Ariya FF : Ajeeb Dastan. CHAPTER 21 UPDATED 21/02/15 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi JO
This story is UNIQUE 😃
Because this story is not only about RIYA ,this story about every girls about US 😃 how they face their problems in their personal life and professional life as well 😊 We are surrounded by insecurity and competition,we are losing our innocence and don't know whom to trust 😭
Sometime i look around i only find enemy ,competitor ,its hard to find a real friend 😭 in this days 😭
Its really good to know that RIYA have friends like AMBI ,SID 😃
I also believe that everything happens for good reason😳
AMIT is not worthy to have RIYA 😡 in his life 😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

chap 5 and 6


superbly described update...hats off to your writing skills jo...loved it...👏

first the journey..

naby...i am doubtful about her...does she re enter in the story??😕

or its only for one scene?

i loved the character matty...the man josh.. i first thought him to be arjun...

but now i know its the lord...riya nehi sudregi...she splashed him right??😆

that was an excellent conversation...not revealing yet somewhere asking you to guess...

loved it...now looking for the next part...😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
chap seven

the best chap so far...👏👏👏

lots of things get included here...but before going into it...i loved josh..he is tempting and delicious..😳😳

about the dress...elegant...thats what came to my mind...

now about the update...

i am doubtful about jo..incase you planning a triangle(i am not sure though) but it wont be bad...the delicious chest is quite interesting to watch and read...😉

loved his attachment with riya...nd riya the devil inside of her,..😆😆

then the pub..i expected it to be josh though but it was well written...

rose...mother of the lord..isnt??

work proposal..thats how you connect them...

finally riya again passes out...🤣🤣🤣

continue soon...thanks for the pms...

and a sincere apology for being so so so late...sowwy...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
So many updates n I didn't even know😲🥺 glad I saw the pm thread.. warna meko pta hi ni lgta...
Just read all the parts..
Superb work once again yar...
Loved every chapter...
That keira😡 bitch .. everything's happening coz of her.. first took her presentation n then amit... n I so wanna kill amit 😡 cheating on rii n then had the guts to ask her to forgive him... glad she has her friends with her..
aahan new journey for riya... the place sounds beautiful from all that description. ..
Lol aate hi pange bhi ho gye.. mr logan or whoever he is... sounds interesting. ... angry young men... is he arjun??? Their scenes were dhamekedar..
Abd josh.. he fultu lattu on rii...loved their interactions...
The pictures are awesome. ..
Qoah now wat deal does rose has for rii...
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWW update hogaya aur mero ko pm bhi nahi kiya nah 😭
meine thread mei apna naam diya tha yaar 😔
pliz next time mujhe bhulnah nahi
anyways coming to the update
it was aosum as always .
riyas fiasco lol
josh inviting riya to the pub with him
and riya meeting rose MADAM lol
wow hearing her story they were sad fro her and say what ! riya got a working rpoposal from mrs rose wow lucky her .
lets see yeh karti kiya hai
update next wala soon and dont forget to pm me this time acha
i will b waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jo darling! What an update. I am sorry I am so late to comment. Life is getting hectic! But it's okay...
It's worth it.

Coming to the update. Man that was an intense one. Seriously...I mean a lot of new things happened in this one and it left me with lots of questions. Now one striking thing in this update was Josh. Dude aren't you moving with the speed of light (that was sarcastic) 😛 Such intimate moments between him and Riya. And dude you read my mind again! I was totally imagining Alex pettyfer as Josh. You have talent gurl 😆

Hmmm...Now this "Mr.Logan" aka Arjun As I 99.9999% SURE, (Baki ka 1% tum confirm kardena 😆) has a lot of effect on Riya only in their first..or is it second meeting. So much that Riya's heart is running marathon. *wink* Start of something new...it feels so right to be here with you. Sorry that was the high school musical touch...can't help it...I am a teenager! 😆

And Fluffy...he is definitely not a poodle...and that picture is sooo damn adorable and cute! It made me awww for like a whole 5 minuted lol...I love puppies! They are adorable. Plus meri Fluffy ke saath advance setting hai na! haha! 😆 Oh lord...he is left with Patrick 😕...errr not the best idea but...oh well.

Oh...another lie...about the ring...I am surprised she is still wearing it though. But I gotta say...it was a pretty decent cover up...I I am impresseddd! just like mATTIE !😉

God I love how Riya blushes every time Josh does something...well most of the time! So adorable. It was a treat to read their little outing to the city! Cornwell indeed is beautiful! Heheh! Josh is such a gentleman. How nice! 😳

And Ah that song from Coldplay...It was just the perfect fit for the situation Riya was in. I mean...she is right something are just meant to happen they way they do. It is for the best after all.

Wow! Now Patrick and Fluffy bonding was surprising! 😲😆 But It made me smile hehe! And Awww! Josh...also likes Fluffy. How cuweeeteee! But from cradling Fluffy it went to Josh would make a good father! Wow...it is moving faster than the speed of lighttt! 😳 FYi...for future references Speed= Distance/time. Just in case...the speed gets out of control Lol! 😆

Now...Riya's dress was really pretty. I could just imagine her in it. Nice choice Jo!

Aha...new entry...Rosaline aka Rose. Now she definitely sounds like a posh lady alright. Hmm...now drinking with Rose...was...kinda a good idea for Riya...well at least she didm;t lie this time well maybe she didm;t tell the whole truth but,...it's okay. Everything does happen for a good reason. like the business proposal Rose put forward. I mean...I would have been hesitant If I was in her place but...then again everything happens for a good reason.

Hailaaa...she lives with her son in the mansionnn...Hawww! 😲 Now Is Mr.Loagan her son! Omg omg!!! More exitementtt!

Poor Riya...she really can;t handle drinks any which way. Oh lORD...her hangover is gonna hurt! Oh well! Good luck Ri!
😆

Now this was a greaaattt update...Again Beyond perfection JoJO!
loVE YOU LOADS!!! 🤗

Update sooonnn
and thanks for the pm! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update josh is getting attract toward
riya and riya say half truth to mrs.rose
and matty so whether she will accept
business proposal let see and when
u will make arjun entry update
soon


thank you dear. I have brought Arjun in the past two updates... very soon they will meet again. But this time more dialogues between them. Stay tuned.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madmadona

awesome update
loved it
cont soon

thank you dear Madmadona.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madmadona

awesome update
loved it
cont soon


thank you dear. Stay tuned.. NEXT update will be Up shortly.😃

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