Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 11

amazing update.

Yea, I had guessed it before.Both Arjun and Sakshi are set out for the same purpose.They both have the same goal and determination unknown to themselves.
Their first meet was well written and interesting too.
Great start.
Loved it:)
Thanks for the PM.

Okay

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

*Edited*

I am finally here behna, I may not be able to say much as my brain still hasn't recovered from the bout of flu so please excuse me if I don't make sense at times.


So Sakshi left everything behind after her father's death not only because she needed to but this is the place where she would be able to find the answers to her father's death and his tarnished name.

It must have taken lot of strength and courage for her to do what she did. I am glad she still has her mamaji, at least one relative she can count on.

I loved her playful interaction with the little girl, that was sweet and it would exactly how I picture Sakshi.

The moment between Chotu and Shree is always heartwarming, I could picture the whole scene including their expression from you description of the scene and their conversation.

And surprise, surprise...Ayesha is already Mrs. Rathore in this one, I loved it. So she quit being a cop to be a house wife, again not hard to picture, in fact I think I would have expected this. Thanks behna for bringing her in, I was worried you might leave her out of this one.

When you mentioned Arjun without the past, I wondered how you would bring about his back story, but I shouldn't have been surprised.

He must have been really close to his mentor for him to be affected like this after his death and dismantled reputation.

Both Arjun and Sakshi have a motive to be in the place where they are, unknown to each other they are both looking for the same thing, I wonder what it will take for them to realize.

So finally they meet, and it seems this first meet is going to take them the long way.

Really loved the update, you revealed so much in this one, and now we have the back stories of each character, I am looking forward to this one behna. Please don't make us wait long.

So sorry for this short comment, will try to do better next time.

Originally posted by: rinku95

Awesome thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Awesome start!!

Love ur style of writing!!

Thnx 4 d pm!!

Extremely Sorry about nt commenting on ur other stories bt will soon catch up on them and start commenting regularly again!!

Originally posted by: shreya09

amazing start

no meeting would have been better than this

beautiful writing

superb 👏 👏

waiting for more 😳

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Brilliant update...

Nice start...kuch kuch samajh aagaya...

Sameer and Aisha already married...and Arjun joining the academy as second in command...

Looks like a big under cover operation to find out the truth...loving it already...super interesting

and loved the Arjun-Sakshi meet...Sakshi is so cute and Arjun sweet bhi hai...awesome combo!

cont soon

Originally posted by: life93

hi avani di🤗

hmmm...haye ! barsih hai . cutting chai, . aur acp and sakshi ...😉 humein aur kya chahiye😉😆...

mausam bhi hai suhana ...aur kuch na ho what the 😆 u know the song khushi used to sing tease arnav😆...

well finaly they met ...mulaqat toh ho gayi now as they have a mission head jaldi se kuch kuch karwao na😉...

precap sounds too interesting!

update soon di ...when you are updating LADY IN RED ?

Originally posted by: kunchu

who said the meet was not epic

IT IS!!!

the first part was very smooth going through some of the changes in Sakshi's life.

Even Sree, Chotu Sameer and Aisha

then came his entry

the rain, teastalll and meet scene was just picture perfect my dear.loved it to the bits

waiting eagerly for next part

come back soon