Chotu and Shree gobbling down the paranthas 😆😆😆

OMG your descriptions are so amaaazing

Sorry if the comment is getting a bit long. I m actually reading and writing at the same time lol

OH. MY. GOD.

Did you just say that was NOT an epic meet? Seriously? Did i hear that right?

That was the most amazing first meet i have ever read! I could literally feel the rain, hear the thunder (even though its not raining here - for a change lol😆)

And I could see the whole scene playing out in front of my eyes..like the most amazing movie ever!

Ahhh it was just amazing beyond amazing!

And the last few lines were just superbbb👏👏👏

I dunno how you write so beautifully! Most of all, how come you didnt go into being a writer? You could have had a good many books published - honestly!

Anyway already bada wala comment ho gaya hehe

I absolutely loved it! And i shall be waiting for the next update whenever it is 😳

I shall be going to bed with the memory of their first meet

Thanks Avantika 🤗🤗🤗

P.S - I hope you are feeling better now! 🤗

Edited by ritu_24 - 11 years ago

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

ek to aise hi I ws waitng 4 u 2 upd8 dis stry nd wen u did I dint get d tym 2 read it..wat an irony!! really sry 4 dt 😔

nywyzz...

vry beautiful I mst say..

arjun ws really clse 2 sakshi's father.. dat ws y he ws so mch afctd by his death.. it's really ironical dt bth arjun nd sakshi hav d sme motive nd r fighting 4 d sme prsn d luv bt stil aren't aware of dis

wel each nd evry prt ws beautifully xplaind.. it ws suprb

waitng 4 u 2 continue 😊

thnx 4 d pm 🤗