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Will edit this later, just finished reading the whole update, even the PM part, it is fantastic, truly no words.
Loved, loved it all.đ¤ I will have to read it again for sure, to clearly write my comments.
I am back!
Okay, I don't know if you have realized this but the conversation we had long ago about Rosy and Arjun's respective strengths come to mind when I read this update.
You always worried that Rosy appeared stronger than Arjun and I assured you that somewhere down the line Arjun will be just as strong as Rosy is and that time has arrived behna.
But there was a never a doubt that he was strong, if he wasn't then he wouldn't have walked away from her just because she asked him to. And that strength in him came from their years of friendship and bond between them.
It must have killed him to walk away from her at the most crucial phase of their lives but he did because that is what she had wanted it.
I am not blaming Rosy for asking him to leave, she thought he was in love with her best friend and she didn't want to get in the way of that because of whatever happened between her and Arjun. She also had other insecurities and obligations that prevented her from tying him down to her.
Hope that made sense, in other words what I am trying to say is both Arjun and Rosy's POV in this update clears so many things yet it also leaves many questions in mind, which I won't post her.đ
Hmm..so Rahtore has the confirmation he had been seeking but he is still reluctant to share what he has found out.
Has he planted a seed of doubt in Arjun's head yet? I am sure once Arjun's starts questioning things he will realize where Rathore was leading him. I think we should all brace ourselves for your next revelation.đ
Once outside his room, he clenched his eyes tight for a moment and mumbled, "I wish I was there, Rathore. I wish I hadn't left."Aha, he is going to remember this words to himself soon and will repeat them too I am sure about this.
Ufff...Mario and his inability to keep his hands off Rosy...seriously the man gives me the creeps and its no wonder Rosy is repulsed by him, just reading about him disgusts me.
Does he not know any other way to seduce a lady? This is the second time he spikes her drink in hopes of getting to her? But then Rosy is a smart lady, she would not fall into his trap with his cheap tricks.
But I think that he has also reached a limit and you are about to give us some dhamakedaar episodes I am sure, so bring them on I am ready for them.đ
A drunk Rosy, now that I enjoyed the most. It was funny the way she kept thinking she was talking to Karan and not Arjun himself, and I am surprised Arjun was amused by it rather than irritated, but then again he has just been reintroduced to his Miss A and her antics so of course he would be amused.đ
And finally the moment on the beach, Rosy's pain, Arjun's frustration at not being able to fix what is ailing her was beautifully written behna.
Finally Rosy finds peace in his arms, if only he knew how much she had needed him when she lost all that was precious to her, I hope he continues to be there in her time of need because he is the only one who can bring that peace in her life.
Loved, loved the update behna, please, please update soon.đ¤
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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